Enchantress [Completed!] - Page 12

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

off course

but if you want that you should stop chatting with me

jitna writer interaction kam hoga utna anticipation aur bana rahega😉

try kar k dekho for next two parts

u will notice the difference

Originally posted by: nakh5683

Awesome eerie update maan met his gf in a party where they ended chatting and then liking each other with her masn feels at ease like himself and somehow with her the spirit and vision around him just disappears now I think why u named ur ff enchantress maan fell for a ghost and very possessive ghost or some entity who wants maan attention only on her but u being devil isn't gonna answer that will u sporty

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

curious abt Maan's girl friend

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

You killing me with suspense
now I get a little clear picture of his girlfriend
She made him forget everything but seems she do have some mystery
what that be ?

Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5

So, I read the update at sharp 3 in morning with lights off for added effect.. par phir bhi bilkul bhi horror wali feeling nhi aayi..
thoda aur level increase karo.. tabhi toh mazaa aayega..
coming to the story..
Instead of unolding the mystery you are making it more mysterious day by day.. which kinda good.. Kyuki end mein jab mysteries reveal hongi toh sabko zor ka jhatka lagega..
Par ye gf ka kya locha hai??
though you wrote how they met, you still did not reveal the name..
Is she some richie rich princess?? first time a girl does not want her bf to pay😛
& what's with breaking of glasses everywhere he goes.. Is the ghost obsessed with glass😆
So he realized & made us also realize that when with his gf he doesn't see the ghosts..
So is she the enchantress of the story..
KYuki mujhe aisa lag raha hai the title of the story is for geet, so is the gf geet only??
She surely is hiding something though.. coz even after glass breaking kaand, she was so cool.. & whenever maan gets distracted by ghosts, she asks him to look at her.. even during the phone call,
she had shouted when he was staring at the blood wala ghosty..
Is she some chudail, daayan type or is she some sorceress, you know kaala jaadu karne wali types.. Or is she a psychic like him?? but with different powers??

By the way agar uss ghosty ne dobara glass break wala sada hua stunt maara na, aayi shapat story ke andar ghus kar maarongi usey..

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

glass k piche razz hai😆
kidding

hint ye hai ki everyone seams to miss few details
agar dyan do tho part 5 we world wrap the story up too😉

Ab dimag pe zada zor na dalo
and ye 3am ko pandne ka kya funda hai muje samaj nahi aya🤣

thanks for reading

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

You killing me with suspense
now I get a little clear picture of his girlfriend
She made him forget everything but seems she do have some mystery
what that be ?