MG SS:- Mannmarziyan...Chapter-7 Pg-56 Sept-27th

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 6 years ago

#361

Wow ... Wonderful story ...

Congratulations for this new one ...

Manmarziyan ... This word itself holds so much ... So many untold stories...

Well coming to the story...

I really loved it ... Read it all in a go...

Enjoyed it...

U always end up coming with these brilliant ideas ... Weaving them into great stories...

Geet n maan were married for 2 years , a marriage gone wrong n they both decided to quit ...

She wanted to go n he let go...

They think it's all over .. but is it...

They still keep thinking about each other...

Moving on is not so easy after all..

Both are trying hard to forget ... Immersing in work n what not...

They feel they have fallen out of love ... But have they ...

Geet joined university...

She met with new people .. new colleagues...

She was always quiet...

Neil is trying to make her open up...

She realized what is holding her back n what is it stopping her ...

She broke down completely ... Letting out all her pain , anguish in her tears ... Why did it have to be like this...

Maan on the other hand , drowned in his work ... Fighting with memories...

There came his old n best friend piyali...

Making him forget past for sometime...

They had fun remembering old days ... He relished his favorite dish made by her mom...

They went touring around...

Again taking him back to memories of geet ...

N he was completely taken aback realising what was that was amiss...

He was surrounded by memories full of geet ...

Those flashes of past ...

How they met , n became cordial then friends n then special someone ...

It's all so mesmerizing...

He is thinking is she happy .. is she fine ...

Both are hurt , broken ...

Really wanna know what made them part ways ...

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

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Posted: 6 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
Impt:
I am putting this story on hold. I am going through a turbulent phase in my personal life which is draining everything out of me. I just cannot focus on this story or any story for that matter.

Apologies for this news that was uncalled for.

Thanks for being there with me all these years.

Will I continue?
I am hoping, someday I would.

Will I be back?
Honestly, I don't know.

You guys can still catch me on pms or on FB. I will keep in touch. ⭐️

With the hope that I am not forgotten,
Love,
Kawaii/Aishu😳

Don't worry everything will fall into place ... U will emerge as a winner ... U r a strong girl ...

Will pray for u to get all the strength required ..

N also that everything becomes alright ...

Take care of yourself first ... Everything else can wait ...

Come back when ever you feel like it...

Will always be with you ... Waiting for u to come back...

Would love to read ur works anytime..

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#363

Part 4

I loved the shift in their lives, new changes flowing in, new routines that keep them busy in adjusting with, yet how they hold onto the past.

so With time, Maan and Geet are trying to find a way ahead to move on, to gather themselves back to the present and lead towards the future.

they meet new and old people, looks like Piyali had a liking for Maan from college days. Neil's entry had a charm, he has a personality which differs from his outer look..he seems to be talkative and witty.

And still there is no peace for the new changes can't replace the old moments. Some or other way, the things happening around reminds them of each other. or is it their subconscious mind that is in always search of the reasons that will take them back to the time they spent together.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 6 years ago

#364

Hi hope that you are well?

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Pallavip

@pallavimn

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#365

Hii

When will u start this story ?

I m very much eager to read this story.

Its different .

And very sensative topic.

Please its a request please start this story as soon as possible.

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Sun

@bhanu27

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#366

I really wish to read this. But Complete.

Yes can't forget SLY ever. I loved that story very much. But as you asked won't compare. I am wishing everything resolves at your end and you come back.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 6 years ago

#367

shall be waiting for your return!

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

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Posted: 6 years ago

#368

Hope all is well on your side

will be waiting for your return

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 6 years ago

#369

hope this hiatus will be over soon!

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#370

Hi People,

So I come here after ages and I see people still here, waiting. I feel extremely terrible to have left you all like this and I know it is unfair for you all. But I just want you all to know that I have started my masters recently and the course has been extremely hectic. My schedule is haywire and I get very little time to sit and type.

I can't promise but I am trying to make a come back in September'19. Hopefully, the burden will be lesser by then. No promises though.

Love you all for still keeping me in your thoughts.

Love,
Aishu❤️