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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: sahibasharma
Part 4

Maan not giving any explanations as to why he puched those guys seems about right...suits his character...no nonsense behaviour and not caring about what others think about him...
Felt bad for his grand parents who blame themselves for Maan's aloofness and behaviour...
Geet seems to be so involved in the studies...she is cute kid...

Ohk so Maan even had pangas with Preeti...curious to know about that misunderstanding between him and Geet...love Preeti for defending her sister at all times...she is a sweet heart :)

Hahah...Arjun was so cute when he got jealous of Maan seeing Preeti giving her attention to him...LOL...
Arjun is so funny...I love him...

Poor Maan...Arjun k blabbering mein fir se fas gaya...:P
Karan is a cutie too...chalo at least he had the guts to confess his love out of the three muskeeters...hehe...

Maan is so cute when complaining about Arjun to Karan...these three are cuties and kids at hearts...love their friendship :)

Chemistry lab mein aag? Oh god...these three are too much...kuch aisa hai jo inhone ne nahi kiya?

hahha, i am glad that you are enjoying it

chemistry lab wala incident i will show in coming updates

Arjun and his crushes u will see in coming updates.. 😉

thank you for the wonderful comment sahiba😛

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
Can I say I enjoyed Maan's frustration
Yeh ishq nehi asan bas inta samajh li jiye... aag ka dariya hai aur doob ke jaana hai... Lol ( K3G mood )

wo toh hai yr

maan ka aag ka dariya toh abhi shuru bhi nahi hua hai😆

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: aparna3011
ENJOYED READING
MAAN IS ANGRY ON ARJUN FOR WHAT HE SAID TO PREETI
ARJUN SAID THAT MAAN CAN ARRANGE REUNION IN THE SCHOOL AS A BIG ALIMINI

thank you for the comment aparna di

i am glad that you enjoyed reading it 😊

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
thanks for updating!

Part 4

Marvelous update! superbly written!

never expected Maan to be rusticate from school! shocked that Maan fought with two student! seems like Maan had a reason! why did he not speak up?

can understand dadaji and dadi's concern!

Geet is such a perfectionist! glad that Preeti cheered Geet up!

Present:

Preeti is so astute! Gosh Maan, is nervous and stammering!

Omg Arjun dropped a bomb! Maan is stunned! can understand Maan's anger!

Arjun is all cool and calm while Maan is tensed!

Liked Karan's comment!

at least Arjun has a solution to the problem! hope it works!

update soon!

updated chetna

thank you for such a lovely comment

Maan apni saali sahiba ke samne chup ho jata hai 😆

it's natural

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: Silvermist32223
That was a pretty long Chappy..
Geet was such a studious girl ...Geeky Geet 😆lol
Preeti is so sweet...She does know how to set Geet's mood right..
I wonder what was the reason for the school fight... things do get ugly at times..😕
Was Geet in some way involved that fight too? 😲
Maan has very understanding grandparents😊
Arjun... what can I say about him...🤣..hmmm..end of the day he will surely come with some fix up (hope I am not wrong in this case 😆lol)
The trio do have a lot of work to do - 'THE REUNION PARTY' (Thanks to Arjun and his big mouth lol😆)
I have a feeling that a bigger task than organizing the party..will be getting the BusyBee Geet to the party lol..😆
The past and the present are both equally interesting 😃

Thanks for posting ..😊
Do let me know when you write the next chapter..😉

thanks for the lovely comment kiara

oh yes, geet is defintely a geek and you will see why maan was attracted towards her😆

let's see how arjun will arrange the reunion

i am sure maan will not be a big help😆😆😆

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

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Posted: 6 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: suhaaana

actually sometimes situation make u violent and same happened with maan
preeti is cool 😆
dadima and dadaji will be his constant support system

Ya I know ... I just love present Maan 😳

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

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Posted: 6 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: suhaaana

wo toh hai yr
maan ka aag ka dariya toh abhi shuru bhi nahi hua hai 😆

Kya yaar Banda trying best to meet her 😳 ...

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 6 years ago

#238

you enjoy the update

my mood is spoilt result aaya h

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 6 years ago

#239

Part 5

Poor Maan...he is so affected by his parent's divorce...he is confused over a lot of things...his parents have ruined his innocent childhood...I am glad at least he had his grandparents and friends with him...

how cutely he was asking his grandma as to whether she is angry or not...and how he shed all his inhibitions when he knew that his grandma understands him and his sudden act of violence...

oh god, he is full of so many insecurities... the feeling of being someone who is not wanted can be so hurting and he had to face it almost daily...

I did not understand much of Ragini's character but I liked how she slowly started loving Maan as her own child...maybe it was because she could not conceive her own child...whatever it may be...I liked how she chose to talk to Maan after the incident...

how cute is Maan to have apologized for sleeping on his grandma's lap...oh god...my heart went out to him...

loved how Arjun was there for Maan in the childhood...its great for him to have understood Maan and his circumstances when he himself was a mere teenager...and loved how he wanted Maan to be involved in things at school...like kinda trying not to leave Maan alone so that he is not sad or something...

Preeti is so full of life...love her vibrant nature...

so Geet is considering going to the reunion...that is nice...I was worried that she may refuse since she is so much into her studies...

curious about this Rohit guy...ab yeh kaun hai jo Maan ki life ka villian ban na chahta hai...hehe

nice one

ohk Geet and rose...Please let it be Maan

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 6 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: suhaaana

hahha, i am glad that you are enjoying it
chemistry lab wala incident i will show in coming updates
Arjun and his crushes u will see in coming updates.. 😉
thank you for the wonderful comment sahiba😛

Arjun has lot other crushes...why am I not surprised by this😆

looking forward to see those too...