~Her Voice~ Chapter 6: Tears of a broken heart Pg 13||24th March

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December04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

That banner was so elegant but powerful.

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Thank you for posting your story here too

Edited by taahir004 - 7 years ago

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Prologue is so Captivating

Maan has a younger brother Aahil but seems he has been threading on the wrong path

with his friends

now he even went to the extend of committing a sin by raping a mute girl

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Taahir

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Chapter 1

Such an Interesting and Awesome start

Maan going to the Siddigui house and tells Qazi Saab just how sorry he is for what has happened

to Geet but he also wants his brother to go to jail and on this Salma denies Maan

telling him that Geet is deaf and mute it would be very difficult for the law or anyone to believe

her if this news get out then life will surely be ruined for Geet

though Maan was disappointed with the decision as he wanted Aahil to be punished for his sin

while Aahil feels because Geet cannot remember and because she has no voice its okay that he had little fun with her

he does not see just what he has done is wrong

Maan finding that Aahil has no remorse throws him out of the house

I liked the little moment where Maan observes an innocent Geet

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...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Tale of a innocent rape victim :(

That small glipse of geet showed how naive n vulnerable she is :(

N maan a maan of words

But throwing out that creature didn't justify his sin -_-

Not even an ounce of guilt -_-

Waiting to read more..

Her voice... Means her silence gonna speak volumes :(

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Congrats on another Maaneet story! lovely banner! shall read and comment!

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Vibhuti Shah

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

amazing update

poor geet.. feeling abd for her

she doesnt even know what happen to her

maan did good

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sanum23

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Maan can't believe what imran saying he want to hear his brother doesn't do this but his brother even not ashamed of his disgusting act he throw his brother out and cut off with him

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Manjeet Kaur

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Congratulations on your new story

Awesome update

Maan 's friend Irfaan informed him that his brother raped sidiqui' s daughter

Maan can't believe he was shocked when he heard this with his brother's mouth

Maan sidiqui's ke ghar jata hai aur wo unhe kehta hai ki wo Jo saja usske bhai ko dena chahte hai wo de sakte hai wo unnke saath hai

But Geet ki mom is not agree with him

My heart is feeling very sad for Geet she is so naive and innocent usse tou ye bhi nahi maaloom ki uss ke saath kya hua hai

Maan jab Geet ko dekhta hai his heart is crying for Geet's helplessness

Maan ne bahut accha kiya apne bhai ko ghar se nikal diya

Beautifully written

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nadia khan

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Wow a real intense story poor geet had to bear so much but she is unaware of all of it and here the person who is mentally fit and fine had no sense of remorse for his deeds geet mom though cold but is somewhere right in her place unfortunately our country though had become mordern from outside but from inside is still the same with their parampara and that it's all girls fault to think if a mere 8 yr old raped and was blamed of attracting men attention then what can we say the poor mentality of our men who thinks that even a new born can't be spared it's a shame that a woman suffers for eternity by a man just few hours lust hope maan can help her