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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 2 - Her yellow flowers

One month ago

He bit the edge of his toothpick as his eyes scanned for the target through the lens of the rifle. The market was crowded with tourists and locals today; it was a typical summer's day and the breeze from the nearby sea attracted the swarms of people from near and afar.

His phone beeped once. He looked at the notification, his dark eyes glimmering at the message on the screen. His finger pulsated on the trigger, focused on the target when a figure appeared into the frame.

A young woman. No older than 30, no younger than 25. She wore a white shirt with a pink skirt, a handkerchief tied around her wrist. She stopped at the flower stall, bought a fresh batch of daffodils, paid and smiled at the vendor then went about her way, smelling them as she walked past the target.

She was far enough to avoid his line of target, close enough to be the first hand witness to what was about to occur.

He pulled the trigger.

The market descended into chaos.

He disarmed his rifle, pulled up his hood and disappeared from the rooftop. As predicted, the daffodils dropped from her hand as she rushed over to the old man, kneeling down by his side.

"Move aside please, I'm a doctor," she ordered. "Can someone call an ambulance, quickly?"

She knelt down, compressing the gun wound. The crowd gathered around her as he walked past, shielding the man from his view but not the woman.

He watched as she frantically opened her bag, retrieving several medical items that were needed. A faint smirk appeared on his face before he walked away into the distance.

...

"Dr Geet, I commend you on your bravery and courage."

She smiled as she shook the hand of Vivek, in the corridors of the hospital, outside the room where the patient had been recovering. Mr Vivek, as he referred himself as, was one of the most prominent businessmen of the city, who was also launching a bid to enter politics. His visits to the hospital became a regular thing, so he became well acquainted with many of the staff.

"It's really nothing, Mr Vivek. I was simply serving my duty."

"You are always far too humble. It is the bravery of doctors like you who keep our city going against this ongoing crime of evil and corruption."

"You know how strongly I feel about this. I am grateful for the opportunity to be able to help."

"If you'll excuse me, Dr Handa. I'll leave the esteemed patient in your capable hands."

"Always a pleasure, Mr Vivek."

Geet stepped back inside the patient's room. Vivek walked a few steps down the corridor, pausing to send a quick message. He turned the corner to see his personal assistant and lover, Suhana, typing away on her phone as she waited for him.

"That was your last appointment of the day."

"Perfect." He smiled as she stood up to face him. "Let me whisk you away for dinner. It's been a long day, and there are more long days ahead."

...

"I cannot wait to get home, put my feet up, treat myself to a nice glass of wine and relax," declared Meera as she clocked out of her shift, following in Geet's footsteps.

"I'd love to relax but I promised Ayaan I'd see him tonight. He thinks we've not been spending enough time together."

"Oh, how romantic! He's been pining after you all week. To be fair, that man has pined after you for three years now." Meera winked as she nudged Geet with her elbow.

"Give over," Geet joked. She spotted her partner Ayaan's car, parked in behind a black motorcycle near the hospital entrance. She waved goodbye to Meera, walked around the back of the bike and climbed into her partner's car. She greeted him with a kiss before they drove off.

The eyes behind the helmet watched the car for a few seconds, then sped away in the opposite direction.

Edited by -jaanleva- - 7 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 2

he is a shooter, killing people and amidst all the coldness that is required for this action, he observed her, her smile..and the flowers.
the two opposite worlds collided finally, one was taking the life (again not sure what to say about this) and other saving it.
apart from the flowers, this line I loved the most - walking past her, shielding the target from his view but not her..
and now also he is following her...seems he could not forget her since the day of the encounter..


Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 2

Terrific update! superbly written!

Maan shot thep erson and Geet saves the person!

Does Geet love Ayaan?

how did Maaneet fall in love?

update soon




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Posted: 6 years ago
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superb update
maan shoot n geet save that person

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Posted: 6 years ago
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updated the comment above..:)
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 3 - The doctor and the paramedic


"Take the precautionary measures that are necessary. My instructions are clear."

"Understood."

Maan nodded once in acknowledgement at the instructions that had been given. He stepped out of the office to a phone call from his mother. It was phone call number 5 of many more that were yet to follow, if he remained ignorant.

On the third call, he picked up.

"So you are alive."

"I'm busy. Is it something important?"

"Drop by the house as soon as you can. I need to discuss something with you. No excuses. I'll be home until 6pm, and then I have a dinner to attend."

Smriti sighed as she put the phone down on her son. Maan had never been that close to her, but in recent years she felt as though she had lost him completely. There was only one person to blame for that, and she felt a deep resentment and anger in her heart at the mere thought of him.

Manyata, her youngest daughter, sat opposite her mother on the table in their back garden and began devouring the pastries.

"Manyata, how many times have I told you to stop eating so much? You have the appetite of a horse these days! You'll put on weight."

"Let me eat, Mother," she mumbled through a mouthful. "I'll go to the gym and burn it off."

Smriti studied her daughter up and down closely, forcing Manyata to stop eating midway.

"Come to think of it, you are looking rounder recently."

"You are so unbelievably rude," Manyata responded, but her toes curled in fear.

...

He sat in the front seat of his car, scrolling through the pictures he had found.

There was a classic selfie. A photo which had been taken of her laughing, surrounded by a group of friends. A photo of her with her lover, leaning on his shoulder. A photo of her staring absentmindedly out to the sea.

He paused at the last photo, a close up that had been taken. There was a faint smile on her lips, her hazel eyes gazing directly at the camera.

He forced himself to look away. He deleted the photos one by one, tossed his phone onto the passenger seat and sped off onto the roads.

...

Geet was on her way out of the hospital for her lunch break when Meera came running behind her, calling her name.

"Geet, I need a huge favour from you," she panted.

"Right now? I was on my way to the police station. They want me to file a witness report for the shooting on our patient."

"I got an on call emergency but I feel really unwell. I was actually considering going home. I would be forever in your debt if you went instead of me."

"Meera, they really needed this witness report today so they can start chasing up leads."

"I know but it sounds like a serious emergency. The paramedic said he was waiting for an emergency doctor outside. Geet, I'll make it up to you. I promise. You can file the report when you come back."

"Okay, tell them I'm on my way. Let me grab my equipment."

"He said they have everything they need in the ambulance. It sounded like a matter of life or death."

Geet nodded in acknowledgement. "I'll speak to you later."

She hurried out of the hospital entrance, spotting the ambulance parked a few feet away which was waiting for her. She climbed into the back entrance, saw an unfamiliar paramedic but sat across from him regardless.

"I don't recognise you."

The ambulance began to drive away.

"Are you new?"

"I'm from a different district," he responded, keeping his eyes trained on the small window behind her.

"What's the emergency?"

"We'll brief you when we get there. It's an urgent matter."

"Which is why I'd like to know beforehand."

He didn't respond.

Geet sensed an uneasiness in the air. Something wasn't right. She studied his uniform carefully. He had his name tag. He had the certified badges. He had the standard hand sanitiser attached to his pocket.

But something was off about him. He was oddly cold. He sat stiff, still, a stoic figure. His face hardly broke out of his stern expression.

The ambulance hit a bump, sending Geet flying across the ambulance and almost into his lap, if he hadn't have caught her by the arm. Their eyes locked for a split second; whether she moved away or he pushed her away, remained unclear.

"Sorry," she said, patting her dress down and running a hand over her slicked back hair.

"So am I," he said, but he said it as if he didn't mean it.

They stared at each other, properly, for the first time.

The ambulance halted to a stop.

Edited by -jaanleva- - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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chapter 3

excellent update! well written!

curious as to why Maan chose that line!!! his mom and him are not that close!

is Maan watching Geet?

Seems like Geet is in danger!!!

what will happen now?

update soon


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi Jaanleva and thank you for the new FF

I like adaptations, though I've never really watched any Turkish dramas but already excited since you are writing, plus gangster related lol

Part 1
Can i just say i so get the feel after the heat wave this year i am so expected a freezing winter. I just hope we don't have snow days this year like last year. After this part i just had to stop commenting lol, the part was so captivating, usually i comment and read together but frankly seeing it might not be possible with this tale lol

Wait what happened that Geet is now in the woodlands? Husband and wife; however i feel tension brewing. Has Maan forced Geet or is there something else?

Mob men belong to the rival gang i presume but where are his men?

Btw i like the differences already - when the good and bad amalgamate, hmmm should i expect fireworks lol
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Part 2

Is the yellow the significance of her spring, was she plucked before she could open up or was he the water that would enble her to spring out evenly looking even more beautiful . I remember the previous part where you mentioned the yellow plants in her apartment.

Toothpick😆 I seriouslu have a serious dislike for men who grap onto it for their dear life. Gangsters and more importantly European (not the British thanfully~) or pub servers are shown as such. I don't like it lol

oh i am assuming Maan's a cantact killer. Oh i love this, i love a good action movie and what better than a Maaneet fiction. She caught his attention for a while with the yellow daffodil but i'm guessing the colour she radiated was far brighter than the yellowing petals. Too early for romance, right? lol

But unlike what i expected, she was quick on her feet and actually helped revive the pateint or the target, as Maan whould call. I am right, he is the shooter. So i guess he's not a big timer, rather a middle man. Oh well beggars cant be choosers lol, a contact killer is still a sweet fantasy.

Mr Vivek, doesn't give me good vibes but oh well. Ayaan, so Geet's already involved hence the friction maybe in part 1. Why is the hunge growing, did Maan force her to marry?

Geet looks so happy with Ayaan, wait why is Maan at the hospital

indeed true opposite ways, they are two opposites of spectrum so what is it that brings them together.
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Part 3

What the stiff with his mother, but he has a family. shouldn't there be any protection provided unless he is a undercover shooter type of thing lol although in that field of things nothing remains a secret. But his mother and sister do sound cute, i don't know theres defo something there with the sister and the mother sounds like those middle aged frustrated mothers lol

Oh shoot? Geet's been kidnapped hasn't she? she probbaly being taking to a gangster who is injured, is Maan the paramedic

I must say you defo keep the interest growing and let out very little information, which i like although i might complain of very frequently lol, so don't say i haven't warned lol

Already looking forward to part 4

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