MAAN GEET OS NASEEB APNA APNA

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Naseeb Apna Apna

Priya looked at the couple before her..She envied the love her sister was getting from her husband...she couldn't remove her gaze from him..even though knowing she will never get that love from him..She had fallen for him..Very badly...and now seeing him all happy with her sister..she couldn't help the tears that escaped her eyes..She didn't want this..She didn't want to broken...She didn't want to become the person she was today..who was jealous of her own sister..the sister who fought all odds to give her better life...the sister who gave her love of a mother...and the sister who was ruling the heart of the only person she loved...she wiped her tears and left to her room thinking how to clear the mess of her life...

Priyanshi aka priya and geethanjali aka geet are two sisters one soul ,the parents less daughters fought with life bravely and stood as each other support where geet took charge of her only sister studies being a student and bread earner..her sister supported her by studying hard and getting through scholar ships...their life was moving smoothly, geet got the new job in a reputed construction company she only hoped to get more pay so she could save something for her sister future unknown how her future was tied to the person whom she going to work with...to say her boss maan was mesmerized with her look would b an understatement..he was blown away with her dimple smile.. Whereas geet is no less, she found herself attracted to his brown eyes...they would often steal glances and kept drooling when one was not noticing the other...it was after six months when maan finally proposed geet after their dinner meeting which geet agreed...their life was bliss with maan family agreeing to bring their only dil to their home..With the thought of marriage geet was reluctant she couldn't leave priya alone...when she shared her feelings and fears with maan..He said they could have priya with them..

Even maan parents suggested the same..But it was priya who wanted to be independent and she wants to move in hostel...as geet wasn't ready to let her live alone and Khurana house was far away from priya uni finally geet gave into priya demands and got her in ladies hostel...

It was an year to their marriage and maaneet were happy in their dream world which was about to collapse in few days ..geet was due in next week and priya stayed at Khurana house to help geet as geet mil was often ill ...priya and maan shared abond of frinds more than brother in law and sister in law...after a week when geet gave birth to baby girl she was the most happiest girl on the earth...it was her husband dream to have a daughter when she dreamt about her son yet at this point seeing her husband lost in their daughter she couldn't even complain...

Geet:maan will u stop looking at her..

Maan:no I can't stop admire my daughter...

Geet:maan she is mine too

Maan who was still in his daughter land just hummed making geet roll her eyes

Maan :geet what will we name her..

Geet:she is your dream...isn't she!!?

Maan:yes

Geet:then she is your Kalpana...your dream

Maan smiled:our Kalpana

It was two months from that day when a desperate priya was waiting for her sister and niece...it was almost a two weeks she didn't met them as it's her final exmas..And total she planned to spend whole weekend with them...she repeatedly asked geet mil when they will b back..

Mil:priya they went to Shimla for maan meeting, they will b back in any minute...

Priya:their phone is also not reachable aunty I want to meet my baby and di...

Mil:patted her cheeks and left to take rest stating there may b network problem...but her steps halted seeing a injured maan carrying his daughter wrapped in a white sheet...

M:maan...what happened..

Hearing her shriek priya too looked at him scared

Priya thoughts were stopped with a pat on her shoulder she opened her eyes only to look at her sister the concern in her eyes made her hate herself more...

Priya:di aap..

Geet:tuh teek haina..kya hua aise kyun so gayi...sofe par...

Priya:who kuch nahi di..bas aise hi...

Geet:chalo dinner khey liye

P:nahi di,muje bhook nahi hai..aapjao

Geet:par

P:plz di..

Geet was about to move when priya asked..

P:di kya mein Kalpana koh mere paas rakhon..kuch dher..woh ..

Geet:iss mein puchne khi kya hai priya..woh teri bhi beti hai..

Priya just nodded..geet gave a longing look to her and went from there with tears in her eyes..geet knew she was losing her sister...she wasn't her old priya ..Fate had brought them at a place where they were not just sisters who shared their responsibilities but shared same husband too..Whom both loves above all...but the person in question was ignorant to the love his wife had for him...second wife to b precise...

Maan saw geet coming alone and knew something was wrong again...his mom and him shared a look...This was happening every other day..geet being upset about priya avoiding her meals...even his mom tried to talk with her but something was amiss..he decided to talk with her ...geet was getting pressured which was not good for her health and priya was adding more to her worries...he knew she was very understanding and the way she managed his child was commendable...but from few days priya behavior was terribly wrong...

He still remember how she stood with his family and for Kalpana..When he was searching for geet...police stated geet was no more...on their way back from Shimla the car lost the control making it clash with a tree on other end..he along with their child was thrown out on road while geet was thrown out on hill side...even after a month when they couldn't found any body he was hopeful his geet was alive...he was madly searching her resulting ignoring his baby and mom..Who needs him...he was torn in between family and love..then came priya to help him take care of his family while he went to search his love anther 2 months there was no result...still in heart of hearts he believed her to b safe ...

Priya couldn't stay with them...and Maan mom health was taking a toll on her and managing a baby was getting hard so she prestered maan to remarry just for Kalpana sake which he declined point blank...but still she never gave up and finally seeing her mom beak down he agreed to marry only for his child but promised to never love the woman...he was amused seeing his assistant sasha as the bride whom his mom had chosen...he had cleared his intentions about marriage to sasha which she gladly agreed...even though maan was reluctant sasha behavior towards his mom and his baby made him nod for the marriage...on the marriage day priya happened to hear the words of sasha and her friend tasha who were discussing on upcoming schemes how to kick kalpnana out of their life and to rule km and kc..priya was terrified and recorded their words and immediately gave it to her jiju and and his mom who were in other room...maan was beyond enraged

Maan: see mom, u want me to marry a girl like her..if not priya what could have happened to my baby..

Mom: maan..

Maan:no mom..i had enough I cant trust anyone with my baby..

M: yes u can..

Maan: mom r u still behind my marriage after all this..

M: ok I agree sasha is wrong choice but not everyone is sasha ...maan...and think about the guests who r here for the wedding I cant see them mocking at u..

Maan: mom all I care now is to throw sasha out of my life and home...we can take care of guests..

She looked at his son who was not in sense and the girl who stood Kalpana in her arms...she went to her

M: priya will u marry maan

Maan&priya: mom..aunty

Maan:mom yeh aap

M: maan u agreed for baby right...so please let me talk with her...priya say..

Priya: aunty..i..

Maan: mom priya is geet sister..i don't want to ruin in her life in this love less marriage..u do know I am marrying only for my baby...how can u put priya through this..she is my geet sister..

M:I know she is..That's why I am asking...no one can love Kalpana like geet and priya...turning to priya: priya will u

Priya: she looked at the baby in her arms and agreed..

Maan:priya think again..i can't give u anything...i love geet..i..

Priya:I will b kalpana mother

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Geet:maan ..maan

Maan:huh

Geet: maan where r u lost...

Maan:nothing geet...where is baby..

Geet:with priya..

Both took their dinner immersed in thoughts...maan mother looked at both and couldn't stop her tears..Why it happened with her children..Was she wrong in forcing maan to remarry, she loves geet like her daughter...but for her daughter she made maan to marry again..She can't even think of hurting priya who lost her life for her son and granddaughter...

Geet: maan I need to talk about priya.

Maan:hmm geet..i too thought something is bothering her, was she ok, her health I mean..Anything wrong..

Geet took a deep breath: maan cant u see she loves u..

Maan: WHAT!!??

Geet: yes,she does..

Maan: geet r u mad, how can she love me..her sister husband...geet u r

Geet: maan..u r her husband too..

Maan looked at geet with shock: yes,but that marriage is for name sake geet,I told her before marriage I only love you..She cant expect anything from me...I think you are mistaken..

Geet: no maan,I can see pain in her eyes, whenever she looks at us..She is drifting away from me maan, I want my sister back...she choked on tears

Maan: geet, don't cry please we will talk with her...I still believe there is something which..

Geet: maan will u do something if I ask..

Maan: anything for u geet..

Geet: then give priya the rights of a wife

Maan:I never disrespect her geet..i fulfill all my responsibilities towards her...

Geet:maan I am not talking about general things I am asking about her rights on u...I want u to love her as a wife...i..

Maan: GEET...Are u in senses, agree u love priya more than me..But what are u asking is impossible geet...

Geet: why, wasn't she your wife...didn't she needs you and your love...she is also human maan with feelings..she loves you and seeing your love for me kills her...please maan ...its only you she needs..she is..

Maan:enough geet..i had enough of you..i am sure priya didn't love me, it's just your imagination, in six months of our marriage I never shared a room with her let alone bed, she is Kalpana mother, I look at her as my baby mother, your sister,daughter in law of mom, time and again I look of her needs and comfort because I respect her..Not I love her...even today if she needs something its my responsibility to fulfill it, she is my responsibility, you are my love, I beg you to understand the difference

Geet:but priya loves you maan

Maan:as I said,I don't care of this your nonsense, you need sleep,so just go to bed,for ones and last I will never love priya ,she is just my responsibility...

Saying maan took his night wear and went in washroom leaving geet in tears, not only geet, priya who came to give a sleeping baby to geet rooted hearing their convo...she left from there unable to look at them...

Maan words kept ringing in her ears, true he looked after her as a responsibility but like a fool she fell in love with his care, in their six months of marriage he made sure geet was his only love yet she couldn't stop her heart from loving him, she didn't even knew she loved him all this months until geet was back, she still remembered the day when doctor preety came with geet, she said how geet was found unconscious beside lake and some tribal's took her with them, doctor preety team was in medical camp there and geet was in coma for almost six months, the moment she opened her eyes, she demanded her baby and maan...but keeping her condition in mind preety herself came to drop geet home, as she wanted to confirm what geet was saying is true and is safe with her family...the minute geet entered all were in shock and maan even thought he was dreaming but geet hug brought him back and they both cried until they were disturbed by their baby voice...

seeing them all drown in each other planted a first seed of jealousy in priya mind and first realization that she loves her husband who loves her sister.

More than maan answer the thing that kept ringing was geet asking maan to love her...how hard could it be for geet, to demand such a thing for her sister from her husband...if she herself couldn't see maan and geet together,will geet can bear seeing maan with priya...the realization sent a shiver through her spine...yet she thought

Everything is fair in love and war

The next morning wasn't same as before there was a drastic change in priya behavior...she tried everything to get maan attention she offered him his black coffee which always geet does from the day she is back...she even asked him about the dishes she cooked while maan was amused with her behavior..geet was getting worried about both..it was clear to her priya needs maan attention but maan being maan was obvious to her advances..she yet again thought to push maan...even before she could start maan himself talked with geet

Maan :geet don't u think priya is behaving a bit odd

Geet:she just wants your attention maan, she loves you

Maan sighed:geet please..we are over this topic.

Geet: maan trust..

Maan: geet how can I make u understand there is nothing like that, I can never think of any other woman than you geet, u don't know what place you holds in my life...

Geet: what if I was not back maan, you will have been with priya..don't u!!??

Maan: geet what the hell r u talking, how can u even say that..

Geet:true maan,if not me ,you and priya could have been happy, if not now, maybe in future you could have move on with her, my sister could have get her happiness, if not me, she could have been happy with you maan..geet broke down in tears saying this..While maan heart pained hearing her

Maan :geet all you think about is priya and her happiness, what about me geet, don't u want my happiness, do u have any idea how I was searching for you all these months, and finally after a long time I got u back, all u say and worry is about priya..did u ever love me geet..

Geet: maan..please don't say this, u do know how much I love you...its priya..

Maan:if u love me geet,u could have never ask me to move on with priya..u hurt me geet,u really...

Geet hugged him tight even before he finished his words...I am sorry maan,I was thinking beyond..i am really sorry..But maan I am worried about priya,she was,..

Maan:I will talk with her, but please never ever leave me ,it was hard for me to even breath without you,I don't know how I survived once, I couldn't survive next time if u leave me...

Saying he too tightened his hold on geet, both stood there until they were disturbed by a knock...

Geet closed her eyes feeling miserable..she knew the most important persons in her life are in pain for different reasons, priya wants maan love and maan is ignorant of her love, it was not less than a death to her watching her own sister as her husband second wife..and she even knew at what circumstances priya agreed to marry maan.. she can never blame maan for remarriage, as she always wanted his happiness neither she can blame priya for falling in love with maan ,it was not in priya hands not to feel for maan for what he is, the day geet knew about maan priya marriage she decided to leave the house for their better life, but maan words made her stop he clearly stated priya and his marriage was illegal as she was alive, even if she left he will bring her back by hook r crook seeing madness in him geet decided to stay ,but thought to bring priya and maan close as she can clearly see priya love for maan,it was not easy for her to talk to maan about priya,but she did everything for her baby sister, when even she tried to convince maan he was either hurt r angry by the end of their talk...everyday their life is getting darker with pain, the more she tried the more they were getting wounded...geet for even asking the love of her life to love other woman, even though she is her own sister the thought itself pained her, while maan was hurt thinking about geet words of leaving him for priya...will she ever love him the way she love her sister, priya for using her sister getting all the love of person whom she loves and was ignorant of her love...

Priya looked at the couple with pain, it was her right too wiping her tears she knocked: maan can we talk please

Both maan and geet were surprised to see her and her question...but maan just nodded and went along leaving geet with assurance..once in priya room

Priya:maan I am thinking about us, as di is back...I am not

Maan:thanks priya,thanks a lot for understanding, geet was being insane saying you love me and all...I do know u don't, but she..

Priya: di is right maan,I do love you

Maan: PRIYA..

Priya:yes,I do love you maan, and I realized you don't..

Maan:priya, I am sorry if ever I gave you hope, I clearly told you before this marriage, I respect you priya but I can't love ...

Priya nodded wiping her tears: if I ask you something, will u give it to me maan..

Maan nodded confused

Priya:I want a night with you maan

Maan looked horrified: what

Priya: I want you to..

Maan : u disgust me priya..There geet was blaming herself for coming in my life again for you, and here you are trying to spoil my life and geets..How can u even think such a thing, are u really geet sister..For whom she kept fighting with me..

Priya: maan please..i love

Maan slapped her even before she finished her words making her swallow her words..I want you out of my life and home first thing in morning, u don't even deserve my respect priya...have u ever thought of geet..no u are just selfish

Maan came out enraged only to stop seeing a teary geet...he didn't want geet to see priya so he turned to close the door only to surprised seeing a smiling priya with tears running down...

Maan took geet to their room, even before she talk about her lovely sister he asked her to sleep, yet he couldn't sleep remembering priya smile..What exactly was running in her mind? Even though he felt a little bit of guilt for slapping her, the one who supported his family at times when he himself couldn't

When next morning geet woke up she found a letter beside her table..Confused she took it only to get shock..

Di,

I know you will never drop your efforts of making me and maan couple, which not only hurt u but also maan, so it is best for me to leave your love with you, I know for a moment I become selfish and wanted maan for myself but di it took another moment for me to realize he will never ever love me, your thinking of "if you didn't come back "was so wrong di ,it was me who came in middle, and it was only right if I go away from here, no please don't again start blame yourself ,it was me who took path of this marriage, I know maan will never love me, yet I choose this, and realize how foolish I am and di you too must have known by now maan will not accept me as his wife, even after me asking him directly he denied, let me tell u a secret, I know you are hearing us, and I deliberately asked and pushed him to his limits, di please don't ever feel sorry for me, and don't think you lost me, I will come back once I sorted the mess in my life, say sorry to maan from my side I know he will forgive if u ask, and di sorry for creating troubles in your life. i can feel your pain di,I know how much it must have hurt u for even asking maan to be with me, I know even now you want me with you..but di some wounds take time to heal, and I don't want u to blame yourself for me, if I stayed there it will hurt not only me but you too so this little space and time will heal both our hearts, and one day I will b back to you for always.

I love u di

Yours Priya

Geet loud sob made maan woke up, he was scared seeing her crying with a letter in her hand, he took the letter and was too shocked to react..

Geet: maaan..woh priya..

Maan:shh geet..She will come back, she said na..

Geet: but why she went away, she could have live here in her house, what's the need to leave the city..

Maan: geet she needs to move on from me, and it's best if she didn't come face to face with me, even it will b painful for u to see her struggling with her feelings...its good for her and for you too, let's just hope she returns soon and stay safe..

Geet hugged maan tight still crying in his embrace thinking why it all happened with them...and hoping one day her sister will return home..to her...hopefully one day their lives may return back to normal...when geet was still thinking about her sister maan received a call which made him grin, eventually he shared with geet making her take a breath of relief...

Priya was crying looking out of the window, when she felt a presence beside she hurriedly wiped her tears and smiled at her friends

Sanjana:r u ok priya!!?

Priya just nodded

vartika: u sure u did right!!?i mean leaving and all..

Priya:if I was there di will never give up ..So it is must, I will b fine.

Sanju: everything will b fine priya, new job and new place will make u feel better..

She just agreed ,if not more she may get busy in her life and her di may live her life peacefully...some day when she was sure enough of her feelings about maan ,she may return to her home...hopefully.

Vartika and Sanjana shared a look and decided to bring their friend back who lost her heart they even listed a number of guys whom will match their friend perfectly, they both promised to bring priya out of maan world and make her life hell with their pranks and dates with their listed guys... not to forget they even talked maan and listed about their upcoming events for priya who as always only hummed for their amazing plans, the both still didn't get the thing is how geet and priya can fall for this sadu person.

The end...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely os Sanju u better write a funny one next pd ka kuch zyada asar hogaya hai tujh par geet and Priya are sister too different but share an amazing bond geet and maan fell in love and got married Priya and maan share a special sali Jiju bond maaneet happy in their life with their beautiful daughter but one accident change everything as geet declare dead maan mom wanted him to marry and situation made him marry Priya but geet comeback made situation more worse even more when Priya fell for maan and geet force maan to accept Priya as his wife but maan refused Priya seeing depth of maan love left maaneet alone forever never to come back now Sanju and her friends thinking how can Priya fall for maan and hope Priya moves on
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Originally posted by: nakh5683

Lovely os Sanju u better write a funny one next pd ka kuch zyada asar hogaya hai tujh par geet and Priya are sister too different but share an amazing bond geet and maan fell in love and got married Priya and maan share a special sali Jiju bond maaneet happy in their life with their beautiful daughter but one accident change everything as geet declare dead maan mom wanted him to marry and situation made him marry Priya but geet comeback made situation more worse even more when Priya fell for maan and geet force maan to accept Priya as his wife but maan refused Priya seeing depth of maan love left maaneet alone forever never to come back now Sanju and her friends thinking how can Priya fall for maan and hope Priya moves on

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lo gaya mera chance to be first 😭
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Originally posted by: Mahimaan

lo gaya mera chance to be first 😭

aap aaye yehi khafi hai 😉
first ho ya nahi😆
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Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

aap aaye yehi khafi hai 😉
first ho ya nahi😆




apke har ek Os main hum shamil hui hai sarkar
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Awesome superb lovely fabulous fantastic OS dear
Thanks for pm
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Nice OS
Had read this OS before on Anniversary thread
Enjoyed again reading it
Thanks for PM
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Originally posted by: Mahimaan




apke har ek Os main hum shamil hui hai sarkar

wah ji wah lawyer sahiba👏
aap humari harr os toh nahi padi😳
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