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Posted: 7 years ago
#31
Hello sonia dear. Yes, you are right. You should go for a spicy unconventional plot.
How about a two part os with epilogue.

How's this:1) Geet is a timid little girl. She only has her father who is trapped in jail. Maan meets her in the lawyer office. He falls in love with her. Then he helps her gather evidences and frees her dad. They both get married happily.

Or try this one: 2) Geet is a simple girl. She becomes target of spoilt brats in college. They bully and harass her. Maan is her senior who loves her madly. He trains her in martial arts and helps gain confidence. She teaches a stern lesson to her tormentors. Then maaneet become inseparable.

I could only think of two. Actually I was wondering if you could write some mystery story. You know like unknown heroine types. Girl who takes it on her own to save the planet. And maan guides her in the quest. Else like geet is a police detective and maan is her companion. Both solve a crime and help arrest terrorists or mafia don gangs.

Please think about the ideas and let me know. Waiting for you to update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

soniaji where u lost ji


Mahi I m gonna write OS on ur ideas. It ll be interesting. I just hav to put in words, what to write I have decided.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: aparna3011

I am very very good reader but about writing don't know w of it

but waiting for your new story always

u r really a wonderful reader
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: zida

Some think like
Maan cheat on geet
And give her divorce
But after some time
He rilze for whom he cheated geet
She only love money
Then he met geet
But geet is already happily married with someone
And also.prgnet or have baby



Aww one one wonderful idea. I am confused which to pick. U guys gave me lots of options
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: suhaaana

it's a one night stand kind of di

maaneet had ONS five years back and that incident resulted them having a son which geet raises. Maan doesn't even know anything until an accident reveals him that he fathered a son and he will fight tooth and nail to win the custody and will win but he slowly understands mother's love seeing his son and Geet and falls for her.


Suhi nice story one night stand always comes out to be different. Sachi kahu coincidentally I think some thing like this happeend in US/ UK
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: turbulence

Hello sonia dear. Yes, you are right. You should go for a spicy unconventional plot.

How about a two part os with epilogue.

How's this:1) Geet is a timid little girl. She only has her father who is trapped in jail. Maan meets her in the lawyer office. He falls in love with her. Then he helps her gather evidences and frees her dad. They both get married happily.

Or try this one: 2) Geet is a simple girl. She becomes target of spoilt brats in college. They bully and harass her. Maan is her senior who loves her madly. He trains her in martial arts and helps gain confidence. She teaches a stern lesson to her tormentors. Then maaneet become inseparable.

I could only think of two. Actually I was wondering if you could write some mystery story. You know like unknown heroine types. Girl who takes it on her own to save the planet. And maan guides her in the quest. Else like geet is a police detective and maan is her companion. Both solve a crime and help arrest terrorists or mafia don gangs.

Please think about the ideas and let me know. Waiting for you to update.


These are unique ideas. . I think I need learn martial art
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
I wash to read this kind of story too😆

Maan nd Geet..very ambitious..only focus on their career!Don't want anything that bound them in a relationship...main focus is only business!
But they need a heir for their huge empire resp!They have never met in their life..even for once!

So Maan and Geet opted for surrogacy..and got their resp babies(actually twins..but I wish gender of both babies should be same...either boys or girls)
Their resp kids give them new meaning of life..and make them to fall in love..
How Maaneet meeting coz of kids..how they fall in love..that and all i don't know!But finally want Maaneet happy 😉
I know its like ur MPM...but in that Geet was 1st poor na...
And I want both the kids here to be devil and torture their parents🤣
The stroy must be filled with kids naughtiness and full of happiness and comedy😆like when reading..we should forget all our worries!!

If you can..please do write and ff or an ss on this..I am not compleeling you didu..just a request😊


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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
And also a story like..Maan is mentally unstable..due to sm accident or some incident!and Geet is normal
Both get married..reason is family!!

I have read stories in which Geet is mentally unstable..but not on Maan😆
So would like to read such stuff

My list is going on increasing🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Madhu..

I wash to read this kind of story too😆

Maan nd Geet..very ambitious..only focus on their career!Don't want anything that bound them in a relationship...main focus is only business!
But they need a heir for their huge empire resp!They have never met in their life..even for once!

So Maan and Geet opted for surrogacy..and got their resp babies(actually twins..but I wish gender of both babies should be same...either boys or girls)
Their resp kids give them new meaning of life..and make them to fall in love..
How Maaneet meeting coz of kids..how they fall in love..that and all i don't know!But finally want Maaneet happy 😉
I know its like ur MPM...but in that Geet was 1st poor na...
And I want both the kids here to be devil and torture their parents🤣
The stroy must be filled with kids naughtiness and full of happiness and comedy😆like when reading..we should forget all our worries!!

If you can..please do write and ff or an ss on this..I am not compleeling you didu..just a request😊


Yaar yeh sab waise he hai.. Geet was not poor ya but helpless due to sudden crises in business. Which forced her to be surrogate for Maan.. But I ll try
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Madhu..

And also a story like..Maan is mentally unstable..due to sm accident or some incident!and Geet is normal
Both get married..reason is family!!

I have read stories in which Geet is mentally unstable..but not on Maan😆
So would like to read such stuff

My list is going on increasing🤣



This one is really catchy.Even I also loving it.My story TU Meri Zindgi Hai is based on Geet's madness. But still on hold.

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