MG SS:- Mannmarziyan...Chapter-7 Pg-56 Sept-27th

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IMA9167

@IMA9167

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Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Surprised to get a pm after long
Thanks for pm
Sad start
Both r parting ways
Interesting
Will b waiting

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Pallavip

@pallavimn

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Posted: 6 years ago

#12

wow

Superb

Loved it dear.

I m so eager to read new story of urs.

Please update soon.

And thank u sooo much for pm.

Take care

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chavi12345

@chavi12345

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Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Congratulations on your new story

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

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Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Congrats for the new story🤗🤗

Nice prologue

Maaneet are ready to sacrifice their love for each other happiness...😔

Will be waiting for the update

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kansya

@kansya

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Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Wow!! You are back with story...Feeling Happy

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Wow welcome back dear

Eager to see how this ss will unfold

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Crystal Saya

@CrystalSaya

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Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Its a good news that u r back!!! Storyline is mysterious n may b between a married couple and their complications!! will b waiting more

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Marium

@MariumChoudhary

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Posted: 6 years ago

#18

What a perfect time for you to coming over here when I am not going to be around till December for exam 🤔

Anyway This SS "Manmarziya" sounds lovely and the name is perfect for the situation going on right now... I think the title is cute also the banner.

This thing is seeming Interesting but a lot is hiding in Past as starting itself is separating time why I am not surprised to see my "Khadus Author" back in form 😛 Shuruat hi twist of separating hoping this would not be much emotional to make me cry this time I am going to be strong and not cry over anything..

I have saw this separation in other stories but when it's from you it's seeming a lot more intriguing knowing how you think deep and your thoughts are always Beautiful... this story was giving me feel of those things what I read in your blog a realistic thing...

There's a story Gehraiyaan a Marriage on the verge of breaking thinking the love has fade away but it's ongoing still I don't know if you have read but the story is beautiful and Writer is amazing...

but this is different here They are already separating observing Geet's thought it's seeming she didn't get what she expected from choosing the path of love so I thought Maan might have wronged in the path but again his Feelings making me feel he's not wrong...

Than why it's not working?? Big question cause if both of you are perfect it would work that's how it is but it's not How it's seeming there Past is giving me feel there's a lot than I am thinking or it can be less ...

Love doesn't fades away it changes with time and situation and people it depends how they deal with it and at one point couple comes to thing was there love at all? But they are not questing their love for now that means there's Hope for Geet coming back even after Maan letting go and if they are Destined to be together than no matter what confuse Geet about what she want or love she will be always close to it...

I am not hoping for any HAPPY or SAD ending cause I just wanted to see where they both go from here and what they were before this point as individual and also together...

by the way loved this different Concept coming from you... your each Story is beautiful in it's own way but SLY tops it no doubt ...

Last but not the least welcome back My Miss.Kawaii 😉

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CRAZYCUTEE

@CRAZYCUTEE

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Posted: 6 years ago

#19

First of welcome back

Superb one

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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#20

That's quite an interesting prologue..
So maan and Geet are separating because they feel suffocated in the relation..would like to read the past and the reason they have reached this stage..
Looking forward to how this goes on..
Waiting for next updates