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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#101

Hey is Maan's girlfriend some kind of spirit perhaps a ghost but then Maan would have known

right but how could she have broken all the glass without even getting scared

no she too is some kind

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December04

@December04

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#102

I see the name of the girlfriend is not mentioned or taken anywhere..and not scared..but suspense good one

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Khushibloom

Ha woh toh hai hi
Aur thoda scary bana sakte ho Kya
Maza ayega 😉

off course

but if you want that you should stop chatting with me

jitna writer interaction kam hoga utna anticipation aur bana rahega😉

try kar k dekho for next two parts

u will notice the difference

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: taahir004
Hey is Maan's girlfriend some kind of spirit perhaps a ghost but then Maan would have known
right but how could she have broken all the glass without even getting scared
no she too is some kind

kuch tho hai

that I'm sure for now

but kya... let's wait

thanks for reading!

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: diadecember
I see the name of the girlfriend is not mentioned or taken anywhere..and not scared..but suspense good one

yaar mai kuch bhi karu

even if i float eyeballs in his soup u aren't going to get scared

q k u are mentally fixed k sab kuch nahi hai

and im not that writer who could get you involved in the scene

phir bhi koshish jari hai

wish me luck😆

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December04

@December04

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

yaar mai kuch bhi karu
even if i float eyeballs in his soup u aren't going to get scared

q k u are mentally fixed k sab kuch nahi hai

and im not that writer who could get you involved in the scene

phir bhi koshish jari hai

wish me luck😆

Comeon scare me😆

And who is the girlfriend

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: diadecember

Comeon scare me😆
And who is the girlfriend

girlfriend?

seriously at this point

does it really matter😳

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 7 years ago

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#108

Awesome eerie update maan met his gf in a party where they ended chatting and then liking each other with her masn feels at ease like himself and somehow with her the spirit and vision around him just disappears now I think why u named ur ff enchantress maan fell for a ghost and very possessive ghost or some entity who wants maan attention only on her but u being devil isn't gonna answer that will u sporty

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

tera bass chale tho next part me hi the end karwade😆

samaj nahi arraha hai kya maan ek phattu hai yaha🤣
jysa tu chati hai waisa kuch nahi hone wala hai itni jaldi😛

thanks for reading!

Kamini tu na sporty pitegi hahahahahahahaha