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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 2

Amazing part. Written very beautifully. Maan's question regarding Geet's parents is valid. Actually where are they?

Past. Maan and geet seem to be in so much love. It's unbelievable how the contrast is shown. Hats off to the writing. The more i read past more intriguing it gets. What happened between them? Maan seemed to be head over hills in love with geet. Even Geet's side it seemed her love is so innocent and pure. He is very much worried about the future and says her parents won't agree to this relationship. But geet is trying to make him understand everything will be fine. She was so innocent and naive. She thinks life is easy like movies. Love how she kisses him and hugs him to calm him down. And Maan's love for her is so deep...That part where he said he can't see anything or think anything when she is in his mind it's described beautifully..Maan still has his doubt..Geet asks him to at least try. What will be his answer?

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Posted: 6 years ago

Precap is intriguing. Maan is taunting both naina and geet. Can't wait for the main update.

Pls pls update soon. Thanks for pm. Waiting eagerly...

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu27

Precap is intriguing. Maan is taunting both naina and geet. Can't wait for the main update.

Pls pls update soon. Thanks for pm. Waiting eagerly...

The awesome feedback I have got..not so sure about when I will update..I wanted to update this one today...But thought to give a few more days!!

Edited by WaveTeal - 1 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Very good when I am not here you haven't updated now I am out u updated almost all story of your this unfair 😭 I have to re read all only mortal promise I remember

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: hira2010

Very good when I am not here you haven't updated now I am out u updated almost all story of your this unfair 😭 I have to re read all only mortal promise I remember

Haan toh behen jab main aayi tum gayab...I msged you naa...MP Mp karke tuney mere sapno mein meko daraya when I updated MP you were not here 😪😭

I think you will only have to read Clandestine...DTE ka plot main tumko short mein batau 🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hi commented on page 57!! thank you for the pm!

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Posted: 6 years ago

maan is being soo bad...not lkng this maan at all...daadimaa is rght...if he hates her soo much why getting close to her,,why being soo cheap...and hurting geet lk this ...but i m sure something must have happened soo bad geet nd maan changed soo muchh

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Posted: 6 years ago

Yar ye like button ka kia dushmani hai mere se

100 bar press karna pd rha hai

Hate this new if😡

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Posted: 6 years ago

Finalllyyyyyy after sooo long u updated this awesome story

If there is something called underrated then dte will fall into that catagory baby its just so so awesome n so plz dont stop updating seeing d response or atleast u can continue in blog

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Posted: 6 years ago

Chap 30

Part 1

Very very esssential part n much needed convo between dadi n maan

So dadi did hear maan talking 2 naina

She came to check on geet because of the scream she heard wel but her grandson was doing ☺️ censor thing ha ha now she knows by seeing rooms condition

Wow maan is so cool🤣he is full on fire by answring savitri

Chalo at least ye toh man lia k past me bohot payar kia geet se n so its very possible that he still loves her bas denial me hai

Yar dadi is so sweet she is very right by bringing naina into the convo

Maan agar naina se shadi kar raha hai he better stop messing with geet😡 aur ye tune maan ko bol ne ni diYa he was abt 2 say something abt wedding na? Is he doing some fake drama 2 hurt geet? Kia pata naina se pehle hi setting ho

But he is hurting himself d most n i loved every word spoken by dadi

Beautiful pic n awsome writing 😘

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