Chura Liya Tumne Jo Dil Ko - repost - Epi pg 138* OSR link pg 149

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893213

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Posted: 7 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: maansi25
Ch 2
Sach me
chura liya hai dil ko jo aapne
Beautifully described blooming of a bud
And
A boy towards manhood
Along with hathi ullu fight
The way Maan keeks thinking of her
Narrated so beautifully
How one cannot resist the attraction
How one person whom we can't see eye to eye
Becomes a peace of eye
Aankhon ki thandak

Pyar bhi usi se hota hai jisse jyada jhaga karte hain
Waiting for the Tarzan to save tha damsel in distress
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thank u 😃
sometimes I wonder why I bother reposting
and then there are times like this
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Posted: 7 years ago

#112

Chapter 3

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893213

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Posted: 7 years ago

#113

Thanks for the lovely like and comments you all posted

Seems like you are liking the story

A bit of the present and more of the past are coming up

Please leave an enthusiastic comment

It makes me want to keep reposting.

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Sudha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#114

Ch 3.

So much has happened. So maan saves Geet and she learns his name for the first time in years. He realized its love and not just an infatuation.

Cut to a few yrs down the line, they are both grown up with Maan wanting a jhooti Mangetar and it had to be a mother of coincidences for Geet to be there at his place for the same. Don't know what might have made her come there in need of money. Maan seems rich now. I'm glad he'll take care of her...so good his childhood sweetheart is back to him without even knowing about his love for her.

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ambbiha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#115

Man has fallen for her but she doesn't know his name too. He saved her from goons.
AWesome part.
Loved it 😉

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Kkiran

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Posted: 7 years ago

#116

Yayy hero saving his heroine, but time twist left them distant and now she is in need of his help again and that to for money.

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snehapriya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#117

This young Geet is so innocent. She still thinks maan is making black magic. Atleast she got to know his name and said a thank you. That might be enough for Maan as of now. Smart move indeed in being quiet and escaping.

I thought story has fast forwarded... seems some flashback cute scenes are pending.

Maan is back to being angry young man. But how is he gonna handle himself around his first love. Waiting for Geet's past amd her present reaction to being with Maan.

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ambeern

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Posted: 7 years ago

#118

Lovely update

Maan saved her

Now once again they met

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zida

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Posted: 7 years ago

#119

Nice pt
Maan save geet
Maan is so possessive about her
Maan is 24
And geet is 22
Maan parents dead
And dadima is sick
She want maan get married
Maan is searching for his lady love

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hira2010

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Posted: 7 years ago

#120

Ohh in the danger he enjoy closeness of his lady love seriously maan you gone ishq pagal jarta hai .
Lady live don't know his name too lol .
Story moved forward they part away each other ohh abhi toh mohabbat ka agaz tha
In present he changed alot now
He wants a girl to be his fake fiancee
Who that girl wrong time stop Kiya