Thread 1 Maaneet FF : 'GULLAM' (thread 2 pg 1) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for New FF with unique concept 'Maan as Gullam'...excited for update...!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for new story
Amazing concept
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Congratulations on your new story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Concept is Captivating

Maan singh Khurana a businessmen during weekdays but a slave over the weekends
that's a tough life for him
and it seems like he stands alone his wife will not support him if he leaves been a slave to his FIL
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting concept dear.wl love to read.sent you buddy rqst.plz accept.
Edited by priyarthiroy75 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazinggg prologue
really different concept
so maan is slave
eagerly waiting for 1st part
pls cont. soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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yes i read this before, and than forgoten, if u are going to finish than start otherwise we will forget agai .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: idunno

yes i read this before, and than forgoten, if u are going to finish than start otherwise we will forget agai .


I never updated this ff

But I send this concept to some people for review

Maybe you are one of that some people
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Gullam chapter 1
Friday night ...A black Audi A7 enters the main gate of "Khurana Mansion" passing through the driveway car stopped just outside the main door of the mansion ... quickly driver come out from the car and open the back door for his boss ...and the next moment his boss comes out wearing grey tux with white shirt grey tie and black shoes and then with long steps he enters the house
"Maan bete aap aa gye" yes the man is maan Singh Khurana M.D of KC and the owner of the house than maan look towards the old lady who's setting the dining table
Old lady : waha kya Khade aayiye khana tyar hai kha lijiye warna thanda hojayega apka favourite banaya hai humne aj(why are you still standing there come and eat I have made uour favourite dishes )(old lady said while placing the dishes on the table)
Maan : nhi dadima ( and the lady is savitri Devi Khurana maan's dadima his only family ...blood related)...nhi dadima mujhe bheravgarh k liye nikalna hai late ho jayega ...khana khane ka time nhi hai ..(no dadima I has to leave for bheravgarh it's already getting late I don't have any time to eat food)..he said while going towards the huge staircase which leads towards his room .

But his dadi stops him from behind ...and he halts his steps without turning back

Dadi : maan ...ye kab tak chalega ...har baar apko samjhate hai chod dijiye waha Jana wo apka kuch nhi bigad sakte ...aap pade likhe business man hai fir bhi aap is gullami ki dandal mai kyo phase hue hai...kyo aap hume humari barso purane galti ki pal pal saza dete hai chod kyo nhi dete un logo ko... is gullami ko ( she said while crying) (maan why don't you leave all this...those people can't do anything to eat...you are a well educated business man then why you are still stuck in this slavery ...why you are punishing me for the mistake I did ages ago

Then maan turn towards her said

Maan : mai apko koi saza nhi de rha dadima...salo pehle apne Jo kiya wo apki majboori thi...mai ek gullam hoon dadima...aur ek gullam jab tak gullam rehta hai tab tak uska Malik use is bandhan se muqt Na Kare...aur mere Malik ne mujhe muqt nhi kiya hai...aap please mujhe aise har baar mat rokne ki koshish nhi Kara Kare ...

After saying that he left from there to his room to pack his small duffle bag

After some time he come to the living room with his bag wearing grey shirt and blue denims ...when he saw his dadima still at the same place ...he tried to pass her without saying a word but his dadima stopped his

Dadima : rukiye maan ...hum apko nhi rokenge kyonki hum Jante hai aap nhi rukne wale par Jane se pehle apko apne hatho se khana toh khila sakte hai (she said with teary eyed)

He simply nods and both move towards the dining table ..
Maan sat on the head table while dadima starts serving his plates after that she make him eat with her own hand

Dadima : pta nhi apko waha khana bhi milta hai ya nhi ...she said choking

Maan : Dadima he said with a sigh ...take the place from her hand and places it on the table and hug her

Maan : aap kyo dukhi hoti hai dadima ...meri life jaisi bhi hai mai khush hoon mujhe koi shikayat nhi hai...Na khudse Na kisi aur se ...aap bhi mere liye itna pareshan Na hoya karo ...and then he kiss her forehead and left

Dadima (to herself) : kash wo humari zindagi mai din nhi aya hota toh humare maan ki zindagi aisi nhi hoti

Flashback
Khuranas was a reputed and rich family of Delhi ...rajinder Singh Khurana ...husband of savitri Devi Khurana died when maan was 2 year old...after him their son rajveer Singh Khurana handled his all business...and to help him rajveer's cousin sanjay and his family came from Chandigarh to help them and share their sorrow... unaware of that the same people will be the reason of their downfall...they happily let them live in their house

One day when maan was 7 ...his parents died in a road accident

Savitri was devastated after losing her son and daughter in law ...she was an educated lady ...well trained and fully capable to handle the business,...but the situation made her weak...first she lost her husband than her son and daughter in law in just a span of few year ...and that time sanjay come forward to handle the business and his wife mansion and savitri happily let them thinking that they're family...she didn't knew that those people are going to snatch her everything

One night savitri was going towards kitchen to get water when she heard commotion from the backside of the mansion ...she goes towards the door which leads to the the backyard ...she was going to open the door when she heard the known voice "sab tyari hi gyi hai" then she recognised that voice..."budhiya Apne us pote maan ko school chodne jayegi ...raste Mai hi dono Ka kaam tamam ho jayega dono ki laash bhi nhi milegi " savitri was shocked beyond words..Sanjay whom she thought not less than her son can even think about killing her and her maan ...then she heard a laugh which she recognised is of Sanjay wife Sheela
Sheela : hahahaha ab bas ek din aur ...aur ye Khurana ki saari property humari ...aur wo budhiya aur uska pota upar...

then savitri heard both of them laughing evilly...she don't know what to do ...her body started shivering...but she doesn't have any time to even shiver she have to think fast ..then she thought to leave from there in the night itself ...she'll go so far from there taking maan with her that no one will be able to find her ever ...she quickly went to her room take a small duffle bag and add some of her necessary items and two -three clothes then she went to maan's room and packed his clothes in her bag too ...then she goes towards the bed where maan's sleeping...she caressed his head lovingly and then picked a sleepy maan in one shoulder and bag on other shoulder...and then she sneaked out from the house like a thief...she breath a sigh of relief when she successfully comes out from the mansion but coming out from the mansion is not enough ...danger was still there...she have to act fast and leave the town forever...then she take a auto rickshaw from the main road and told him to drop them at the bus stop ...as there was still night ...no bus was ready to go ...so she thought to rest till morning on the nearby bench ...

Her old body was tired...so...she fall asleep even when she tried to stay awake...after sometime her sleep broke...and then check the time... there was still 3 hours left for the first bus to leave ...then she looked at maan who was sleeping peacefully on her lap...and again fell sleep

Her sleep broke after hearing some noises...after rubbing her eyes...she see that it's morning now..and people has started seating on the bus ...and then she heard someone saying that bus is ready to leave after 15 minutes ...after picking up her bag and maan who was still sleeping she immediately went to the ticket counter which is now opened to buy a random ticket ...there's two more persons in the line before her... when they done buying ...she bought the ticket for the last stop where the bus was going


Precap : more of flashback.

Please do like and comment guyz ... only your comments motivate a writer to write more




Edited by _Greylicious_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's interesting... You should continue... intriguing beginning..

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