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@Geet980

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Thank you for the pw and pm.

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Tris

@astrisa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

I will be honest. I was fooled.

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Tris

@astrisa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Outstanding erotic hot os. ☺️

I loved the chemistry between maaneet.

Maan is her ashiq nd she enjoys being loved by him.

He knows her so well.

The gif is drool - worthy

Loved how u have written it. 👏

Both are so much attracted 2 each other. I was pretty sure that geet is having some affair with her ashiq. Nd the dialogues of all ur stories r so unique nd entertaining. It gives a feel of outstanding imagination nd scene depictness. I love them.

The naughty maan is a treat 2 read.nd geet being bold is a cherry on top.

Truly sizzling lovemaking. But oops someone has interrupted their lovemaking session. Is that her hubby? 😉

Maan is so shameless lol. But he loves her so much. I dont know how u do it. But noticed one thing.

In every story of urs u have this magic that u can write show intense passionate chemistry within maaneet. Even if they r long stories or short.

Maan is leaving 4 a few days nd so all he wants is 2 spend some time with geet. The way she reacted to his trip was adorable.

Loved how maan said i love u when geet cribbed "aap bohot bure ho"

Wilson 😆 that was hilarious. Wrong timing mr cat

It's a delight 2 read this os. It was so sizzling at the same time left a smile into my face because of the humor in this.

Loved it so much. Waiting eagerly for more os from u.

Thanks 4 pm baby nd love u for this entertaining sensuous os. ❤️

Edited by curtus - 7 years ago

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: AYAZU12
hot and erotic os...
so maan and geet were just playing that they are cheating their husband who was maan himself though I guessed it but still hoped it to be true...ohh wilson saw them in that condition ab kya hoga hehe...loved it dear thnx a lot for the pm...

I am glad that you liked the os Ayazu. Thank you very much for your lovely feedback. 😃

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: lovepooo
Ufff so hot update
You are amazing writer
It's so passionate update
Thanku for pm

Thank you so very much dearie. 😃

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: curtus
ha ha congrats again baby for the new os😆

Hahahha...yeah...Thanks sweets!! 😆😉

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: curtus
☺️ such an erotic hot os omg
Lemme read it with full concentration
Jaldi dungi feedback
Thanks baby for this amazing one shot

Thank you for always being so motivating baby!!! ⭐️

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: nakh5683
Awesome update great os so funny yet so erotic geet was missing her hubby love she had a plan for her hubby not knowing that her devil husband has a plan off his own as he pounced on her while geet was having a bath both getting lost in each other playing a role of geet and her aashiq maan until someone interrupt them it was their neighbor looking for her lost cat maan was totally enjoying his wify cute gussa he wanted to punish her in his way maan had to go to Hyderabad for 2 days so he wanted to be with geet as much as possible it would have happened if the wretched cat hadn't interrupted their cute romantic moment making maan irritated while geet enjoyed his expression

Thank you so much dearie for your awesome feedback. I am glad that you liked it..😃

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: bgr_80
Nice update

Thanks sweets. But please avoid using such short comments because india forums deletes such short one liners. And do read the note when you read an update.