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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chap 48


Part 1

terrific gif

stupendous update! brilliantly written!

I do hate Sameera! Geet sad that Maan did not come! loved Maan's video and message! he indeed loves his wifey so much!

This Sam...😡 still threatening Maan! loved Maan's response! glad he is not scared of Sameera! Maan just tells her to also tell Geet how much he misses her!

Sam shld not understand what place Geet hold is Maan's life! Sam is only fooling herself! why can't she understand that Maan does not love her??? she is so delusional!

ha ha Sam is so silly! Maan and Geet chatting and she is so oblivious! eager to know what she heard dadi and Rano talk abt?? was it abt Maaneet's engagement?

Maan shld now tell Geet abt what happened in Australia! enjoyed Maaneet's banter.

liked this jelaous possessive Geet but she does not need 2 b j... Maan will never look at another woman! he is only hers!

wonderful moments! 😃


Hey!!

Thanks for liking the GIF!!

Sameera - Haahahahah!!! You are not alone!! All dearies seem to despise her!!! 😆

Maaneet texting and Sam's silly comment on Geet - This is how in reality too happens...Like people bragging to some certain person about someone without having the proper knowledge... Glad that you enjoyed it!!

Thank you very much for your extraordinary soothing comment!!👏
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 48


Part 2

lovely gif...

eloquent update! superbly written.

Geet's thoughts well portrayed! its hard for Geet to be apart from Maan! she feels so lovely even though everyone is with her! nice that Geet is so vocal abt her feelings with Maan!

love their text messages! admire Geet and Pinky's bond!

interesting convo btwn Geet and Pinky! nice that Geet was able to speak 2 Pinky but not revealing its abt her!

sad that Geet feels guilty! can understand Geet's turmoil! Geet shld not feel bad as Maan knows her so well!



Glad that you find this part eloquent!!

Geet - This is a simple thing as in her position she must feel like that at some point because Maan does pamper her a lot!!


Also she loves him no less!!

Thanks again for the outstanding review!! 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

fab precap!! cannot wait


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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks for your support!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Iptida


Great baby!! Get ready for upcoming updates as well!! 😆

Yes boss 👍🏼
I am ready 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Yes boss 👍🏼
I am ready 😉


Ok boss...am ready too then!! I shall update MP when it will cross 90 likes!! 😉

Waise kiya kar rahi ho baby?? 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Iptida


Ok boss...am ready too then!! I shall update MP when it will cross 90 likes!! 😉


Waise kiya kar rahi ho baby?? 😳

Dinner Kar rahi Hoon
Aaj toh saare reply karne ki thaan li hai tumne toh , haina baby 😆

Edited by Khushibloom - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Dinner Kar rahi Hoon
Aaj toh saare reply karne ki thaan li hai tumne toh , haina baby 😆

Dinner - Wow!! Early to bed early to rise you are!! 😊

Reply - Haan baby!! Aaj maine sare reply kar dena hain!! 😎
You know how lazy I am!! So aaj mood hain reply ka..Waise Abhi break pe jaa rahi hoon!! will come back within one hour!! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Iptida

Dinner - Wow!! Early to bed early to rise you are!! 😊

Reply - Haan baby!! Aaj maine sare reply kar dena hain!! 😎
You know how lazy I am!! So aaj mood hain reply ka..Waise Abhi break pe jaa rahi hoon!! will come back within one hour!! 😳

Ab toh aadat hogayi baby jaldi uthne ki , can't help it 😆
See ya , jaldi aana
Shall wait for you 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: janu2006

awesome part

cont,soon

thanks for pm


Thanks a lot dear!! 😳

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