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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#431

Thriller update. As you said nothing is normal in their life not even supposed HM. Maan had to save her and his hesitation in getting intimate with her was natural but for him, she comes before anything else. Maybe this drastic event had to happen before they could break the last barrier between them.

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meena..

@meena..

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#432

Awesome update
Loved it
Hope maan saves geet
Continue soon

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rsusmita

@rsusmita

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#433

Finally maan saved geet

Waiting for next part

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#434

oboviously maan will bring his mitthu back...have faith on maan...angel n mitthu r made fr each other...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Edited by love2_soma - 7 years ago

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#435

Shocking part. It was such a big incident. Maan did everything to save geet but at the end he also lost his conscious. Someone helped them but Grey's condition is critical. Maan is completely broken. He is praying for his mithu's life only. Doctor asked him to give geet his body heat to save her. Maan was reluctant first as it is not what his conscious going to allow him to do but for sake geet, he is ready to do anything. Waiting for next dear

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#436

Di... hua u ki... i had lastt read till maan cooming from his trip from mumbai ...

so u know now...its lke reading the last 3 parts in a goo...

and wat actually happened is main to fb open kiya and der i saw the post ...kii mi updatin...nd i was like😃😃 wow kal read karti hu...abhi so jaati hu...nd was jus goin to scrooll down and saw a comment ...say dont kill geet ..bring her back ..etc and i was like😕 haila ...abhi toh dono honeymoon ja rahe they ... i mean road trip nd ye kya hua..nd den kya went all the way to read the update...

commin to update..Dadi toh heheheh!!!!!!!!!!! jus loved her bickering with priya nd geet on mil hai jealous n all..hehhe dat was fun ...to see der bonding ..actuually sach hi toh hai ...dis all are tied in a bond na...diffrent bond ...from start...and i love der love for each other...

nd u know since i had read that comment i was reading the update ...nd jis tarah aapne mention kiya ..traffic and crossing ...i thought geet met wit an accident while crossing...

arey sachmain...di... koi confuse hota agar aapne yeh geet ka condition ka teaser dalta tho..main kya kisiko be yeh hi lagta...

aapne trafic and crossin ko leke itna zor diya us point pay...😕

but all the way all the trip how cheerful maan nd geet was ..nd not to forget the way dey bcame cosy under the tree drenched in rain ...isshhh!!!!!!!!!!😳

but then never in my dreams thought about such a mishap...but den accidents do occur...

nd it never comes sayin... but this ...yaar kabhi nahi socha inka road trip...aisa mod pay ley aayega...

can understand maan ka predicament ... mithu is his life his everything..his breath ...nd kaisse nai jump karta woh...useke jaan ke peeche peeche usey bachane...

even he is hurt..he too was in water for long ..but that fall nd fear nd over to it already excisting cold had added a toll on geets health and her health detoriated...

u know di ..the situation is tense...but i was like 😳😳 ... me and my guutter mind...SORRY DI 😛😛😭

understand maan will hesitaate ...ho na q ... Maan hai ye..but Di on second thought ...thank god geet ney ... woh drunk acting karke ..maan ka seede raste ley aayi...warna socho socho kya hota

i know he is feearing and hesitating to get intimate with her but situation is worst ..nd he has to ...der is no ifs n buts...nd seeing geet respondin to his touch ..i guess maan has to loosen himself...

i think maan is also tensed... he is jus thinking on making geet to breath normal...nd the situation is getting harder...if he loosens himself and starts loving his wife...i think the situation wil be at ease..for both...

but sachmain ...Di ...wat a start to there trip ...dadi ney toh mazak mzak kiya Hm hm bol..but yaha toh...jaan bachane ki naubat aa gai hai...

u have stopped at a very bad place...u know wen i was reading the update ..mumma came to ask me something ...and i was like😡😡 mumma wait...kuch important pad rahi hu,,,,nd kya tha ... next moment... ur note... Will maan be able to save geet?????? nd i was like Diii😡😡

u pls update dis one pls again ..please ...😭

i cant wait to see how ...maan nd how the aftereffects i mean the morning after is goin to be...

oh forgot ..the way u discribed ...that drowing event it so felt so real..i mean not even a single moment it felt like any drama am reading ..it was like..maan is trying his best but last he to succumbed to his unconsciousness... unlike ...were we read hero bacha leta hai heroin ko...

dats wat i like in ur writing ..dose realistic touch ..d way u pen it down ,,

now waiting ...enough of my bak bak...

waitin di... situation garam hai ...apka update hi thandk dey sakti hai...😳😳😳

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maanshi

@maanshi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#437

awesome emotional update

maan struggle a lot to find geet n finally he found his love but in very bad condition

feeling very bad for maaneet... they were so happy n destiny played this cruel game with them

geet's condition is serious n maan ... ooohhh poor guy losing his life every minute without his mittu

DR said way to save geet but maan in delima ... hope geet response gave carague to maan n he save geet

u wrote it superbly... each n every word is perfect... describing every situation in details ... making it real in front of eyes
awesomely written but galat time pe stop kiya... want to see geet safe n sound... eagerly waiting for next...

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Nefret19

@Nefret19

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#438

Phewww!!!! OMG...what a twist yaar...Although I loved the twist...was so scared when Maan was trying hard to save themselves. I was holding on to my heart. And thank god they were saved on time by the kind villagers who are helping them so much. I was so heartbroken to see Mittu in such a state and Maan so distraught. I was literally feeling every bit of his emotions...I couldn' t bear it as I can understand how it feels in that situation. But then doctor is right...And only Maan could bring his Mittu back...So thankful that Maan put aside all his reservations and has saved Mittu to a certain extent...But she is traumatized and super cold...So Maan would need to get intimate with her to bring her body temperature back to normal. Come one Maan give her your warmth and love...Only you can save your Mittu...So sad to see her calling out to her angel to save her never leave her...Love her Maan...Love her with all of yourself...Your Mittu will come back...Now I am so anxious to read the next part...I want my Mittu back...hale & hearty full of life...And Maan her loving angel happy as always with his Mittu beside him...

Edited by Nefret19 - 7 years ago