Tormented MG OS updated Final Part on Page 28 / 19-3-2018

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cutical

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Posted: 7 years ago

#241

di thnks fr pw commented on pg 28

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deepa111

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Posted: 7 years ago

#242

Wow..Quite a long update...

N very nice part..

Ao its Geet's step dad who not only tortured them bt also forced on her n that's explain why she scared ...

That monster though died bt still left a bad impact on geet..

N top of that as maan also not there it cause her more fear n restlessness.

Brij took the murder blame on himself n both him n geet went thru alot of suffering in past.

Bt what amusing is that samrath being a business not once cleared his facts about his facts about Geet's mother.

He just believe what he heard from others n not even treated on his son..

Nevertheless,maan also proved himself a khuranna's .

Neither he bow down in front of his father nor he decline Geet's wish to get married with his parents consent..

N eventually after lot of struggle they both finally get happily married with their blessings..

Grt os..Loved it.

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jayshu17

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Posted: 7 years ago

#243

Superb update!!Geet's feiends Pinky and Pari are trying to make her happy..Brij takes them to ice cream treat there...Maan came to know why his father send him away from his friends...Maan is trying to call Brij but he is not respond...Maan is restless...he wants to talk to Geet...Waiting eagerly for the update...pl send me PW dear...😳

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 7 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: suhaaana
superb part yr
i finally got to know the truth and it was really horrible, i loved how maan sticked to his decision. lovely, sam married twice and divorced too is funny u know
i was imagining her with maan once 😆
his mother, kudos to arpita she knew how to deal with her husband but she took time
five years to know her own son
geet was the one who suffered truly
brij knew they shared relation 😲
i never thought that he would be knowing 👏
awesome story
full of suspense

Brij ko nahi pata tha sweetie... Use Maan ne btaya at the time when he ask for her hand from him.

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 7 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: MGMahika
🥱 just wondering ki khoon k rishte he important hote hai 😒 she isn't his daughter na isiliye usne aisa kiya 😡 but maan's dad a big omg 😡 he is his real son na huhh...After knowing sameera's character his attitude is same like before 😡 paiso k alawa kuch aur dikhai nahi deta 😡 ek baat samajh nahi ayi first brij was so happy na maan's arrival later he also disowned his friend 😕

disowned nahi kiya it's just he can't share what happened that night to anyone. That's why he avoiding him and after knowing what had happened between Maaneet that night he got angry which is so natural koi b bhai aise hi react karega...

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tabby999

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Posted: 7 years ago

#246

Hi richa

Nice part

Story ended too soon ..wish u have extended it ..

Geet killed her father by mistake who was not their real father ..

Happy that maan helped her to forget her past and start a new journey .she is lucky to maan on her side and maan on other hand fought with his father ..utimately their love won ..now they two happy together .

Thanks for the beautiful update

Thanks

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nigah

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Posted: 7 years ago

#247

Can we get an epilogue...

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Mano1992

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Posted: 7 years ago

#248

Seriously I was so occupied so much that I'm not able to comment.. ghar ka kaam aur phir Uper se assignment and exams bhi start Hona wala hai.. So much busy these days.. anyway totally loved it in one flow all clear.. So the truth came out how they both were suffering and he tried to use her but before she save herself but unfortunately left great and bad impact on her mind.. totally jusfied.. Haha again have not done my breakfast lols and here typing the last words are always worth it.. how he support her in every thin situation.. totally enjoyed.. she feel same in his arms.. his love make her forget every thing and lead peaceful life.. wonderful.. maan and his father is no less happy ending.. this is the 1st os I came a cross a story in which maan make her strong and her life much better version.. totally enjoyed it.. new one.. I always loved your os which is also not less than a bomb but enjoyed every but of it.. specially os short and small but bombastic hoti hai updates bhi... love you take care bye I'm hungry leaving