MG SS:- Mannmarziyan...Chapter-7 Pg-56 Sept-27th

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Pallavip

@pallavimn

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Posted: 6 years ago

#311

Superb update

Maaneet stillare in memory.

Both are in pain.

Want to know what happened exactly in their life.

Update soon.

Take care

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 6 years ago

#312

Nice update

Waiting for next update. . .

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 6 years ago

#313

Maan n piya went for outing

Which made him rem his past with geet

He is thinking about how will be geet doing now

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#314

So emotional update. Maan is also not able to forget Geet. Presence of Piyali, his collage friend reminded him of Geet. Waiting for next part.

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crazymaneetian

@crazymaneetian

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#315

yes a sneak peek into maan's life was necessary...the suffering is in equal measure on both sides...i like piyali...will be good to know what went wrong between maan and geet

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 6 years ago

#316

thank for updating!

Chapter 6

emotional update! fabulously written!

of cos Maan is missing Geet! everything reminds him of Geet!

liked the past moments! liked how assured her!

he cannot forget Geet!

will they ever meet again?

update soon

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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#317

I am glad that I am reading this story as an unbiased reader. What I had presumed actually seems true! It doesn't look like Maan had abused Geet in any way. He's just as shattered if not more!!! Still can't wait to know what made them go their separate ways? It's apparent that it was Geet's decision to leave him and he just did let her go which is wrong still but he's not the one who wanted to divorce her.

The song from Chalte Chalte is sooo apt for this MG.

Pyar Humko Bhi Hai,
Pyar Tumko Bhi Hai,
Toh Yeh Kya Silsiley Ho Gaye
Bewafa Hum Nahi,
Bewafa Tum Nahi,
To Kyon Itne Gile Ho Gaye
Chalte Chalte Kaise Yeh Faasley Ho Gaye

Edited by anmirza - 6 years ago

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janu2006

@janu2006

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#318

gr8 part

cont.soon

thanks for pm

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Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#319

First things first, you're spoiling me woman. Next time i dont see a special mention to me, i'd be heart broken lol, like totally living dead broken lol

Next thing, thank gosh you referred to the all being slow and not me lol

Third thing, i'm slow this time round. I'd read and get back to you as soon as plus glad you havent yet read the comment, its filled with mistakes and then i noticed the previous comments and if i could inject myself with literary skills, i would have but cant since i am shit scared of needles lol. So sorry for the horror-filled mistakes, unfortunately you have to just live with it for now. Hopefully the mistake shall not be repeated lol

Last thing, THANK YOU for the tan man explanation lol. TAN I know is body, so MANN is heart/mind, that obviously makes sense.

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Marium

@MariumChoudhary

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#320

Originally posted by: Twenty1st

First things first, you're spoiling me woman. Next time i dont see a special mention to me, i'd be heart broken lol, like totally living dead broken lol

Next thing, thank gosh you referred to the all being slow and not me lol

Third thing, i'm slow this time round. I'd read and get back to you as soon as plus glad you havent yet read the comment, its filled with mistakes and then i noticed the previous comments and if i could inject myself with literary skills, i would have but cant since i am shit scared of needles lol. So sorry for the horror-filled mistakes, unfortunately you have to just live with it for now. Hopefully the mistake shall not be repeated lol

Last thing, THANK YOU for the tan man explanation lol. TAN I know is body, so MANN is heart/mind, that obviously makes sense.

Ahh You just don't know the constant addiction of staying in that reply list 😆 It's gets increase more with time also the feeling of being Special and being a celebrity comes along she replies for the Comment is fantastic 😉

Seeing the nature of your being a reader no one can resist a reply Lucky you Girl 😳 I love your each Comment Specially the constant mention of "I hate what become of them" 😛

Edited by MariumChoudhary - 6 years ago