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@MomiArti

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Posted: 6 years ago

#1181

Nice update.dadi and geet bonding is superb she try to avoid maan but dadi send her to maan room maan had a high hopes from geet but always compare things with tv.he purpose geet but she ran away.dev tara loves eachother but dev scared to talk with his mother.now she is making him jealouse.

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@Silvermist32223

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Posted: 6 years ago

#1182

Chapter 12

Hilarious Chapter Avi👏

Dadima sending Geet to the lion's den lol😆

Maan is one self-obsessed dude lol😆🤣

Proposal from Fast forward Khurana lol...😆 but Geet isn't impressed😛

Geet has a step-by-step guide for romance lol😆🤣

The winner of Round 2 is Geet lol 😆

Score- Maan :1 Geet: 1...oops it's a tie lol 😛

Another twist in the tale...😉

With Tara and Dev in the picture😲

Wonder how the story will move forward😳

Is trouble on Maan's way ??

Waiting for next 😉

Edited by Silvermist32223 - 6 years ago

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893213

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Posted: 6 years ago

#1183

Originally posted by: MomiArti
Nice update.dadi and geet bonding is superb she try to avoid maan but dadi send her to maan room maan had a high hopes from geet but always compare things with tv.he purpose geet but she ran away.dev tara loves eachother but dev scared to talk with his mother.now she is making him jealouse.

thanks for reading

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Meerkat

@Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#1184

Ch 10

Obviously it was a slap to his masculinity that she considered him to be interested in Manish-a.

Yes, I remember he was introduced as a comic relief however was never happy at the way his role panned out. It was stereotyping and I might be over thinking but also promoting homophobia. IMO, TV needs to be more sensitive portraying such characters. Manish-as of our industry are always after men who are not interested in them. In a way they are shown harassing other men. Is that the only trait they can exhibit? Don't mind me. Random rants. Lol.

That's why I really liked that Geet was totally okay at what she saw and didn't panic or think it to be queer.

Oh my. So besides watching tv, she's also into advice columns. God save Maan then. The acidity part is always funny. How she keeps pushing him because she thinks he's a harbinger of diseases.

I'm so glad that Dadima is playing the cupid here because if left to themselves they would keep on their Tom n Jeery fights.

Aww she felt because he didn't take her along with him and also ignored her presence. You hurt his ego Geet baby and on top of that you also keep pushing him away. Why sad then? Abhi toh kaha dur raho mujhse ab reh raha hai toh bura kyun lag rha h

I liked how you put forth the concept of loneliness that's paramount in her life so subtly. No exaggerating the grief but the readers know. She craves for someone her own. Darji despite being a constant presence was unable to provide what a motherly embrace could. When Maan restricted her presence in Dadima's life he took away from her her only hope at having a motherly figure in her life. It also explains her obsession with TV and other entertainment sources. She's inherently a lonely person. A lonely child growing under the presence of an old grandfather who for hours was out working.

It also explains her naivety in many matters. Still, she's an optimistic person and strives to be cheerful. These kind of people are the best. They derive pleasure from simple joys.

She's also experiencing the first stirrings of attraction but faisl to recognize them and perhaps it will take Rajji's to enlighten her. The symbols that Rajji told her about does sound familiar to her so I guess the first step in that direction.

Maan, is clueless, as many men are in this age. He is impatient and loses his temper around her. Especially because he's so into her and she's not. The insight into a relationship was much needed and Dadima provided that.

The description of heroines of tv serials was so spot on and the guys, yes a brooding hero is so hot. 😆

The descriptions had me in splits. 😆😆 That summed up our telly industry serials. Lol.

When at night you're thinking about him Geet almost daily samajh jao ishq ka rog lag gaya...karenge bhai Maan jarur baat karenge don't worry. Pura ka pura project milega tumhe, Geetu. pyaar ki naiyaa paar jarur hogi Geetu 😆

Have I told you I loved the banter between Maan-Adi.

Thank you Avi. This story is such a stress buster.

Edited by Ginnosuke_Nohar - 6 years ago

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Meerkat

@Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#1185

Ch 11

Will upload the comments shortly. :-)

Thank you for the links.

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Finally. The dreamy fall in your arms scene She was there to apologize and he was there to impress. On e was too eager to forgive, the other too oblivious to be impressed. They make such a great pair. 😆😃

The best thing I love here is the contrast in their thoughts. She's is pining for Dadima and he for her lips. 😛😆

She apologized. But for what she didn't know. I can understand though. His rudeness must have hurt her real bad. And the thought that she won't get to meet Dadima again. And hence the only way she could think of reverting to original dynamics is an apology. For a person who's so fierce and feisty, I felt sad to see her in such a vulnerable state. I wanted to protect her and give her a hug. Glad, Maan is there for her and realizes that his actions and temper corners her.

Slow and Gentle. That's the keyword, Maan. Be gentle with her.

The scene where he wiped her tears and gave her his Dadima, was so poignant. He's already started to fill the deserted spaces in her life.

First date with Dadima. He he he. I love Aditya. He does what we as audience crave to do. Tease Maan and keep pulling his legs. 😆

Poor Maan. Dadi and Geet will now do aadaan pradaan of flowers and chocolates while he stands there by as the sidekick. Lol. 😆

Knock your socks off sexy smile ka kabada kar diya Geet ne 🤣

He thinks she needs corrective glasses, she needs he thinks black glasses so that eye diseases do not spread. 🤣 Optician ke bade maze 😆

Bulldog, again a janwar reference. 😛😆 Tenacious and unrelenting, yes Maan go ahead. 😆 He is even taking a look at the rewards. Seriously, he's such a goner.

But he's one intelligent bulldog. He knows Rani ki jaan kis tote me hai. Dadima!! So is going to use to his advantage.

He's also sucha chalu purza. Always manages to squeeze in a hug and if lucky a kiss too.

Life has taught that there's a vast difference in theory and practicals. There's also a great difference in Practicals done in a classroom and then the field experience.

I think Bulldog ji is in for a ride. Kuch aur takiye se hi kaam chalaye. 😆

The ones who watch television have real high standards. Itni aasani se nahi pategi. 😆😳

Glad that they are finally friends. ❤️

Edited by Ginnosuke_Nohar - 6 years ago

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893213

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Posted: 6 years ago

#1186

Originally posted by: MomiArti
Waiting for next update

sent ch 13

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893213

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Posted: 6 years ago

#1187

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar
Ch 10

Obviously it was a slap to his masculinity that she considered him to be interested in Manish-a.

Yes, I remember he was introduced as a comic relief however was never happy at the way his role panned out. It was stereotyping and I might be over thinking but also promoting homophobia. IMO, TV needs to be more sensitive portraying such characters. Manish-as of our industry are always after men who are not interested in them. In a way they are shown harassing other men. Is that the only trait they can exhibit? Don't mind me. Random rants. Lol.

That's why I really liked that Geet was totally okay at what she saw and didn't panic or think it to be queer.

Oh my. So besides watching tv, she's also into advice columns. God save Maan then. The acidity part is always funny. How she keeps pushing him because she thinks he's a harbinger of diseases.

I'm so glad that Dadima is playing the cupid here because if left to themselves they would keep on their Tom n Jeery fights.

Aww she felt because he didn't take her along with him and also ignored her presence. You hurt his ego Geet baby and on top of that you also keep pushing him away. Why sad then? Abhi toh kaha dur raho mujhse ab reh raha hai toh bura kyun lag rha h

I liked how you put forth the concept of loneliness that's paramount in her life so subtly. No exaggerating the grief but the readers know. She craves for someone her own. Darji despite being a constant presence was unable to provide what a motherly embrace could. When Maan restricted her presence in Dadima's life he took away from her her only hope at having a motherly figure in her life. It also explains her obsession with TV and other entertainment sources. She's inherently a lonely person. A lonely child growing under the presence of an old grandfather who for hours was out working.

It also explains her naivety in many matters. Still, she's an optimistic person and strives to be cheerful. These kind of people are the best. They derive pleasure from simple joys.
She's also experiencing the first stirrings of attraction but faisl to recognize them and perhaps it will take Rajji's to enlighten her. The symbols that Rajji told her about does sound familiar to her so I guess the first step in that direction.

Maan, is clueless, as many men are in this age. He is impatient and loses his temper around her. Especially because he's so into her and she's not. The insight into a relationship was much needed and Dadima provided that.

The description of heroines of tv serials was so spot on and the guys, yes a brooding hero is so hot.😆
The descriptions had me in splits.😆😆That summed up our telly industry serials. Lol.

When at night you're thinking about him Geet almost daily samajh jao ishq ka rog lag gaya...karenge bhai Maan jarur baat karenge don't worry. Pura ka pura project milega tumhe, Geetu. pyaar ki naiyaa paar jarur hogi Geetu😆

Have I told you I loved the banter between Maan-Adi.

Thank you Avi. This story is such a stress buster.

Truly your enjoying it is such a reward for me 😃
I always liked to have fun with Maan and Adi's friendship 😆
Thanks Nohar
Please update soon 😃

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Meerkat

@Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#1188

Originally posted by: dqno1

Truly your enjoying it is such a reward for me 😃
I always liked to have fun with Maan and Adi's friendship 😆
Thanks Nohar
Please update soon 😃

Updated chapter 11 comment.

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#1189

Hi there, AVI...😊

How are you doing?

Have been missing you around the forum :)

Hope to see you soon :)

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Prabh

@MomiArti

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Posted: 6 years ago

#1190

Maan think geet and dev marriage going to fix he try to stop but unsuccessful.sameera make maan understood hope maan sudhar jaye geet life in danger.hope maan save her.precap intersting