MAAN GEET OS UNSULZI DOR - Page 4

Originally posted by: ambeern

Simply superb os

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Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#33CC00">Wow di.. amazing OS..</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#33CC00">This your first story I am reading I guess.. But must say I am impressed..</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#33CC00">Right from the opening scene till the finishing scene I was totally hooked to it..</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#33CC00">The story had quite a suspense factor.. The way the first scene was shown with Geet entering the Mansion & then how all other scenes unfolded with many revelations, it was quite intriguing.. There was no scope of getting bored..</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#33CC00">I even enjoyed your narration style.. Simple & sobre yet very impactful..</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#33CC00">The plot was another amazing factor..</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#33CC00">You have made good use of it..</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#33CC00">Maan's attitude & reaction, Geet's nature & lifestyle, their families every part was very entertaining..</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#33CC00">Even Maan's conflict over whether to believe in Geet or not was so beautifully described..</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#33CC00">His character was a strong outwardly yet so fragile from inside, with having gone through so much..</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#33CC00">All those little little details put up together so intricately..
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#33CC00">Nothing seemed rushed up.. in spite of being a oneshot you managed to put all the correct elements in correct amount in it..
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#33CC00">I thoroughly loved it ( even though as you know I am not a fond of oneshots...)</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#FF3399">PS- RK & MAdhu ka guest appearance was a sweet surprise.. </font>

Thanks umang for the beautiful cmnt
Glad u enjoyed it
I did feel I rushed few things my one of devil member wants more of Sam being insulted and she felt I gave her a rush out
😆 😆

Nice os loved it thanks for pm

Originally posted by: gill123

Nice os loved it thanks for pm

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Loved your story; maan' Arrogance met with a calm and composed Geet!! Loved the way she carried her family's values and the love she's getting made me jealous 😉 hope the competition will soon turn into a lovely bonding

Originally posted by: Niharika.Nair

Loved your story; maan' Arrogance met with a calm and composed Geet!! Loved the way she carried her family's values and the love she's getting made me jealous 😉 hope the competition will soon turn into a lovely bonding

Thanks for cmnt

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

R u by any chance threatening me soph...no,right
Ok if u insist I will update after 7months for sure you will forget than no issues for not updating

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

Thanks for such a lovely cmnt soph
U lobbb rk yet u don't knew his full nAme
Haan Geet have a protective family while maan had calculative parents

Waise Geet ne idiot maan ko reject karhi Diya 😆 😆

maaneet had child marriage.but maan could'nt accept it as marriage n is getting engaged to sameera.sad.he insulted geet saying that she is after him 4 his money.loved her reply.she came only 4 divorce...she will get hitched to Rishab.oh.sad.loved maan realizing that geet is not an illiterate poor village girl like he thought.loved geet arjun brij relationship.on the show geet didnt have good brothers.maan regretting insulting geet was nice.so rishab geet r not getting married.its rishab n madhu.that was a relief n a surprise. So here Madhu is not Geet's look alike?Maan apologizing to Geet was nice.but sad that she is not interested in his friendship as they r only competitors. but the last sentence u wrote that rejection can be the start of their story gives hope that slowly their relationship will grow n they will all 4 each other.but still I wish for one more part.Need Maaneet luv story

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