MG SS:- Mannmarziyan...Chapter-7 Pg-56 Sept-27th - Page 34

maan is remembering geet at every point he spend with her while touring piya

Piyali Maan ko uss ke past se nikalna chahti hai iss liye wo Maan ko outing par le jaati hai but every thing reminds him Geet

He was in so much pain

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Chapter 6

Ok I take what I said in the last part back, I was beginning to feel a certain level of dislike for Maan (of course I knew it was because of personal experience but still seeing Geet's breakdown I began to emotionally detach from Maan). But now reading this part, I come to realise how wrong I was, shall I change my chant from I HATE WHAT BECAME OF THEM to I hate what became of ME lol. Because clearly my emotions are running off on tangents, never really a true reflection of my actual sanity. To be able to see Maan's side was needed, especially for me, im such a forgetful human plus I tend to float in emotions so please don't tell me any heart-break or cheating stories, because I will be off on one like swearing the living-daylights lol. My mum goes I'm like a human machine gun lol, once im off I am literally off lol

So anyway I won't say anything about Piyali since she is Maan's newborn muboli (spoken-for) sister (haha). I understand where she's coming from though, I really don't want to connect with her but I am. She has had this life-long crush on Maan and now when he's single again, but he's no longer himself, so I get she wants to heal him, to return him back to normalcy, if that's even possible. Even though physically he's with Piyali enjoying the site-seeing venture but mentally he's still stuck with Geet, every little incident reminds him of the past he once lived with Geet. The love they shared was so true, where did the love go and why? I hate this feel that overcomes me whenever I think of the couple that was and now is, wait they're not even a couple no more ehhh I HATE WHAT BECAME OF THEM

Finally we got to see a different Geet in his past, one that isn't childish but equally mature and respondent to his feelings, I liked the changes, it showed the depth of her character and loved how she cajoled him to speak his mind, not exactly forceful but still powerful enough to get him to open up. I know how hard it is to make a man talk, especially when they think you're childish or immature, to make them see you in a different light is almost impossible, here I am strictly talking about daddy dearest lol, man my old man (though he ain't that old and he'd laugh at me for calling him old lol) doesn't give me enough credit lol.

I've never heard about the twilight and dusk thing, is it true? Might as well try it, I've wished upon everything there ever was or is lol. It's so natural of him trying to think of what she called it but can't recall, is it because he had tried to lock up all her memories or did they not wish more frequently, maybe it's that? They should have made it a routine thing, at least then maybe they wouldn't have split, maybe it's not because the love grew old or died but actually they didn't timetable a bit of luck into their life, silly silly people. Yes finally its time to say I HATE WHAT BECAME OF THEM all because of not wishing enough tch tch tch lol.

Geet's got crowd phobia, wow, who would have thought? She seems so comfortable then again phobia's have nothing to do with comfort level, so excuse my lack of understanding, sorry, stupid me lol. It had indeed been a hard day for Maan, so finally he lost it and released it upon the first person, am I happy or sad it was Piyali, maybe happy because I want her to be this muboli behen lol (please say I have washed the thought of a rebound relationship lol) but sad also because now he'd go after her to make up for the guilt, stupid old feelings, all the feelings should naturally go for a toss unless its about Geet lol. Piyali takes it well (honest confession I feel for her but the ME in me can't handle that lol)

Ahha finally he remembers kataware doki' the time when wishes come true, well then I suggest he and she get on their knees and start off wishing lol

AH I hate what became of them, they clearly love one another yet seem to have lost the love and a part of themselves in their regular life, I hope whatever it is resolves soon enough before Neil or Piyali think they stand a chance, because clearly with me standing as a reflective guard they stand no CHANCE, as in NO BLOODY WAY will I let my Geet end with anyone other than Maan unless he deserves no second chance lol. Same goes with her. But can I end off with I HATE WHAT BECAME OF THEM

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oh shucks Marium, now i defo need to proof-read my comments. Didn't realise my comments are being read😳 but humbling😃

YASSS i agree i feel like a mini celebrity when ever i see a reply and ...and i feel special like a close ally, you dont know my passion to be in the closenits lol. If i have to give it a shot, might as well be the best shot, right?😆

Thank you, i am lucky if i say so myself😉😆 So you agree, Aishu (not even going to refer to Kawaai or was it Kawaii ever again, like the most completed word i've ever come across (apart from Lakhsmi, want to spell it as Laxmi) even worse then all the medical terms ive learnt in my life-time lol and believe me theres loads) should remain the story to 'I HATE WHAT BECAME OF THEM', though now that i know what Mannmariziyan means, i've fallen in love with the title too, A Heart Wish, how beautiful ❤️

But the indian word sounds much more romantic, and has an essense of subtley

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maan trying to have a good time bt so stuck up in past...

no geet here...

waiting for the part to unfold fully...

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