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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
let me post a scene ...

Geet wants to cook western food for Maan ... now Maan's reaction seeing hot pasta ( Geet loves chilli )
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

let me post a scene ...

Geet wants to cook western food for Maan ... now Maan's reaction seeing hot pasta ( Geet loves chilli )


Thanks for continuing...
since no one else is taking up this one...I am going to try to write this one myself...hope no one objects to that and enjoy this...😛

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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
Geet knows that Maan absoluely loves pasta and other continental food...she knows that whenever she cooks food, Maan always appreciates her efforts even when he craves for some videshi khana...so she thought of surprising his hubby dearest with some pasta of his choice...to thank him for being such a sweetheart always...
She takes a leave from KC...Well that was a bit difficult considering Maan did not want to leave his Mishty home and go to office all alone but what could he have done when GMSK comes in full form...so he had to agree..LOL...

Geet in the kitchen...
Geet: Umm...Pasta...Maan ko Pasta bhut pasand hai...ek kaam krti hun Youtube se recipe dekhti hun aur try krti hun...
She find the recipe from internet and engroses herself in cooking...
after about two hours...she finally manages to cook a decent looking dish but when she tastes it, she finds it bit sweet and bland...(she cooked white sauce pasta) and she adds a bit a red chilly to taste it better (in her sense ...LOL)
She then calls up Maan and asks him to come home for lunch...and Since our lover boy was already missing his Hoshiyar Express, he immediately agrees and decides to continue rest of his work from home...not realising his wife has a special surprise for him at home...

Maan enters KM and sees Geet arranging the table...
Maan: Hie Geet...Kaisi ho? Aj Lunch ka kya plan bnaya achanak? Irada kya hai Mrs Khurana...
Geet: Irada toh bahut nek hai...voh kya hai na mere Mr Khurana bhut hi sweet hai toh socha unhe surprise dedu aur unke liye pasta bnau...
Maan: Pasta? Really Geet...Thankyou...oh...toh isilie aj Leave li thi...Thanks Mishty...
Geet: acha chaliye...wash ypur hands and come...sath mein khate hain
Maan goes and fresehen up and comes back
Geet: Lijiye Maan...khayiye aur btaiye Kaisa bna hai...
Maan: Meri Mishty ne bnaya hai toh acha hi hoga...and he kisses her hands...she blushes and eyes him to start...
Maan gets excited to see the dish...it looks lovely...and takes the first bite...and finds it too spicy..for his taste...and for Pasta in general...
he coughs...and Geet gets worried...passes him water and rubs his back...
Geet: kya hua Maan? acha nahi hai...she makes a cute pout?
how could Maan have broken her heart...
Maan: Nahi Geet...voh main jaldi jaldi kha raha tha na...isilye...bhut tasty hau...
Geet: sach mein Maan? apko pasand aya?
Maan: meri Mishty kuch bnaye aur mujeh pasand na aye aisa ho skta hai kya?
Geet gets happy and eats it herself...she does not find it spicy beacuse she is used to this much spice...
Maan: acha Geet...main study mein hu...office ka baki kaam ghar se hi krunga...
Geet: Ok Maan...main bhi tab tak yeh sab clear kr deti hun...

Maan in study...
Maan: Uff...bhut spicy tha...but kuch keh bhi nahi paya...Geet ne kitne pyar se jo bnaya tha...oh god...Geet kaise itna spicy khana kha leti hai...
Meanwhile Geet comes to study to give him his coffee and see him drinking water continuosly and murmurmering about the food being extra spicy and she realises her folly and feels guilty...
Geet: Uff Geet...tu kuch bhi dhang se nahi krti hai...tujhe pta hai Maan itna spicy nahi khate fir bhi...ab kya kru Babaji...bechare Maan...
she goes and gets honey from the kitchen...
Geet: Maan yeh lijiye honey...I know pasta was too spicy for u...apne pehle kyu ni btaya,,,
Maan is startled by her...and stutters...sp spicy...uh...nahi Geet...bhut tasty tha...
Geet: mera man rkhne ko jhoot na boliye...I know...aap kaise tabse Paani pee rahe hain...
She feels guilty and Maan knows that...he comes close and wraps his arms around her waist...
Maan: dont be guilty Mishty...sach mein bhut tasty tha
Geet: But Maan...
Maan: But Maan kuch nahi...acha tum chahti ho main kuch sweet lu na...
Geet: Han boliye> kya le ka aau?
Maan: yeh...
and pecks her...
she blushes and says Maaan...
Maan: kya Maan...ab meri Mishty se jada sweet aur kya ho skta hia...ab dekho mjeh bilkul mirchi nahi lag rahi,,,
Geet: in that case...I think apko aur sweet ness ki jaruarat hai
and slams her lips on his...he is shocked at sudden kiss but reciprocates all too happy with the overdose of his sweet Mishty...praying that she makes the food more spicy so that he can take sweet dishes from her like this...

-------end----

SO, how did u like it?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
Next Scene..
(same as the previously posted).

Dadima, Annie, Geet, Adi, Pinky...(Adi Pinky are married) are planning for Maan's surprise birthday party...they discuss stuff at home and office too...gains Maan's curiosity...he tries to find out whats cooking between these people...uses romance, anger, requests all those stuff with each one of them but fails to get it out...
Would love to see his interaction with these people trying to find out the secret sneaking around them




Also Waiting for @keepdreaming to write the Deadly secrets...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
awww sahiba that cute
poor Maan, biwi ke pyaar mein spicy pasta bhi kha liye good good
very sweet one
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

awww sahiba that cute
poor Maan, biwi ke pyaar mein spicy pasta bhi kha liye good good
very sweet one


Thanks that you liked it...
I hope I did justice to your scene suggestion...:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: sahibasharma


Thanks that you liked it...
I hope I did justice to your scene suggestion...:)


yup it did
I was expecting cute scene ...it was romantic too , cute toh hai hi
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
yaar it's hard to write..woh bhi not make it big
anyways I tried and not succeed... as I said jyada creative nehi hoon mein so I my scene is inspired urf copy paste from ' how I met your mother ' one particular episode ( copy cat 😆 )
toh it won't fun for many, still because of puppy face pressure I'm posting it but half part ( my beauty sleep time still I typed half ) ...

Deadly Secret

"I so pity you Geet, I bet your life in Canada was better than this . You here and your dearest boyfriend busy with other people "

Geet rolled her eyes at Dev' s remark . It's Dev' s regular chant , he loves to tease Maaneet and no body takes him seriously . All know him well to understand where his mind stays ... Girls , Girls only Girls ... his one and only obsession . But Adi and Pinky gotten serious.

" sach mein agar aasa hua toh " Adi couldn't help and asked her .

" uff guys seriously look at Maan " all eyes went to Maan who talking with a businessman but his eyes continuously on Geet ..." and most important he is my boss here then boyfriend "

" good point " Dev raised his glass with cheeky smile just then Maan came back . Giving soft kiss to her check he muttered sorry .

" Finally another success ..thank you guys "

" oh please thanks vanks ke kaam nehi chalega ...you have to treat us " all agreed together .

" fine you guys deserve it, tomorrow we all going to mall and you guys can buy anything...means a-n-y-t-h..."

" nooo " he stopped hearing her shouting , it was so sudden that Dev's glass fallen on floor.

" what the hell Geet ? It's party " he looked around as all looking curiously at them ...

" sorry I didn't mean to ..but I really can't go "

" Geet tu bhi na...its free from Maan sir how can you say no... we can shop..."

" No means no I'm not going to mall that's it " just like this she went from there making all worried .

Next day except Geet all enjoying lunch together just then Adi brought this topic again .

" Sir did you ever thought why Geet reacted like that ? "

Maan looked uncomfortable " ya she just dont like " he tried to mask it casually, showing them it doesn't matter to him but only he knew what he feeling . This matter not letting him to sleep . He dating Geet for 6 months now and he knows only two thing about her , one she from Canada and other she doesn't believe in marriage . It's not first time she reacted like this , before too many times she did same . What can be the matter . Girls like shopping then why she like this .

" but why she don't like ...main toh bina khay piye pura din shopping kar sakti hoo " Pinky stated with dreamy face making Adi scared .

" huh Pinky we are talking about Geet here ..."

" I know ..." she glared him for breaking her dream in mid

" waise sir why don't you ask her ? I mean she is your girlfriend she will share it "

" no Pinky we trust each other and we promised that we will never force each other for anything "

" yes we know that , even we know that you are an open book , every thing about you on TV or internet ..so basically you have nothing to hide ...but Geet has everything ... I so eager to know how she enjoyed her life there . Damn Canada... you can do anything I so wish "

" Devvv " Maan glared him openly for bringing those ... it's not first time he always tease him but now situation is different .

" you are no fun . Anyways it's her past ..you are his present stop behaving like typical boyfriend . "

" I m not bother about her past ok ..im just I want to know everything about her . I have this right hai na " all nodded looking at his puppy face..

" you know the way she reacted I feel like something big happened in Mall and for that she doesn't want to go there ..."

" ya right must be something big ..and Mall always remind her of that so she doesn't go there..."

" whatever guys it's her personal matter "

" and you are her boyfriend " Adi remind him with cheeky smile ..

" I got it ...it must be po*n. "

They didn't surprise hearing Dev exciting guess as they know his obsession about po*n and didn't give importance.. " trust me guys it should be po*n. Our got sexy hot Geet did something sexy , dirty there and now ashamed of it ..."

" stop it Dev..."

" what it can na. Look at Geet, she has everything to die for and she ..."

" is afraid of marriage ..." Adi told thinking hard " I think she got married at mall...now a days people do it ..."

" Are you guys kidding me ...tum log "

" it's po*n "

" it's marriage "

both party start fighting not caring what Maan saying ...

" fine bet "

" ok slap bet ... loosing party will get a tight slap "

" done...get ready I'm gonna win " Dev Sounds pretty excited which irked Maan .He looked at his friends who getting excited over something which killing him inside . Why he needs enemy his crazy friends is enough.

" did you guys realise I'm here and I'm not gonna ask her because of you guys stupid bet " He was about to go when Dev throw his master stroke

" hooo don't tell me you are afraid ...between in any option you are so gone man..."

" I won't ask her that's it " he announced before going out .
***************


" you are married "

that's the first question he asked seeing Geet who busy eating chips . Her face turn pale" urh... W..ha what are you saying ? "

Maan laughed feeling uneasy " you know na my crazy buddies they were saying it " ' ask her ask her ' his mind keep telling him but he couldn't get courage .

" oh ..ya " she grabed one glass of water n drink it with one go . " umm let's watch movie today what say " she went to turn TV leaving him worried .

" so I was thinking last day may be i planned it wrong , I was so busy thease days , couldn't give you time , it's better if we both spend time together . That's why this whole day is yours . We will watch movie , will go on long drive, lunch at beach ...Shopping...drinking " he tried his luck again but to his surprise Geet turned off TV and looked at him sharply

" you really doing this . You actually want to know why don't like going to mall hai na "

" umm no baby I mean . It's sound weird you are a girl and you don't like..."

" fine I'm not girl "

" but last night i checked you were "

" Mannn " Geet wanted to bang her head on something " can't we just drop it "

" or may be you can just tell me .."

few minutes silent on both side . " fine yes I'm married... I was pretty young and made mistake . But soon he left n me too left Canada "

" whattt " he literary fallen from couch " you married ! And you didn't tell me "

" I'm telling you now "

" but how ? Why ? " He was looking at her as if he saw some ghost and lost his words . Ok fine you divorced him right ? "

" look Maan we were young ...we made mistake "

" you told this part already ...iske baad "

" he just left I didn't get time so..."
Edited by Keepdreaming - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99
next part hopefully tomorrow
Maine bola tha ... mujhse nehi hoga ..see it's so big sorry
next n last coming soonish
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Posted: 7 years ago

kuch bhi nehi...

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