MG SS:- Mannmarziyan...Chapter-7 Pg-56 Sept-27th

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crazymaneetian

@crazymaneetian

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#191

loved it immensely...continue writing plz...would loved o read about the first date too...even loved maan and piyali's scenes and the little nuggets of info that you have thrown in which aren't their in dialogues something like when maan pulls piyali's hand and she feels a tug in her heart of a forgotten memory...beautiful

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 6 years ago

#192

Wonderful start. You started this SS with divorce of Maan and Geet. I am sure this SS is going to be an interesting one.

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#193

they r parted now...maans college friend piya who is his secret admirer is now back n geet got job as a professor in hyderabad n got a collegue...they r trying to cope up with their parted lives but still memorizing their moments together...maan was so workaholic n so clean but geet was messy...how easily she had maans coffee n how easily he asked for date...

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#194

Part 4 nice update. Pairing Maan and Geet with other characters is not a good idea but I think to take story forward it is necessary. Yes want to see their first date. Anything related to Maaneet is always welcome.

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Sindhu

@sree10

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#195

Yes yea want to know every tiny bit on their story. And its sad the way they miss each other. Agreed that love fizzles out but here its seems something else altogether. Please don't modify your story based on responses. Keep it the way u planned, please

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 6 years ago

#196

Happy Birthday Hinal!!!

Hope you had an amazing day! May all your dreams and wishes come true! 😃

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 6 years ago

#197

thanks for updating so soon!

Chapter 4

Fascinating update! superbly written!

Maan is clearly missing Geet!!! Piyali should understand that things and people change!

can understand Geets nervousness! Neil was friendly!

loved the past! ha ha grumpy Khurana... suits Maan! wow Geet changed Maan's tastes!

liked Maan's way of asking Geet out!

nice moments!

the divorce is so hard on Maaneet!!!

will they meet again?

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#198

hi... would like to read about Maaneet's first date!

the new characters seem nice but hope they do not come in between Maaneet!!

update soon!

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 6 years ago

#199

Nice both starting their life again but heart is still not moving fast

They meet new ppl again and try to b normal but sadness still their

Maan friend want to know what happened in his life that he's not like before

Past was lovely want to know about past too

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#200

This new two entry will definitely bring some light moments in story but as we are mad about our maneet, we are expecting their first meeting after divorce. I know it is just a start. N I am exited to read it more. Anyways I found Neil little interesting here. Waiting for next dear