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simran

@Pumpkinseed

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Prabh

@MomiArti

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Posted: 6 years ago

#2

Nice start.countinue soon.maan lost in geet beauty.oh she hurt his ego and make hin angry.let see what happend now.next update soon.pls add me in urs pm list

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T.Peru

@T.Peru

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Posted: 6 years ago

#3

Congrats and welcome back dii

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T.Peru

@T.Peru

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Posted: 6 years ago

#4

Nice update

Maan went to village

Where he lost in Geet beauty

Later he ask her to give lift

But she went from there

That make him angry

Let see will he know why Geet didn't went with him

Thanks for PM

Update soon

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Akku

@akkub.92

Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#5

Nice update maan like geet but she run away from him as he is rich which hurt maan ego waiting to see what happen so update soon

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

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Posted: 6 years ago

#6

Welcome back..

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

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Posted: 6 years ago

#7

Lovely start. Maan is stunned seeing Geet. And when he sees her near the college he without thinking just goes to her and offer lift. But for Geet it's different in a village and she runs away. And of course Maan gets angry before even thinking.

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 6 years ago

#8

Welcome back simran missed ur update so u gonna start with this where maan is absolutely smitten by his servant daughter he still has to realize but totally acting like a teenager so cute even banged his head against the wall maan wanted to give her lift but he forget that it's village and ppl might think differently but janab is angry now

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