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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Laxmi

how are you?


thanks for updating


Part 34

outstanding and heart wrenching update.... superbly written

so Maan is drunk

at least Geet went to help him

of cos she is affected by his touch and closeness

she is surprised that when he tells her not to leave her

her confusion is understandable

Maan is emotional and says he misses her and loves her

as expected she is happy

but then says Pari

she is shattered and hurt

now again misunderstanding

she decides to leave him for his happiness

feeling for Geet

they were meant to get closer but now drifting further apart

hate seeing no communication between them

oh no Geet is now going away for 3 days

now what will happen?


Well, its a new phase and new beginning for them and it wont be easy to undo things that has happened in last one year for Maan...and to change thought process in Geet...I know it hurts but trust me ...this will go on until one break even point and then, all positives happening in their lives..

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Posted: 4 years ago

wonderful update...maan in drunken called pari which hurt geet...oh no another misunderstanding... geet had to go to friend's party with muskan... hope maan came to know it ...excited for next..!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Maan needs to have heart to heart talk to Geet calmly.

No riddles. Geet is heartbroken and now she is confused with his behavior

He needs to win back her trust and love.

Waiting for next.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Maan now realizing how geet was feeling with his ignorance he can't handle this he want to relax so get drunk and went to geet on terrace geet was talking to radha he hear how much she concern fr him after radha went away geet realize his presence and she saw him and try to help him she realize he was fully drunk she helped him to bring him in her room she afraid he will blame her in morning but she can't leave him their he too helped her so she thought this way

Maan confess his love to her but calling her pari made mu and geet now determine to leave him fr his sake

Maan need lot of hard work too bring her back

Ridz called her and remind her about party .

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 33 and 34



Thanks for updating akka


Both the updates so so well written and emotional 👏

I really love the way u portray characters emotions so well specially geet's as she is the one who is been at the receiving end and most effected. I can actually feel her pain while reading every chapter and I feel so choked With emotions 😭 and to be able to do that hats off akka 👏🏻


And coming to maan it's just been few days and he can't cope with her pain 😞 just imagine how agonising it was for her through out the year. In this regard I m with you akka. I know it's not going to be a easy task for him to cover the pain and m totally in to see how he does it. It's just beginning 👍🏻

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom


Hey Bacha...how are you? Have really missed you and your sweet comments. Thank you for all your support my dear. I am really humbled. 🤗


I m doing fine akka , just now saw that u have update and immediately completed both the chapters


M so glad that u have started updating your stories and hope everything is fine from your end as well 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ye kya ho rha h

When maan know about geet thinking he have some another women named Pari

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Posted: 4 years ago

Oh no...

Another misunderstanding...


Sab kuch sahi tha, sirf pari bolke galat kar diya..


Aur kitna dard milega geet ko..

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Part 33 and 34



Thanks for updating akka


Both the updates so so well written and emotional 👏

I really love the way u portray characters emotions so well specially geet's as she is the one who is been at the receiving end and most effected. I can actually feel her pain while reading every chapter and I feel so choked With emotions 😭 and to be able to do that hats off akka 👏🏻


And coming to maan it's just been few days and he can't cope with her pain 😞 just imagine how agonising it was for her through out the year. In this regard I m with you akka. I know it's not going to be a easy task for him to cover the pain and m totally in to see how he does it. It's just beginning 👍🏻

Thank you dear..🤗 I am so very glad you liked the updates and also you stand by me about the storyline.

Some of the readers are not understanding that its a story full of emotions and you cannot just expect instant romance. Romance will happen in near future and it will gradually shape up with a high intensity. But before that, there are lot of hurdles that needs to be crossed and that's what this story is about.


I am so glad to get your strong support all this while.

By the way, I have updated HOW TO NAME IT?. Please do read and comment on it as well...PLEASE! 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

Oh no...

Another misunderstanding...


Sab kuch sahi tha, sirf pari bolke galat kar diya..


Aur kitna dard milega geet ko..


Thank you for your comments dear 🤗Dariye math...Main hoon na! 😊 Dheere Dheere Sab tik ho jayega 😉

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