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anks_ams

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Posted: 7 years ago

#141

Back to back updates made my day today :)

Thank you for posting them.

Eagerly waiting for the next...

You have woven the entire journey so intricately that I see the chapters unfold before me. Such is the power of your writing.

The entire transition of how how they were stranger to becoming soulmates is portrayed in such an elaborate manner that it is relate able and not hushed.

Such a beautiful journey through your writing.

I would wish to read this forever.

It is not only Maan & Geet, the other characters in the story have been well defined and hold importance.

Such a complete story.

Love every aspect of this.

Thank you for writing this.

Once again my day is made.

Keep on writing dear :)

You have the power to magically spin words!

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lethasanthosh

@lethasanthosh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#142

Part63:Like the way you are building up their relation. Teasing each other. In the starting once they are walking to cafe the ramark of Geet This reminds of Hansel & Gretel walking down & seeing the candy house of witch and Maan's remark is everything to be compared with the books u read. Also I like the interaction between Vikrant & Karan & the way he is telling to Karen that Amelia is Karen's girlfriend . The way you are progressing the Maan & Geet relationship is super. Slowly but steadily.

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janu2006

@janu2006

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Posted: 7 years ago

#143

awesome parts..

loving maaneet moments and the way they are trying to talk to each other

cont.soon

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tabby999

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Posted: 7 years ago

#144

Hi ..

Part 63

Lovely part ...maneet r getting closer step by step .maan is amazing in taking care of geet at every step .love is changing them both for their good .maan teasing geet was fun .at the end maan loving geet and geet too wants their happiness.

Thanks for the beautiful update

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mlaran852

@mlaran852

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Posted: 7 years ago

#145

Wow they have come so far ...I just love the way they come close to each other...they had the best time in Greece...and niw they are back... Geet still can't acceot the power and money the khurranas have ...she loved the ring but is worried about the cost...dadima is having family over and they are looking for a way to hurt Geet. ...maan is possessive and protective over geet he wont allow anyone to hurt hwr...how romantic! !! Meera and Amelia are such a tease...thwy love to ask geet about her life with maan. ..the part where geet wad calling Maan and she said that she is his wife it was so funny...she said it without realiing it...loved all parts!!!

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SGAYATRI

@SGAYATRI

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Posted: 7 years ago

#146

Wow .Beautifully written about their relationship.So they really went for their honeymoon.Thinking how will Dadi react when she will now they have become one by body soul and mind .Dadi will be pulling Maan's leg .Liked the way Maan made his staff now about Geet and also to keep secret about that.

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

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Posted: 7 years ago

#147

Thanks for the back to back updates in one go

I was expecting a hot steamy update of their consummation ☺️ but...

the intense emotions were very well portrayed. Geet is still shy but confident as far as Maan's love is concerned.

They have crossed that physical impediment now Maan needs to open up a little more .

continue soon

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lily

@LILY111144

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Posted: 7 years ago

#148

Thanks for updts.

When we read continuous ly it's amazing it feels like seeing their life events through a window . I like their Greece trip,maans standing for geet before relatives.i want to see geet making ng her career strong with help of maan.waiting for mneet talk over geets career options.

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komol

@komol

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Posted: 7 years ago

#149

Wow

Thanks for uploading so many parts together all at once.

I loved them all.

I'm glad they're finally living a marriage complete in all senses. Though there are a few issues that they really do have to address such as the monetary issues from geets prespective and the inklings of geets inhibitions in their newly formed relationship.

Although i do beilev them both to be quite understanding and considerate enough to overcome these minor hurdles it'll be endearing to witness them domineer over them together.

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raibdrop2

@raibdrop2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#150

Chapters 64-71, what a long way M & G have come. The pace has started to vary with ups and downs and keeps us pleasantly surprised.

Maan coaxes Geet then gives her the space and then she does what he wishes on her own. I am glad Geet told him about her periods otherwise it was sad to see an upset Maan specially when he has been so gentle and understanding all the way. Geet has changed for the better and so spontaneously she dressed in a nightgown for him! They are in sync right now and I hope no one will shatter this peace. Geet is more mature than the other girls and that's why a perfect match for Maan. I hope the lost and found phone doesn't have any significance later!? Just wondering.

Vikrant doesn't seem like husband material right now. He appears very immature and spoilt. Meera's parents should be a bit strict with him and ask him to prove himself instead of riding piggy back on Maan's business efforts. Maybe he will throw up a surprise?

Blissful read as it is lovely to see two people slowly falling for each other in an unhurried, yet intense way.