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Posted: 7 years ago
gr8 part..
hope its not a big accident or something
cont.soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
Very nice. What happened to maan? Poor geet.
Please update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow.awsm update dear.waiting fr nxt.thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
maan try to hide his pain and blood mark too
but geet noticed
now all worried for geet that how dadi react
hope maan is in geet side
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fabulous Chapter

Geet didn't feel like going back home she wanted to stay with her husband
though at her house everyone was happy and treated her just like a princess
time was passing and Maan still did not arrive and Geet was angry on him
but the moment he arrived Geet's cousins her father and brother all surrounded him
but Geet notice blood on his shirt and he could not even eat properly and she in her concern
ask him but he tries to brush it off making her whole family worried
Geet's mom is worried as Geet is only one day married and what will her in laws say about Maan's state
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thnx 4 update
Feeling sry 4 geet
Hope maan's mom don't blame geet 4 d small accident
Hope maan will stand by geet

Originally posted by: Ramjanki

Chapter 5



me- bhabhi ur bhai is here to take u back for pagphere
causing her heart to sank

she didn't want to go
that's strange .
she look at meera
me- chaliye dadi is calling u . ur brother brij veerji is here to take u for pagphere

for that moment she litrelly feel that she wanna hide somewhere not want to go back leaving her hubby behind.
She wanna go to him and tell him to stop her not that her family love her less. But still she feel a belongingness with him .

..

Maan come downstairs as nakul inform him that geet & his brother are leaving .
That's when geet actuallly see him after their encounter . savitri told maan was busy bcoz he need now to appoint some trustworthy person that handle kc branch their in absence of his and nxt now he need to take over kc in delhi .
So he has no option to deal with all this .

..
She look at him as he come till door to drop them . how much she wanna shout to him to not let her go but she lacked courage and finally with heavy heart she left .

..

Her family welconed her like some VIP enter in house for the first time . her maa cried hugging her with tears of happiness in her eyes.
And the following day passed with everyone just revolving around geet

geet look at clock it's 8 and no sign of maan .
Geet call damadji - her mother rano said causing her to become tensed what will she say?

she don't even have his number?
what was so improtant that he forgot he has a newly wedded wife?

her couson and the relative present who come to meet her ask her so many question about her new family and all .

but this girl was keep looking at watch and look till now her hubby didn't come .

G- geet tu hi jalli h .
subah s pagal ho gyi h tu . unhe deko meri parvah bhi nhi .
ab nhi krni mujhe baat .


saying so she hide her face in pillow on the verge of crying felling so much sad all of sudden
...

Rano come in geet room worried
R- u said something geet?
U did anything wrong?
Damadji is still not here to take u back .
Call him now!

Geet won't deny she feel bad very bad at that moment . her mother is doubting she did wrong?
Rather than taking her side

R CALL DAMADJI NOW GEET
Ur father & dadi too getting wortied and above it all relatives were asking about him since past 2 hrs . i don't want anyone to say anyone bad about you or our upbringing .

Her heart sank
He didn't come how it is her fault?
She doesn't have his no. Bcoz they never give her chance to talk to him .
Still she married just bcoz her family is superiour to her
And now she become so much alone?
What change in one night that her maa is questining her?
When her one cousin come running in her room
c- massi jijaji is here

causing rano to take a breath of releif
finally!

All rush outside to greet him . but geet was last one to cone and clearly not happy . she is angry with him.

She observed him he touch her mother & father feet and apologized for delay. hugged her brother and greeted her stupid cousins .
Who were roaming around her SOLE HUSBAND like SHAHAD PAR MAKKI.
He gave her smile but she didn't reciplocated but they never get privacy as all her relatives take him inside & just take seats around him asking questions.
He was given treatment like some movie star enter in their house .

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Dinner was set and brij & her father guide maan toward dinning table .
Her maa ordered her to sit beside damadji . she unwillingly sit beside him but can't stop glancing him when her eyes widen as she saw mark of blood on his shirt and that's when she notice him properly he was facing problem in eating with his right hand .

She get up immidatly worried
G- aapki shirt pr
Blood
Voh

M- nothing geet relax
Calm down

Rano and all get worried instantly
R- beta kya hua h ?
M- nothing
Just choti is chot h

G- nhi maa yeh
R- geet take him to ur room . i'm calling doctor
M- don't worry
It's a small scratch
i'm fine no need to call doctor

B- nhi jiju
M- trust me
Rano look at maan worried then at geet who was almost on the verge of crying

R- geet khadi kyun h ?
Take him to ur room

Maan followed geet dissapointed he tried hard to not let them know but here it is!
..

Rano glance worried toward mohinder ( geet father)

R- i don't know how savitri ji react . i hope that not create trouble for geet .
Abhi shadi ko ek din bhi nhi hua

..


ps : if u don't want me to give one update in a month or two then tey to give comments .
i'll not be updating if i don't get 35 cmnts . for that i don't mind if i need to wait for a month


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Posted: 7 years ago
Ufff maan met with minor accident... But hell broke on handa and Geet is worried as well as disappointed...
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for the pm and update

Part 5

splendid update! well written!

Geet does not want to leave but helpless! she is sad that she has to leave! Geet's family worried as Maan as not arrived to fetch her! hated that her mom accused her! Geet does not even have his number!

Geet restless and upset! Maan finally arrives and is treated with all respect! Maan is injured and Geet tensed!

wonder what happened to Maan?

Rano worried if SD will blame Geet!

Maaneet need to get to know each other! hope they will go on HM so that they can be alone!

update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice part. In one day only geet was so attached with maan that she didn't want to leave maan . But later on when he got late to.came ,she got amgry. I hate such kind of.soceity who blames girl for everything. Maan has some blood strain on her shirt which was indicating his injury. Rano is worried thinking what savitri devi will think. Waiting for next dear

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