Chura Liya Tumne Jo Dil Ko - repost - Epi pg 138* OSR link pg 149

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peru.c.patel

@peru.c.patel

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Posted: 7 years ago

#81

Amazing update
Thanks for pm 😊

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fict

@fict

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Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Ch 2

Cute part and best was Geet thinking Maan of trying kaala jaadu. 😆 The golguppa scene was funny too 😆 Loved their bickering. The beginning of teenage love for Maan and Geet royally ignoring him. Thanks for pm and waiting for next.

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crazymaneetian

@crazymaneetian

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Posted: 7 years ago

#83

superb update...what all names did you comeup with ullu gadha hathi and what not...very good depiction of teenage issues and mind playing tricks...khajurao!!!! lovely...oops fast forward to saviour maan...yeh bachayega yaan maar khayega?

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Sudha

@babelicious

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Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Nice ya. While it was really cute to watch Maan and Geet as Moti and owl during childhood, it was such a treat to watch them growing up after entering their adolescence. But one thing I don't get it is how could Geet go from the chubby girl to a trim n slim girl in just a short summer vacation? Was it all to do with her grooming or is there some timeline that I missed? Anyways, a teenage Maan is so good to read about, specially reminded me of those days where we harbored crushes and used to lookm forward to seeing them everyday, lol. So thoroughly enjoyed this chapter.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Chapter 2

splendid update! superbly written!

they were at loggerheads, always fighting!

four years have passed and times have changed!

Geet is now gorgeous and Maan totally smitten! loved that Geet ignored Maan!

clearly Maan is falling fast and hard!

despite trying his level best, Maan cannot help by look at her!

Geet confused by his behavior! ha ha she thinks he is doing some black magic!

adore her many names for him!

so Maan also changing mentally and physically!

Maan is just waiting for Geet to look at him while she is at that phase where she hates boys!

he just eagerly waits for her one glimpse while she royally ignores!

great that he was there on time to help her!

thank you for the pm

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hira2010

@hira2010

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Posted: 7 years ago

#86

Hehehe I was I laughed at geet theory about maan staring her as kala jadu lol only she can do this
Maan ki halath kharab hai he badly attracted to wards his moti
Ohh geet in danger

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Tiya

@Tiyaji

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#87

Wow chaptet 2 was beautifully written their nock jock their masti its amazing

Bechara maan🤣 cant control his heart and mind over geet

Thank you for pm keep writing god bless you. 😉

Edited by Tiyaji - 7 years ago

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sun4u

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Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: dqno1
Chapter 2

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Awesome part.

Loved Tom & Jerry fighting of maan and geet

Wow!! Maan the ullu is gradually falling for his Moti Hathi but still trying to avoid it.

Can't wait to see how Geet is going to fall for him.

It seems Maan has a tough job ahead I would like to see geet drooling over maan.

Waiting for the next part.

Thank you!