Story (1) - If only he knew [Completed]

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Hi guys!

This is an anthology of seven short stories, each of them inspired by my all time favorite songs.

First story would be out by tonight.

Edit: So, this story is going to be a little lengthier so making separate threads for each of the stories.



Song One - Manmarziyan / Story One - If Only he knew

Index

Chapter one - Page one

Chapter two - Page two

Chapter Three - Page Three

Chapter Four - Page Three

Chapter Five - Page Four

Chapter Six - Page Five

Chapter seven - Page seven

Chapter Eight - Page Nine

Chapter Nine - Page Eleven

Chapter Ten - Page Fourteen

Chapter Eleven - Page Fifteen

Chapter Twelve (Last) - Page Fifteen

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Story (2) - With Love, Maan.
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this type concept to good ... I still can't get over love waltz
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you always come with different thing ..like one Twins of heart os series ...beautiful
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Congrats on this!

interesting concept!

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Nice concept...

Waiting for the first story !!!
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Novel ideas nd so many stories ...from Ur stories itna tho pata hai ki u r fan of AR Rehman nd old songs,tracks u select for Ur stories r always soul touching ..nd now seven songs .wow ,I m waiting to know Ur favorites agn ...
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Song : Manmarziyan

Story One - If Only he Knew

Chapter One

It wasn't everlasting, nor was it perfect. My first love left me broken as much as it had made my stomach flip in numerous amounts of times. But do I wish to rewrite it, if given a chance?

Damn no.

If I have to get my heart broken again, I would rather get it done by Maan, the utterly clueless Maan.

He was my brother's best friend, by virtue of which, I am out of bounds for him. Not that he would look at me otherwise also. He was...tall and handsome, and most importantly kind. Yes, kindness, the most underrated thing ever. He was kind to everyone, even me.

I had always known him, seen him around with my brother Vicky so much, that it surprised me when I met him alone once.

I was at the lake, minding my own business. The tears were dried up, but I didn't have enough courage to go home and meet my family, who would catch upon my dark mood even from a distance.

My phone buzzed and I didn't want to check the phone again. My hands fisted around it, having an urge to throw the blasted thing in the lake, if only that would make the creep give it a rest.

My knuckles turned white and I was indeed contemplating throwing my phone, when I heard a voice behind me.

"Hey it said.

I was quite not expecting any one intruding on my alone time that I dropped the phone on my feet accidentally.

There he was, Maan, standing before me, with his guitar bag slung on his arm, seeming just out of his guitar class.

"I saw you on my way to the class and realized you're still here. I just wanted to check if everything is alright?

See! Kind.

"If I say it is not, are you going to call my brother?

He shook his head. "I would respect your privacy he said taking his seat next to me. "What is the matter, if you mind me asking that is

I don't know why I did, what I did, but I picked up my phone, lying on my feet, unlocked it and gave it to him.

He was quite surprised, I could tell, but he took it all the same.

There were thirty unread messages, not indecent per se, but very annoying. All of them were asking just one thing; asking me out on a date to prom.

It was simple, sweet even, to have someone asking you out on prom. Just that, it isn't that simple. Rishi had dated my best friend, and had broken up with her less than twenty four hours ago and had the balls to ask me out to the prom. I did not want my best friend thinking I betrayed her.

If I could, I would punch Rishi, but that meant touching him, so I am better off without it.

"Do you want to go out on prom with him?

"Isn't my answer evident?

He smiled. "Why don't you tell him so?

"If he had the brains to break up with my best friend and ask me out on the same day, I thought he would be able to figure out my silence too

Maan looked at me for a while in speculative silence.

"Do you trust me? he had asked.

"Will I regret answering that?

He had smiled, his dimples showing.

"Tell me

"I trust you

"Good. Now do as I say. Text him back

"What am I supposed to tell him?

"Tell him you've a boyfriend and that you're going to prom with him

"And where will I conjure this imaginary person from

"Right next to you he smiled. "Go to prom with me, and take my name if he asks who your boyfriend is

If the day long proceedings hadn't messed up my mind, this surely has.

"What!?

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Chapter Two

It took me some time to wrap my head over what Maan was suggesting.

But when I did, I was as shocked as I was initially.

"What?" I asked him stupidly, to which he didn't reply, just looked at another text I got on my phone from Rishi, before handing it over to me.

"Why would you want to take me to prom?"

"I haven't asked anybody yet" he shrugged. "Plus I would be doing Vicky a huge favor if I take you"

The more I thought about it, the more insane it seemed, but also the more fitting.

Vicky, my brother obviously would have a huge stress off his chest, if he just let his best friend play unofficial chaperone to me all night.

Plus, there need not be any checking over Maan being on his best behavior for the night. There was quite a dead end of him coming on to me. I could even doubt myself for misbehaving with him, but he wouldn't do anything of that sorts.

This, I was sure. Even Vicky would be. So chances are Vicky would be more than glad.

And this is going to solve Rishi's problem. Rishi might be an asshole but he isn't going to mess with a senior's girlfriend.

But the problem is, do I want a pity date? I'd rather stay home like a loser that I am and do a marathon of Sherlock.

That, is better than going to prom anyday.

However, I don't want the pity that would follow me later, neither do I want to be the one that would be subjected to all Instagram extravaganza of my class fellows.

"I'm sorry for assuming" Maan ventured slowly.

"Do you want to go on prom with me?"

I looked at him then and if I wasn't in such a bad mood, I'd gave laughed.

How innocent, I would have thought.

Maan Khurana is a heartthrob, although he doesn't care about the craze. Here, he was asking me and assuming if I dare say no to him. How endearing. How ironic.

"Do anybody not want to go with you?" I wanted to ask.

But he isn't a friend of mine to be all chummy. This, whatever conversation we had so far in itself is one of its kind. Happened for the first time. I thought, this was enough.

"I'll go with you" I told him. "But if you want to take someone else, I guess the pity date can wait. I've other plans"

Maan looked a little taken aback by my lack of brain to mouth filter, but didn't comment or oppose vehemently to the pity date line. At least he has honesty.

"Okay then" he said getting up.

"You want me to drop you home?"

"I got my cycle"

"You should go home" he said quietly. "Your family would be worried"

I nodded, getting up.

"Don't tell Vicky about Rishi"

Maan was about to say something before I cut him. "I know it will put you in an awkward position because if there's no Rishi, there's no need for you to go out with me.

But you know Vicky, I don't want him to go punch Rishi."

"I won't take his name"

"Thank you"

And that's how had the most important day of an average teenager had been drafted.

Vicky was surprised when Maan asked him if he could take me. You know about the universal bro code enough to understand sisters of best friends are off limits.

But Vicky was more confused than being concerned. If I heard him right, his reaction was "Geet, why her?"

Yeah brother, thank you very much.

"We are going as friends" Maan assured him. "It's better than going with random people whom we won't see eye to eye again"

Vicky agreed to it. Maan had a breakup recently so Vicky understood why he didn't want a date. And he was a little relieved that I don't want a date.

Again, thank you brother.

However, on the supposed prom night, I really wanted to do nothing but to pick up the first available dress, but the photographs are going to be documented for life, so I gave up the pretense and put up with my mom and aunt dolling me up.

The heels hurt but it made me look bearabale standing next to Maan, because I won't be looking like a dwarf anymore.

It was an okay night, the entire class looked jubiliant for being able to dress up like pinapple pudding and do dirty dancing and sneak in cheap drinks.

I, on the other hand was glad to find my best friend on talking terms with me again, after we sorted that Rishi was an ass.

Still, that night would remain fresh in my memory because of one stupid decision on my part.

"G, it is his senior year. I think you should stop hanging out with me and have one final dance with him" my best friend Maya told me.

And I took the advice. And the rest, as you know, is history.
Edited by ChandlerBing - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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not bad geet got ready made boyfriend
isn't maan too straight still sweet
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Heartbroken angry Geet and kind Maan gives her helping hand...nyyyccc
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And congratulation for this new start

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