Mistress complete MG OS updated - Page 9

Originally posted by: chauhan1796

congratulations for another master piece of yours
awesome story ...
Geet married to a man who just treated her like a trash ...she met Maan who saved her life and now she becomes the reason for his breath ...
there is no name for their realtion but they both know it's not needed ...
they love eachother and can't live without each other

Originally posted by: Kawan

awesome os..

loved it..

I don't have much to say except that it's better to keep some relation unnamed sometime.. and they are okay with this situation then they shouldn't be concerned about the rest of the world...

Originally posted by: vasavi_sri

Nice OS

Woman who ran away to protect herself

From her husband and his friends

He was a person who saved her

He has no reason to name there

Relation between them but they are bound

To each other by love

Originally posted by: tabby999

Definitely different.

Some relations can't be named in front of society but people living it know how good and pure they r for them .same with maneet ..maan can't marry geet and geet can't leave him coz others will not let her live peacefully .so it's better to be with one who can protect u .

Thanks for the os

Waiting for next

Originally posted by: aparna3011

amazing story

maan save geet from her husband n his friend who wants to rape her

maan is also married but for namesake only with out love

geet know she need him more than he needs her

geet know she is protected with maan even though cant name their relation so she is with him by her will

Originally posted by: leenuguru

Interesting OS
Geet was hurt by her husband deeds
Maan who saved her life
Loving it

Originally posted by: jssood

beautiful os

maaneet are compliment to each other without marriage

Originally posted by: Sweetkamalini15

Wonderful update ...

Geet's husband was a beast...

Thankfully geet run away from there...

Love the way maan save geet...

Love it...

Thanks for the PM...

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

First of all I don't give comments where I repeat only in few words what I read. Like as giving a verification that it had read it. What you think about this one up to you As this is the first writing of yours I am reading.

In one page you described real face of so called society, where how many Geets exists no one knows and numerous Maans too.Everybody abandoned her. He saved her.Yes she is right if she hadn't chosen herself for one Man/Maan, many Beasts might have made her one night feast.

My opinion is if she had left with no other option, but what about him? Why he chose her. So funny was he searching for solace on roads n suddenly she came in front of him n he found that.

For time being she had everything, but there is no acceptance. What about later part of life? There is no future for girl like her. Who becomes mistress becoz she has no place to go. Some do it willingly they have all the doors open. She loves him but what about him ? Comfort of few hours, not life long commitment in front of whole world! Man like him lives two lives where body belongs to society he lives, but shadow belongs to the darkest part of same world.

There is always more lust n possessiveness it is obvious but for her its love.

You might take it as review for your wonderful piece of writing.😆 This is based on the points you raised. Really loved it. Some day if I steal your plot for full fledge fiction that ll be not surprising. But with your permission. Main chori nahi karti.Main chor nahi hun 😭

I comment rarely on others works but if I do it comes from my heart n you forced me to do that.

Love you.

Originally posted by: swapna.p

Nice os..

maan saved geet ..

Geet is staying with maan..

Maaneet is solace to each other ..

Thank you for pm..