Mortal Promises!#T5!*CH54&Note@Pg130,140[THREAD 6 opened]

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@astrisa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#781

Raj is a serious creepy foul guy. And naturally aise log bohot milte hai asli life me

This type of people exploit girls for thr pleasure

Sam must have been smitten by his lover boy type flirt image back in college

Don know about normal boys but maan is so much awesome in mp that i cant blame sam entirely

Maan here has a personality to die for. He is a man of honors.

I will come 2 geet soon too. But let me just say how much i love this maan. He is every girls dream man.

His manly anger and sweet coconut heart uf kisi ko bhi diwana karde.

I am sure maan has supported sam when she broke up with this bloody rajveer.

Baby i want 2 know what happened that maan has beaten rajveer up. Is it because rajveer cheated on sam?

Honestly i liked sam in this update. She stood for herself and her reply shows she is very classy.

If i recall well then sam actually never tried something shitty yet.

She feels j and all but i am sure she can now see how our cutie geet has stood up for her.

How can now she hate geet?

How can anyone hate such an adorable doll like this geet?

I loved geet so much in this update. Tho i missed maan but both ladies were so awesome

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1135582

Hibernated

Posted: 7 years ago

#782

Thank you for pming me.

I am still reading the beginning chapters. But i promise i will catch up soon. Keep writing. I have fallen in love with your writing

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Tris

@astrisa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#783

Geet and cute antics.

Maan ko kia bolu? Aisi cute si doll se kaun payar nehi karega?

Maan ko 2 pighalna hi tha.

2 times geet ne bajayi hai. Nd 2 times hi maan was the reason.

Aur aisi bajai hai khatrnak wali.

Sherni avtar of Geet is the cutest

That means maan ko koi kuch galay bolega ya phir maan ko koi chinne ki kousish karega toh geet sherni will b in ful form

So agar sam ko realise ho k geet sach me maan se love karti hai nd maaneet relationship is divine to thik hai

Warna geet sam ki watt laga degi aisa i am feeling.

Baki to tere hat me hai par geet sam se rakhi bandwa rahi hai maan k wrist pe ye scene abi bhi demand me hai don't forget.

And geet i love u😆

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@Pqwert207

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Posted: 7 years ago

#784

Maans sherni in violent avatar. Woahh

Geets this avatar was awesome

Rajveer is really disgusting

N i hope now he doesnot do something to geet for insulting him.

And sams reply to rajveer was wonderful.

And now i am liking sam more n more.

When will maan tell about sam to geet??

Thanks for pm

Loved d update

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#785

wow geet toh sherni baab gayi ...magar geet ko agar sameera ki aski maqsad pata chale toh woh tab kya karegi...sameera abb thodasa toh akkal hona chahiye na...abb toh hat jao maan aur geet k raasten se...maan ko peechha chhodo...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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maanshi

@maanshi

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#786

hiii

i am going to read ur story... i got to know this few days back n find it interesting to read ...

hope u regularly update ur story n i will not left with another incomplete story like others writers doing now days

will get back to u after reading all parts...

😊

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maaneetcraze

@maaneetcraze

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#787

❤️ hye meri fvt sherni geet

kia karara jwab dia uss kamine ko

mohalle ki aunty🤣

Edited by Solacesings - 7 years ago

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#788

Originally posted by: curtus
what does that even mean teal ji? Sam is not a villain?
U r making me confused.

Aab samajh gayi naa aap curtus ji?? 😆😉 Aapke comments se pata chal raha hain ke samajh gayi aap!!

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AYAZU12

@AYAZU12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#789

awesome update dear though I felt it was short but the reason is that I just cant have enough of this story 😃
this rajeev is such a besharam and idiot kitna badtameez h thnk god geet intervened on time and saved poor sameera and gave a befitting reply to that idiot in her full on sherni mode...I felt bad for sameera here but again her thoughts about maan just made me hate her again though it's not a crime to love someone but my possessiveness for maan just make me despise her again and again I can see him just with geet and sameera's obsession towards him just scares me for the future hope nothing bad happens but then the story has to progress to kisi na kisi ko to villain banna hi padega na 🥱
loved the update dear but missed maneet's moments now eagerly waiting for next part continue soon...

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WaveTeal

@WaveTeal

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: AYAZU12
awesome update dear though I felt it was short but the reason is that I just cant have enough of this story 😃
this rajeev is such a besharam and idiot kitna badtameez h thnk god geet intervened on time and saved poor sameera and gave a befitting reply to that idiot in her full on sherni mode...I felt bad for sameera here but again her thoughts about maan just made me hate her again though it's not a crime to love someone but my possessiveness for maan just make me despise her again and again I can see him just with geet and sameera's obsession towards him just scares me for the future hope nothing bad happens but then the story has to progress to kisi na kisi ko to villain banna hi padega na 🥱
loved the update dear but missed maneet's moments now eagerly waiting for next part continue soon...

Baby I posted half update...Only part one..I will update part two soon..That's why you felt the update is a little shorter as my usual updates are always around 3000 words!!

Thank you so much for your awesome comment...

Really glad that you loved it!!!