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Posted: 6 years ago
Now this interesting
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice teaser and geet facing reality waiting
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Posted: 6 years ago
Maan in hospital
Now Geet have to face others more hate
All I can say she deserve it
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome teaser...
Waiting for your update...
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Posted: 6 years ago
wow geet deserved those slaps
she still living in dreams
feeling so high that maan cheated her and blah blah balh
even she didnt trust her parents words
uff maan met accident hope he is fine
savitri and maan parents blaming eachother
uff still geet thinks this all game
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice teasser.. . Waiting for updatr. Plz plz update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice teaser finally koi toh hai jo geet se baat kar raha hai n uske dimag main kuch daalne ki koshish kar raha hai
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Posted: 6 years ago
Chapter 20

Nxt day ...



Maan open his eyes only to find himself in hospital . He hold his head in pain when he found out that his whole family was present their except his wife.
R- Maan are you fine?
Ram asked worried and janki caresses his forehead. Savitri & yash was sitting by his side looking at him worried.
M- i'm fine.
S- is this a way maan?
Savitri scold him for his carelessness.
M- sorry
R- maa let it go first let him be back home .
Savitri nodded her head in understanding. But janki said nothing she just sat beside him caressing his forehead. That didn't went unnoticed by Ram as well as maan.
R- maan you should take rest beta.
I'll go & check when we get back home.
...

Geet sat on her bed not believing actually what her father said about maan!.
He never knew she was forced?
How is it possible?
That's when janki mother (Rohini )enter in her room. Geet was astonished to see her their as she hardly intrect with the old lady.
Rohini come and sat beside her while passing a plate toward her.
R- have this.
You must be hungry by now.
G- I I don't want this.
R- you need to. In this condition it's not good to stay hungry.
Geet look at her angrily.
G- That's WHY YOU ARE HERE? FOR CHILDREN?
R- calm down geet.
G- why? Your grandchildren cheated me.
Rohini get up listening to her
R- why?
Geet look at him frowned
R- why he need to force you in marriage?
What is so special in you? That my grandson force you in this marriage?
Geet look at her astonished
R- will you explain me?
Did he ever force you for anything?
For intimacy?
Just tell me if he did and i'll myself send him to jail.
Did he geet?
Geet gulped her saliva while nodding in a no
G- b but I I send a letter to him thhat I I don't want to marry
R- ok fine
So did he got letter?
G- he must be
R- are you sure? Because yesterday your father told you that he hide those letters.
G- he was lying. He knew it I don't want to marry but still he married me to him.
R- for once let me agree with you. That maan knew you don't want to marry but then why he is ready to divorce you?
Geet look at her frowned
G- he want me and now he is fed up of me!
R- tum koi hoor ki pari ho?
You admitted just now that he never forved you.
Did he ever come close to you after that agreement?
Geet nodding in no as now her fear increasing more & more that she is going to prove wrong.
R- THEN HOW COULD YOU BLAME MY GRANDSON FOR SOMETHING LIKE THIS?
She raised her voice now feeling angry at this stupid girl.
G- I don't want to marry.
I I was f ff forced to marry him.
R- then what was his fault in this?
And why you didn't want to marry? Do you ever told him this?
G- I I waan want to study.
R- did he denied?

Geet stay silent
R- ANSWER ME!
G- I I nn nev er ask eed
R- janki told me once that maan want you to study.
G- she give me form.
But it was his trick as I was carrying twins..
R- ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING YOUR OWN LOGICS?
HOW STUPID THEY ARE?
Rohini held her hand dragging her toward his study

R- look here at the walls.
Causing her to look at walls and soon a gasp left her lips.
His whole study was telling story of his achievement. Hundreds of achievements in sports, education and business.
Wait
MSK?
R- HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT HE IS AN ORPHAN?
HE HAS A FAMILY.
A MOTHER & FATHER WHO LOVE HIM MORE THAN ANYTHING .
He is Asia's most successful businessman and you said that he want you?
Just one wish and any girl is dying to marry him. You ARE NOW SO SPECIAL THAT HE NEEDS TO FORCE YOU!
Now even this he own a famous fashion house and who are you?
What is your identity ?
He saved you otherwise I come to know your grandfather was going to marry you to a man in his 50's ?

R- come out of your Dreamland!
I don't know how come janki made a mistake in choosing you when even she take care that he wear best clothes. Geet look downward as the realization drawn on her.

She turns to leave as now she know that she is no more going to harm babies.

R- you know what he is not an orphan but now you are!
He has his family standing beside him but you are alone here. Even your parents left you.
And I know one thing very well you are not going to get forgiveness from anyone here. Even I can't forgive for humiliating my grandson like this.

...


Yash support maan as he enter inside mention only to be welcomed by janki parents. Who hug him and placed a kiss on his forehead.
R- you scared us do you realize that?
M- sorry nani.
R- it's fine now come.
..
Janki took maan to their room & made him rest on bed. Soon she order nakul to prepare something healthy for him.
M- maa
He stopped janki but she just place a kiss on his forehead.
J- stay here maan and i'm coming back in few minutes.
M- are you angry with me?
I i'm sorry
I d don't w
J- no I'm not angry with you .
Ram look at janki and then toward maan.
Ra- we will talk about all this later on. Just let take him rest.
All nodded and left to let him rest peacefully.

..
Janki call nakul
J- you shift all the things of maan in upper master bedroom.
N- geet bahu
J- no let her stay in that room & shift maan study upstairs beside our room .
S- janki
J- maa I don't want him to bear anything more.
We made a mistake and his life got ruined now he is free from this marriage.
I'm soon going to call lawyer.
Savitri nodded in yes but stopped janki for a minute
S- janki
J- ji maa
S- talk to maan beta . You know how restless he get when you stop talking with him.
j- aisa nhi h
S- i'm a mother beta & I know when my children lie to me.
I know you are not angry with him as he did what any sensible man do in place of him. But you are disappointed that he hide it from you.

Janki look downward
S- janki
Savitri take a long breath and come toward janki caressing her forehead.
S- you didn't failed.
It's just he didn't want to hurt you at all.
He just didn't want you to get worried and blame yourself. He want you to be happy.
J- so was I maa.
I'm his mother didn't I ?
Or I did failed that he can't share his pain with his parents.
I did failed somewhere maa.
S- it's not like that.
J- nhi maa It's only because of me he is now in th
R- stop blaming yourself janki.
This time Rohini stopped her.
R- you were not at fault so stop talking nonsense.
HE IS YOUR SON.
Do you remember you told me this when we denied you to have any relationship with him when we come to know about him.
J- maa
R- try to understand beta . He just didn't want to hurt you like you don't want to see him sad ever. It's just his love for you nothing more .
S- that's what I want to make you understand.
He is your son & no one take him away from you. Not even his biological parents.

Janki look at her stunned.
S- orphanage head told me last night .
No one can take him away from you both. He loves you both a way too much to live a day without you both. So just calm down and now go & talk to him.

Janki nodded finally understanding and soon she run toward her room, where maan was resting.

...

On other side

Geet hide her face in her palm as she realized he was not at fault.
G- he never knew?

Her hands start shivering and her Palm turned sweaty.
G- was I wrong?
As her words come back to her
I'M NOT A FOOL TO BELIEVE YOU. YOU ARE SAYING THIS SO THAT I WON'T ABORT YOUR BURDEN. BUT YOU LISTEN TO ME CAREFULLY YOU CAN'T SNATCH MY INDEPENDENCE LIKE THIS.
WHO ARE YOU HAA?
WHAT'S YOUR IDENTITY? YOU ARE A MAN WHO DON'T EVEN HAVE BACKBONE. YOUR MOTHER TOLD ME THAT YOU ARE WORKING IN YOUR DAD SO CALLED COMPANY.
TILL NOW HAVE YOU ACHIEVE ANYTHING BY YOURSELF?


...

Nxt to only active readers & soon i'm going to remove silent readers from by buddy list

Chapter 21
Edited by Ramjanki - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
thanks for the pm!

Part 20

Fabulous update! amazingly written! Thank God Maan is fine! sad seeing Janki so distant!

Geet is unbelievable! why is it so hard for her to accept what her dad said about the letter?

glad Rohini should Geet the mirror and her place! this was much needed! she shows her the truth... Maan never forced her, wants her to study...

finally Geet realises who is... MSK!!! he is successful and has achieved so much!

Yes Geet is now an orphan while Maan has his entire family! as you sow so shall you reap! of cos no one will forgive Geet!

great that Maan is back home.

wonderful that SD spoke to Janki and made her understand! Maan loves his parents so much! she assures Janki!

Geet is now getting to grip with the truth and reality...her words come back to haunt her...

she made a huge mistake! but now Janki wants to get them divorced soon!

update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Super super super...
I love Nani tooo much
What a super Nani and her dialogues
Now geet will realize the meaning of each words she used against maan
Now playback time for her
Super and too good update

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