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@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 11

Posted: 7 years ago

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Kkiran

@Kkiran

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

nostalgia... its been a while since that scene was played lol Cute story!

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

truly reliving GHSP again
after reading it same thought running in my mind story should have gone this way
maan n his family love care its beautiful
I just love the name of this story

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

its may be simple but beautiful. ..now missing maaneet more

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

I liked this happy version of their story. Happy that geet gave birth to her child for whom she started this fight against her family and world. No doubt it was possible with the help of maan. It was possible b'coss of him and dadi who supported her in her whole journey. Geet named her after his mother's name in gratitude. Nice and simple OS.

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Nefret19

@Nefret19

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

You brought me down memory lane with this one. Awesomely written & I definitely prefer this track than the one that actually happened. A beautiful journey, union & their symbol of love.

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@Pqwert207

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

Loved the happy version

It was farr far better than the original plot

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

thanks you for sharing this!

tremendous OS! beautifully written!

Remembering GHSP! but enjoyed your version much more better! Wish you were one of the writers of the serial! imagine what it would be like...😃

Liked how Maan was there for through good times and bad times! glad she was the one that changed Maan and made believe in love!

finally they are married and are one!

great that Geet at last got a loving hubby and family!

admire that Maan takes time and pampers Geet!

now they are parents! Loved seeing them so happy! It was sweet and thoughtful of Geet to name the baby after his mom!

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

beautiful one
so wish it same in show too
Geet did so much for that child and good to see them happy with baby
truly it's because of him

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Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

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Nice story. This is something i want to read after miscarriage track. How it would be if that child survived. Small incidents n sweet gestures n small family. Seems no world can interfere here. They had passed all stroms together being as strength for each other. Breakfast table scene was funny but when maan massaged geet's feet its really heart touching moment. Wonderful i enjoyed it throughly.