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Keepdreaming thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
next scene ... Maan trying to teach Geet how to drive
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

yaar it's hard to write..woh bhi not make it big
anyways I tried and not succeed... as I said jyada creative nehi hoon mein so I my scene is inspired urf copy paste from ' how I met your mother ' one particular episode ( copy cat 😆 )
toh it won't fun for many, still because of puppy face pressure I'm posting it but half part ( my beauty sleep time still I typed half ) ...

Deadly Secret

"I so pity you Geet, I bet your life in Canada was better than this . You here and your dearest boyfriend busy with other people "

Geet rolled her eyes at Dev' s remark . It's Dev' s regular chant , he loves to tease Maaneet and no body takes him seriously . All know him well to understand where his mind stays ... Girls , Girls only Girls ... his one and only obsession . But Adi and Pinky gotten serious.

" sach mein agar aasa hua toh " Adi couldn't help and asked her .

" uff guys seriously look at Maan " all eyes went to Maan who talking with a businessman but his eyes continuously on Geet ..." and most important he is my boss here then boyfriend "

" good point " Dev raised his glass with cheeky smile just then Maan came back . Giving soft kiss to her check he muttered sorry .

" Finally another success ..thank you guys "

" oh please thanks vanks ke kaam nehi chalega ...you have to treat us " all agreed together .

" fine you guys deserve it, tomorrow we all going to mall and you guys can buy anything...means a-n-y-t-h..."

" nooo " he stopped hearing her shouting , it was so sudden that Dev's glass fallen on floor.

" what the hell Geet ? It's party " he looked around as all looking curiously at them ...

" sorry I didn't mean to ..but I really can't go "

" Geet tu bhi na...its free from Maan sir how can you say no... we can shop..."

" No means no I'm not going to mall that's it " just like this she went from there making all worried .

Next day except Geet all enjoying lunch together just then Adi brought this topic again .

" Sir did you ever thought why Geet reacted like that ? "

Maan looked uncomfortable " ya she just dont like " he tried to mask it casually, showing them it doesn't matter to him but only he knew what he feeling . This matter not letting him to sleep . He dating Geet for 6 months now and he knows only two thing about her , one she from Canada and other she doesn't believe in marriage . It's not first time she reacted like this , before too many times she did same . What can be the matter . Girls like shopping then why she like this .

" but why she don't like ...main toh bina khay piye pura din shopping kar sakti hoo " Pinky stated with dreamy face making Adi scared .

" huh Pinky we are talking about Geet here ..."

" I know ..." she glared him for breaking her dream in mid

" waise sir why don't you ask her ? I mean she is your girlfriend she will share it "

" no Pinky we trust each other and we promised that we will never force each other for anything "

" yes we know that , even we know that you are an open book , every thing about you on TV or internet ..so basically you have nothing to hide ...but Geet has everything ... I so eager to know how she enjoyed her life there . Damn Canada... you can do anything I so wish "

" Devvv " Maan glared him openly for bringing those ... it's not first time he always tease him but now situation is different .

" you are no fun . Anyways it's her past ..you are his present stop behaving like typical boyfriend . "

" I m not bother about her past ok ..im just I want to know everything about her . I have this right hai na " all nodded looking at his puppy face..

" you know the way she reacted I feel like something big happened in Mall and for that she doesn't want to go there ..."

" ya right must be something big ..and Mall always remind her of that so she doesn't go there..."

" whatever guys it's her personal matter "

" and you are her boyfriend " Adi remind him with cheeky smile ..

" I got it ...it must be po*n. "

They didn't surprise hearing Dev exciting guess as they know his obsession about po*n and didn't give importance.. " trust me guys it should be po*n. Our got sexy hot Geet did something sexy , dirty there and now ashamed of it ..."

" stop it Dev..."

" what it can na. Look at Geet, she has everything to die for and she ..."

" is afraid of marriage ..." Adi told thinking hard " I think she got married at mall...now a days people do it ..."

" Are you guys kidding me ...tum log "

" it's po*n "

" it's marriage "

both party start fighting not caring what Maan saying ...

" fine bet "

" ok slap bet ... loosing party will get a tight slap "

" done...get ready I'm gonna win " Dev Sounds pretty excited which irked Maan .He looked at his friends who getting excited over something which killing him inside . Why he needs enemy his crazy friends is enough.

" did you guys realise I'm here and I'm not gonna ask her because of you guys stupid bet " He was about to go when Dev throw his master stroke

" hooo don't tell me you are afraid ...between in any option you are so gone man..."

" I won't ask her that's it " he announced before going out .
***************


" you are married "

that's the first question he asked seeing Geet who busy eating chips . Her face turn pale" urh... W..ha what are you saying ? "

Maan laughed feeling uneasy " you know na my crazy buddies they were saying it " ' ask her ask her ' his mind keep telling him but he couldn't get courage .

" oh ..ya " she grabed one glass of water n drink it with one go . " umm let's watch movie today what say " she went to turn TV leaving him worried .

" so I was thinking last day may be i planned it wrong , I was so busy thease days , couldn't give you time , it's better if we both spend time together . That's why this whole day is yours . We will watch movie , will go on long drive, lunch at beach ...Shopping...drinking " he tried his luck again but to his surprise Geet turned off TV and looked at him sharply

" you really doing this . You actually want to know why don't like going to mall hai na "

" umm no baby I mean . It's sound weird you are a girl and you don't like..."

" fine I'm not girl "

" but last night i checked you were "

" Mannn " Geet wanted to bang her head on something " can't we just drop it "

" or may be you can just tell me .."

few minutes silent on both side . " fine yes I'm married... I was pretty young and made mistake . But soon he left n me too left Canada "

" whattt " he literary fallen from couch " you married ! And you didn't tell me "

" I'm telling you now "

" but how ? Why ? " He was looking at her as if he saw some ghost and lost his words . Ok fine you divorced him right ? "

" look Maan we were young ...we made mistake "

" you told this part already ...iske baad "

" he just left I didn't get time so..."


AReh Creative kyu nahi...I have read your stories ok...so I know the truth about ypur creativeness...
and I loved this one...Dev is so naughty...
vaise acha hai that I have not watched all episodes of himym...toh its new for me...
she is married...now am curious about the relation with the mall and shopping...
update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Hi, @Curtus...
How are you...

Nothing much is happening here...no one is participating...:(
You tell? Whts going on?
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Posted: 7 years ago
typed in hurry... first part see above ...@sahibasharma post

Last Part



THUD ... Dev couldn't balanced and fallen on floor because Adi's slap . He actually saw stars before eyes .

" I told you yaee I win " Adi toast his drinks feeling proud ...but Pinky stopped him eyeing Maan who looking as miserable as ever .

" umm so what she said ...how was , I mean is her first husband ..he is good or "

" I bet he is as handsome as Maan.. see Geet has great taste on men she would never choose some tom deck Harry "

Dev joined after composing himself still rubbing his check ..." that was really too hard man .." he glared Adi who shrugged his shoulder

" it was bet and I won "

" wait till caught you ... "

" I will wait Mr Loser "

" don't fly too high , she got married on mall that doesn't mean my guess is wrong . Who knows she did ding dong in Mall too ..."

" I'm doomed " All stopped hearing Maan...and looked upon sympathy " she is married and not even divorced . What's that make me , Mistress ! "

his eyes gotten big as all things making clear now . Why she always irked of marriage topic , why she doesn't want Maan to keep hoping high for their relation. He wants to murder someone and his friends not helping either too .

" yes mistress minus paying " Dev said simply taking one sip of his drink ..." hey she doesn't pay you right ..." Maan nodded innocently ..." so ya non pay mistress " all nodded eyeing him sadly .

Next day when Maan was trying to concentrate on meeting suddenly Dev messaged him . His eyes gotten big after reading it . Without wasting any time he rushed out .

Geet was busy watching tv when Maan barged in without notice .

" Maan, you here ! Are you alright ..you looking qui..."

." you lied , you are not married " he cut her coming straight to point .

" what ! how can you ..."

" I checked , I checked all past records of mall wedding in Canada and it saying you never married there infact , there were not any information of your marriage "

" you did what ! You really went by back and did that " he can feel she not pleased with it so finally told truth..

" ok fine Dev checked "

" What? You shared my secret with Dev . How could you ? I trusted you ? "


" ya I know but it false news so "

" whatever I trusted you with one secret and you couldn't keep it ..."

" I was feeling miserable I had to share "

" and I trusted you to hide my thing "

" technically you told me a lie to hide " Maan tried to give reason , but Geet not ready to listen .

" you are terrible, you can't even keep lie , how I can trust that you will keep my truth ..."

" i will, trust me . No matter what , your past doesnt matter to me "

Maan said as normaly as he could but in inside he not ok with the Deadly Sceret . When her marriage things came wrong , his fears turned worse thinking other possibility , can he handle that he not sure .

" how can I trust you now , ...i was planning to tell you today that I lied but it not even 24 hours you told it to others then how ..."

before she can brust on him more all came in . Dev looking too happy but Adi sweating badly .

" hoo here my star " he gave Geet a sly smile before keeping his laptop on table . " So here everyone presenting you our sexy queen Geet..she gonna blow your mind "

he winked at Maan and then without any notice slapped Adi on face , if Pinky didn't hold him he would be on floor .

" awoo man it hurts "

" what are you guys doing ? " Geet asked looking confused.. " why you slapped him ? "

" because I won the bet ..you are not married but there is more hot secret behind you not going to Mall "

Geet looked at Maan then other , lost words to say anything..." you guys bet on.. Maan you ..."

" look baby it really doesn't matter "

" hey common Maan let's watch it together . My Canadian friend sent it , saying this video can't be miss ..."

" no I don't want to see it . It doesn't matter . I don't want to know her secret when she not comfortable to tell anyone . I trust her and respect her privacy . I'm sure she will tell me when time comes "

Maan went to Geet and held her hands .." I'm sorry , I shouldn't have behaved like that ..i should respect your decision of not sharing something "

" aww love birds it's so cheesy fine don't watch ...but we can watch right " before Maan can stop him he played the video.

All shocked seeing Geet in a red shirt dress trying to seduce a man ...before video play more Maan shut it angrily ...

" it doesn't matter it's her past ..so whatever in this video won't change my love for her ..."

" but we do want to see sexy naked ..."

" naked ...oh Dev you and your one minded thoughts "

without saying much Geet played the video again shocking everyone . All mouth open realising what this video is about ...its not some hot video but a music video of Geet . She is singing n dancing weirdly with others .

" this is musi..."

" yes music video . I was teenage pop star there . It was my first and last hit song . ' LET'S GO TO MALL ' I used to sing it going every mall . And I'm not happy with that career. I never wanted you guys to see it because I'm not proud of it ..."

" seriously Geet you looking cute doing those weird step "

" ha see this monkey step " Dev tried to copy one step in which Geet hide her face feeling embarrass...

" hey baby don't be shy ...you looking cute "

" not fair you looking at my worse nightmare " he pulled her closer giving light kiss on her check..

" no I find you quiet adorable there ..."

" Maan saying right ...with those bird nest on your head you looking stunning "

" shut up Dev she looking nice in those curly hair "

" thanks for being honest but this matter close here "

Geet tried to warn everyone but as usual their look told her , they won't listen and won't let this chance to go to tease her .

In all this Adi fumed at Dev " you shouldn't slap me idiot "

" hello even you lost "

" you lost too " both went on to argue and Maan rolled his eyes...

" they would never grow up "

" nope no chance of that " Geet agreed smiling.. " you really thought I did some po*n "

" no I mean ...ok fine I did thought once "

" so it wouldn't have matter to you "

" no , but my love wouldn't change ... my love not so weak "

" that's really sweet of you Mr "

" because I love you "

" love you too " he kissed her lips softly on her confession .
Edited by Keepdreaming - 7 years ago
Keepdreaming thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
so im done as promised
it was silly but I had to write something so I did
now waiting for New game as not much people participated it ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi SahibaSharma@
I am fine. How are you?
Yea looks like everyone is loving 2 read but none wants 2 write something

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

so im done as promised
it was silly but I had to write something so I did

now waiting for New game as not much people participated it ...


Dreamer yum ne likha so defo SILLY nahi hoga😉
after all you had to come out of lazy town so kuch toh mahaan hoga😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Twenty1st


Dreamer yum ne likha so defo SILLY nahi hoga😉
after all you had to come out of lazy town so kuch toh mahaan hoga😆


ohhh such sweet sweet words .. dreamer khush hua 😆
but it was full copy pasted ( how I met your mother) ... I'm good copy cat now 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
@keepdreaming going to read ur story at night hopefully
keep posting more
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming


ohhh such sweet sweet words .. dreamer khush hua 😆

but it was full copy pasted ( how I met your mother) ... I'm good copy cat now 😃

copy and paste is also a type of art lol

Will read and comment soon hun

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