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Meerkat

@Meerkat

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Posted: 6 years ago

#1171

Originally posted by: Silvermist32223

^ Hey Nohar 😊
How are you ??

I'm good Kiara. How are you? Made any new edits?

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Meerkat

@Meerkat

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#1172

Ch 8

Okay so that's what they do behind the closed doors. 😆

In medicine school, do they teach how to take care of moans? Of course they do and Khanna is sure a great doctor. Making the medical association proud and all. 😛

Geet is sooo naive. But this naivety I can believe. Lol. Honestly, I had no idea about things until I picked up some book one day. The librarian had asked me, you sure? I told her, yea, the cover looks pretty good and I want to be introduced to this romance genre, but once I began reading, tada, everything was stated there.

I was so embarrassed while returning the book. Thought she will judge me.Had the mind of explaining myself but the librarian has so many readers, she hardly remembered me. Lol.

Hayye Geet, tumhare Mahi ke posters nikalwane ke baad hi toh he'll have a chance of his own Mahi Mahi moments.😉

So the Ullu has become triple B. That's some promotion.😆

Yes, I wanted her to take the eye-drops with her to the office. It be fun to see his reaction. Lol. I'm dying here. The girl is so good.

Right, so what he has fine eyes, what about the diseases those eyes are carrying. Prevention is way better than cure.

In between, I love that you've not closed the doors of past to us and we get those peeps now and then because it's nice to revisit their memories from each of their viewpoints.

Oh my God. This girl is just out-of-the-world-crazy. Is she still thinking she's pregnant?🤣

Avi this is hilarious.

I died and then I was resurrected when someone made me drink the tasty Mazza. But again I started reading and this girl kills me again with her madness.

On her own, without any sense, she's assuming things and eating Imlis and sour things 🤣 Someone bring me a 7up this time.

I'm praying that she doesn't approach Maan with the dialogue that I am going to be the mother of your kid. Even better what if she approaches his family 🤣

One can't rule that possibility. She watches television a lot. That too Indian TV. Had she watched American shows she wouldn't have been so illiterate in these matters.

And for the sanity's sake, how are her feet and fingers swelling. Girl, your mind has swollen up. That's it. His kiss has gotten into your head, woman. Go and see a doctor. 😆

Poor Maan. He's no idea he's so capable that he can make a girl pregnant just by kissing her hands and getting kissed on cheeks. Lol.Plus this summer when he comes back, there might be a Nupur or Mayank waiting for him.😆

I can't stop laughing at her thoughts. She's a single piece. Really.

I know about birds and bees. I go to gardens. 🤣

Is there any line that's not funny. She asks for more chutney because that's what mother to be on TV does. Pagal.

You know what Avi, the best thing is that I can recognize the voices here. They are also different. Be it Geet's or Maan's or Dadi's.

Maan is till in the egoistical mood. He will get a clump on his head from me I'm telling you. He has his head placed high in the head thinking Geet is going to fall over her knees for him.

This man is not Ullu. He is a mitthu who sings his own praises. And thinks that the world agrees. Somebody tell him that to Geet these songs are all gibberish. Lol.

Adi loves me!!!🤣🤣

Dil Tuta. Dil Tuta. Maan ka dil tuta. 😆

And there Geet is thinking that she didn't recognize Adi's love but she's going to amend it now. What comedy man.

Adi's he-he-he and Maan's roar. perfect combination. Lol. Music to my ears. 😆

Pyar ka dushman, BBB, Hayye Hayye. 🤣

I loved it, Avi.

This is so refreshing after a tiring day.

Who's the creature? Not read Locket obviously but from the other thread I get to know that it's very popular.

Edited by Ginnosuke_Nohar - 6 years ago

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Meerkat

@Meerkat

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#1173

Ch 9

First time I get to read different dynamics between Maan and Adi. They are friends that's is so endearing and that they have banters to share too. He-he-he.

Cross eyes or not but the connection has definitely crisscrossed. Lol.

Poor pretty boy, the pretty girl gives him no ghas and is giving signals to the ugly boy.

The girl is super fast. Adi becomes dear Adi. 😆

Geet and shy? 🤣🤣 that girl was pregnant at 15 for God's sake 😛😆

What? Is he seriously thinking to show off his body? Does that work really? Inexperienced here, so don't really know. But I would find it really creepy if a guy comes and starts showing off. 😆

Facepalm. the guy actually removed his shirt. Pagal aadmi. 😆

But what happens next...🤣🤣🤣

Manish-a and Maan - The MAnmaana couple. 😆

Geet thinks he bats for the other side. Fate is really not on his side. Everything is going wrong.

Edited by Ginnosuke_Nohar - 6 years ago

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 6 years ago

#1174

Originally posted by: Silvermist32223

Chapter 11




Amazing
Chapter Avi 👏👏



Couldn't
stop smiling while reading the chapter 😆😆



Great
start to Maan and Geet's day lol😃


Loved the
apologizing session 😊



Geet and
Dadima have grown pretty close in just one meeting loved their bond 😉



Maan- Adi's
telephonic conversation was fun (Adi surely would have gotten a black-eye if he
was present infront of Maan lol😆🤣)


Chivalry
did not help Maan to earn brownie points lol Afterall Geet is unique 😆😛


The
Hero-Heroine Plan (THHP) is outstanding lol..⭐️😆


He's on a
roll... getting instant results lol ...😎

With the
success of Round 1 of THHP... Score Maan
:1 & Geet:Nil


Waiting for
Round 2 lol😛




Dear
pillow... Enjoy the days while you're still getting all the attention lol coz you'll
be soon forgotten 😉


Btw.. Safar
is journey right ... Liked the last line of the chap.😊







What has Maan planned for Adi ?? lol😲 😆




Waiting
for next😉

Yes Safar is journey 😆
glad you enjoyed it 😃

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 6 years ago

#1175

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar
Ch 8
Okay so that's what they do behind the closed doors.😆


In medicine school, do they teach how to take care of moans? Of course they do and Khanna is sure a great doctor. Making the medical association proud and all.😛

Geet is sooo naive. But this naivety I can believe. Lol. Honestly, I had no idea about things until I picked up some book one day. The librarian had asked me, you sure? I told her, yea, the cover looks pretty good and I want to be introduced to this romance genre, but once I began reading, tada, everything was stated there.

I was so embarrassed while returning the book. Thought she will judge me.Had the mind of explaining myself but the librarian has so many readers, she hardly remembered me. Lol.

Hayye Geet, tumhare Mahi ke posters nikalwane ke baad hi toh he'll have a chance of his own Mahi Mahi moments.😉

So the Ullu has become triple B. That's some promotion.😆

Yes, I wanted her to take the eye-drops with her to the office. It be fun to see his reaction. Lol. I'm dying here. The girl is so good.

Right, so what he has fine eyes, what about the diseases those eyes are carrying. Prevention is way better than cure.

In between, I love that you've not closed the doors of past to us and we get those peeps now and then because it's nice to revisit their memories from each of their viewpoints.

Oh my God. This girl is just out-of-the-world-crazy. Is she still thinking she's pregnant?🤣

Avi this is hilarious.

I died and then I was resurrected when someone made me drink the tasty Mazza. But again I started reading and this girl kills me again with her madness.

On her own, without any sense, she's assuming things and eating Imlis and sour things🤣Someone bring me a 7up this time.

I'm praying that she doesn't approach Maan with the dialogue that I am going to be the mother of your kid. Even better what if she approaches his family🤣

One can't rule that possibility. She watches television a lot. That too Indian TV. Had she watched American shows she wouldn't have been so illiterate in these matters.

And for the sanity's sake, how are her feet and fingers swelling. Girl, your mind has swollen up. That's it. His kiss has gotten into your head, woman. Go and see a doctor.😆

Poor Maan. He's no idea he's so capable that he can make a girl pregnant just by kissing her hands and getting kissed on cheeks. Lol.Plus this summer when he comes back, there might be a Nupur or Mayank waiting for him.😆

I can't stop laughing at her thoughts. She's a single piece. Really.

I know about birds and bees. I go to gardens.🤣

Is there any line that's not funny. She asks for more chutney because that's what mother to be on TV does. Pagal.

You know what Avi, the best thing is that I can recognize the voices here. They are also different. Be it Geet's or Maan's or Dadi's.

Maan is till in the egoistical mood. He will get a clump on his head from me I'm telling you. He has his head placed high in the head thinking Geet is going to fall over her knees for him.

This man is not Ullu. He is a mitthu who sings his own praises. And thinks that the world agrees. Somebody tell him that to Geet these songs are all gibberish. Lol.

Adi loves me!!!🤣🤣

Dil Tuta. Dil Tuta. Maan ka dil tuta.😆

And there Geet is thinking that she didn't recognize Adi's love but she's going to amend it now. What comedy man.

Adi's he-he-he and Maan's roar. perfect combination. Lol. Music to my ears.😆

Pyar ka dushman, BBB, Hayye Hayye.🤣

I loved it, Avi.

This is so refreshing after a tiring day.

Who's the creature? Not read Locket obviously but from the other thread I get to know that it's very popular.

If you watched the show, then the creature is Manish-a; the guy who had eyes for Maan 😆
I am so glad you are enjoying it
Every time I read it I feel like I could have added a line here and there but I have to force myself to stop by sitting on my hands once I am done so that I don't tweak the fun out of it.
Thanks Nohar for reading this. If you don't read anything else of mine its fine because this is the elemental Avi 😆 just like her Geet 😃

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 6 years ago

#1176

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar
Ch 9

First time I get to read different dynamics between Maan and Adi. They are friends that's is so endearing and that they have banters to share too. He-he-he.

Cross eyes or not but the connection has definitely crisscrossed. Lol.

Poor pretty boy, the pretty girl gives him no ghas and is giving signals to the ugly boy.

The girl is super fast. Adi becomes dear Adi.😆

Geet and shy?🤣🤣that girl was pregnant at 15 for God's sake😛😆

What? Is he seriously thinking to show off his body? Does that work really? Inexperienced here, so don't really know. But I would find it really creepy if a guy comes and starts showing off.😆

Facepalm. the guy actually removed his shirt. Pagal aadmi.😆

But what happens next...🤣🤣🤣

Manish-a and Maan - The MAnmaana couple.😆

Geet thinks he bats for the other side. Fate is really not on his side. Everything is going wrong.

Yes yes I think it works, hence the fan following for some serious meatheads 😆
Yes American shows would have done her in.
I enjoy the innocence in her a lot and I think in most of my stories save one she had that freshness in her.
Chalo read some more and catch up. 😃

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..Silvermist..

@Silvermist32223

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#1177

Originally posted by: dqno1

Yes Safar is journey 😆
Thanks Avi😃

glad you enjoyed it 😃

Yup... eager to know about Round 2 😉
Will Geet win or Maan ?😆

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..Silvermist..

@Silvermist32223

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#1178

Originally posted by: Ginnosuke_Nohar

I'm good Kiara. How are you? Made any new edits?

I'm good too 😃

Yup a new edit posted on Galleria
Do check it out 😉

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Prabh

@MomiArti

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#1179

Superb romance with comedy.finally maan understood that he dont need to rush for geet love he need to be a pataint they said sorry to eachother.she is excited to meet dadi and poor maan again start his mission.next update soon.