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Posted: 6 years ago
#51
Nice ff...
Geet's character going to so cruel...
I m seriously can't understand meaning of women improvement...
I m also girl but being independent doesn't means..
We forget our culture and family values...
Our parents do so much for us and if they want something from us that's not wrong in their part...
We should express our thoughts and opinions but always go with the flow...
Carrying a rivalous behavior is not right at all...
Hope so maan doesn't get hurt by geet...
Keep updating...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#52
Congratulations on new story
Little bit different from your usual story
Geet hates maan bcoz she is very career oriented women. Her family forced her to marry him.
Awesome part
Would love to read more
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Posted: 6 years ago
#53
Awesome concept nd nyc part...geet got forcefully married to maan...bt she is physically attracted to him...let's see how she will start loving him by heart...all in all an amazing start...do continue soon nd Thnx for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
#54
Awesome Prologue
Nice concept
Geet ke parents uss ki marriage jabardasti Maan se kaewa dete hai
Geet Maan ko responsible maanti hai she thinks ki Maan ki wajah se wo apne sapno ko pura nahi kar paayi
Kya uss ne Maan se marriage na karne ke liye kaha tha?
Beautifully written
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Posted: 6 years ago
#55



Chapter 2



But when she was nowhere near listening he pick her up in his arms claiming her lips causing her to held him tightly & after that they were lost in passion forgetting everything else..

...
Maan lay beside her after their act of passion..
When geet turn her face on other side.
Maan noticed it but let it go.
M- suno

She didn't replied but he continued
M- today Rano maa call me.
He noticed her body turn tensed suddenly.

M- vo she want to talk to you.
She still didn't replied
M- she said u were not picking up her call.
If you want to meet them i'll tell driver to leave you hoshiyarpur for few days. You didn't even once meet with them after our marriage.
They must be missing you.
When she still didn't replied

He turn her only to find her sleeping . He knew she was not sleeping . She was pretending to sleep but in return he just place a kiss on her forehead and sleep holding her..


...
Nxt day was same like any other day .

J- nakul go & call geet.
When janki turn to find geet standing there.

Janki smile looking at her.
J- thank god beta you are here. Will you come with me?
Geet just nodded in yes & left.

Janki was astonished but she can't even express it. She was noticing geet since the day she entered in km as her daughter in law.
First she thought her to be shy but now her everyday behavior was scaring her.
Janki was lost in her thoughts when savitri come there.

S- beta where are you lost?
J- maa
S- kya hua?
J- I was thinking about geet maa.
Maa did we made a mistake by choosing her for our maan?

S- janki
J- maa ypu know maan he never share his problems with us. We want a daughter who understand him. But geet is more complicated than maan.
She even don't interact with us..
Savitri place her hand on janki shoulder
S- you are worring unnecessary beta.
Some people prefer to talk less.
She console janki

But deep down she was scared too. Her experienced eyes didn't failed to notice her cold behavior towards everyone especially with Maan.
...

Geet look here & there with bored eyes. They come in an orphanage to distribute things to children.
But she prefer to stat out. What will she do here anyways!

When her eyes catch a known figure & soon someone hug her.
She was more than surprised to find one of her bestie here in Delhi.
K- god geet. I never knew I meet u here. I try to call u but u were lost somewhere
G- kavita u here?
Geet was more than surprised to see her bestie here. Last time she meet her before marriage but after her protest her family didn't let her go out forget about meeting any of her friend.

Finally breaking the hug kavita noticed geet.

K- hey u got married so early?
Causing geet to turn stiff.
K- I am angry at u. We were bestie but still u Dissapered like air.
Geet look away
G- that was sudden so I
K- ok ok
Let it go
But I never knew you will marry so soon. That much I know you I kmew you always want to pursue your carrier.

Geet looked away & seeing her so silent she understood something didn't went well.
K- hey are you not happy?
G- my parents didn't let me complete my studies forgot about dreams.

K- so what?
Why are you so sad?
Geet look at her in disbelief
G- what happen?
Don't you know I work so hard?

K- calm down geet. Don't behave like fools. U know very well in villages mostly girls married even before 18 .
But uncle aunty let u study.
There must be something serious.
Geet feel irritated
G- if u want to take their side then better I leave.

K- ok sorry baba.
Acha did u try to talk to jiju?
Geet stilled at her place
K- god geet you are such a fool.
Try to talk with him. Just let him know.
U know na I was married when I was 19 yrs old. My family not even supported me but today i'm doing a job & independent.

Causing geet to look at her
K- you are making issue out of nothing .
Just go & talk with your hubby.
Ok

When someone come behind kavya
V here are you and I was searching you from so long.

Kavita turned and introduced geet to her husband. But geet was lost to notice anything.
G
They left bidding her bye & promise to meet her again.
G- maybe she is right.

Sometimes our friends make us understand better than our family. That's why it's important to have friends those who really care for us.
Kavya at that moment knock some sense in geet who had lost hope long back.

G- I i'l l tr try to talk with him.

She feel so calm at that moment unaware of the strom coming in her life...
...
Once they all back to km

Geet picked up her phone her hands shivered but she was desperate to talk to him.
She dialled his number felling so nervous. Will he let her study?
He once broke her trust my not denying for marriage but will he know let her live her life? Afterall she just want to complete her studies & do something by her own.


Maan was reading some file when his phone vibrate gaining his attention. If it was someone else he would have cut the call by now. But he was more than surprised to see the caller name.
It was geet

It tokk him few moments to finally realize she is in actual calling him.

He immediately picks up the call.
M- geet
G- I I want to talk to you.
M- haa bolo
You want anything?
G- h ha vo

When someone knocked his door .
M- ek minute geet

His PA enter in cabin informing him Ram is calling him for a board meeting.

M- sorry geet.
Dad is calling me. I need to go.
I promise we will talk once i'm back.
Take care.

Geet look at her mobile frowned.
G- he didn't have time to talk to her?

..



So how was it?


Don't forget to comment and let me know
Edited by Ramjanki - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#56
Updated


So don't forget to comment & let me know u like it or not.
I'll send update to only those who are interested in reading further:)
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Posted: 6 years ago
#57



Congrats on new story
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing n interesting updates
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Posted: 6 years ago
#59
Nice update...
Yaar I m liking this ff very much...
But I really can't understand the mentality of girls like geet...
Thoda padh kya leti hai apne ap koe patha Nahi kya samajh leti hai ...
Rehte Na humko sabh acha mil jaye usea kadar nahi hoti hai..
Hope so maan can able to handle her...
Keep updating...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#60
geet's mil n gmil can see cold behavior of geet towards all n also maan
geet meet her friend who knock sense in her n suggest her to talk with maan about her career
impatient geet call maan who is busy in office n ask geet that they will talk after he come back home making her angry

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