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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 7 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
or even this one..
baner aagun??

bacchi koun si bhasha hai ye😕

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

bacchi koun si bhasha hai ye😕

ye mera mother tongue hai..
Bangla😛

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
ye mera mother tongue hai..
Bangla😛

oh nice😊

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#254

Part 2

the dream or vision turned out to feel real or its just another vision to confirm his doubt.
the face familiar to him..his father or is he referring to himself.

so he did call his father, not sure of himself if it done out of worry for his father or for himself scared of what he just saw. I liked the way it has been made to show his confused and scared state of mind.
However, he tried to run away, it comes back haunting him. and he is all alone bearing the horror and fear for years may be.
This one did not have the GF ka call..so ruling out this possibility...but then the gifts he wanted to buy was for her only, so the possibility returns + name of the story is enchantress ;)

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#255

Part 3

she helped him evade his paranormal thoughts !! While till last part I thought they increased with her presence.
I liked the casual part of their relation because it is different than the usual ones. may be started as mutually beneficial for both and although there is no depth of feelings on both sides but something is there that pulls them to stuck with each other..that 'ENOUGH' was it for him or something else? she seems to be commanding almost everything, even him..wow..it was great update, its turning more and more mysterious now.

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#256

@ jungle ki aag, pehli baar fattu maan dekhkar kaisa laga?? Giggle

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#257

Part 4

a part dedicated to me as well..😆
may be its not her then.

seems the ghosts of his mind are much powerful, than they seem to be. Was it his doubt about her that formed the scary impersonation of hers in front of him.
it had good horror portion and the mystery is intact as well..
so everything now is getting linked to that building construction.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
@ jungle ki aag, pehli baar fattu maan dekhkar kaisa laga??

yahin laga..ke common logon ki tarah hi hai ye Maan..
I like it when Maaneet are different than what we see them usually..:)
mostly normal but with some psychic abnormalities..

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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

yahin laga..ke common logon ki tarah hi hai ye Maan..
I like it when Maaneet are different than what we see them usually..:)
mostly normal but with some psychic abnormalities..

usually maan ka character hamesha strong, bold etc etc hota hai..
i always wonder, iss bande se sab darte hai par iss ko kisise darr nhi lagta kya??

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
by the way, why am I not able to see her dp??
muje toh koi billi dikh nhi rhi😒

Are you not able to see one cute (like the way I am 😳)
and innocent (just like the way I am 😳)
kitten pic in my DP?

Is the enchantress of the story came out or what..my dp is gayab for you 😲

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