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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
SOrry to all to make u wait like this
ye wala part kal hi aane wala tha but its flood ...when my husband come before time 😭

so i have to stop writing for some other work ( devil mind stop there only dont think Much )😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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EPL One




Ye idea hi galat tha dono couple ka ek hi destination pe aana ku ki ...yaha HM kam and picnic jada lag rahi hai ...no no one more hour if I don't get what I want I am going to kis* her hard in front of all ...than I will pick her and took her to MY BEDROOM ...YES

Maan cribed like small child...wo gadha VSK to nervousness main apnhi hi SR karne ke liye dar raha hai ...after my stunt family ne to same week main hi hum dono borhter ki shadi karva di poora week to bas ritual main guzar gaya ...ek chotasa ki** kya pick bhi nahi mila ...

Upon that I thought both girl feel comfertable and nervouse nahi hogi but yaha san ultha hi ho gaya meera to bold hai but geet shy and mere brother ki to kya kehane samrtness to kahi toilet main flush ho gai hai ...he ruin his own SR puls mine also ...

Past ..

Both brother get married in hudel burdel ...last two days vicky is not his itself he is too much nervouse wais maan also feel little bit nervous but Vicky ...vicky dash in maan room before marriage day at night around 11 clock like he is going somewere ...

Maan cried when vicky broke his not so decent dreams ...maan cried kya hai VSK ..javo so javo ..

Vicky say in one breath maan me running away from marriage please dono family ko smabhal lena ...maan feel like his heart stop for while

Maan almost jump from bed and cried come again MR.VSK ...maan thought its may be Vicky another joke but his face saying other story he looking tense and sad...

Maan went near Vicky and hold him with shoulder and asked what happen Vicky ...

Vicky come out from maan grip and seat on bed ...wo main ...

Maan - spell the beans Vicky ...vikcy once look to maan and went to window side and say because of your stunt our family tied up us in so much hurry they don't give time for courtship and me and Meera want to some thrill in our wedding.

Maan - stop around the bush come to the point MR Vicky ...

Vicky - Vicky once look around but he avoided to look to Maan eyes and mummer we thought to consummated before marriage ...

Thou Vicky say this softly but maan hear that ...maan gritted his teeth in anger and frustration but he know he have to took patience

Maan control all his anger and frustration and ask in clam tone ...than ... Tum logo ko thrill mila wedding ka ..to kya ab attraction finish ho gaya ..now u want to run away ...thou maan get that something is more waiting but he try to add 2+2 ...

Vicky - Maan stop I love her and till my death I will love her ...

Maan - reply sacrificially ohh really that's why u running away so she face more than Death ...alone here ...

Vicky - Vicky feel like someone snatch land from his feet he not thought from this point of view ..yes are his runaway what about meera and what about MG oh no wo handa to kattcha kha jaayege and khurana bhi ... he sat on bed and hold his forehead with his palm ...

Maan come near to Vicky ...maan is not Backward thought its deepen on couple what they think ...they can go ahead with their way about consummated before marriage or after marriage ..its totally their decision .

Maan feel awkward to ask but he have to ask he have to reach to routh of Vicky such decision .maan put hand on his shoulder and ask ...wo tum log ...do u hurt her in any way ...with your action ,is she ok ...do u rough with her

Vicky imm reply no Vicky cheek turn dark shade of red ...in shyness and embarrassment ...no bro I don't do anything ...kuch hua hi nahi ...in between ..sab khatam ho gaya ...

Maan took breath on Vicky word ...but what do u mean in between sab khatam ho gaya ...

Maan - Vicky thik se bolo ...i am losing my patience now ...maan say in hard tone ...

Vicky apke patience pata nahi mera kya losse ho gaya hai ... He took deep breath and say yesterday we went to lonavala XYZ hotel for ..

Maan replay your thrill ...

Vicky nodded ...but don't know what happen because of tension or what in between I miss the things ...and kuch huva hi nahi ...and now I m feel guilty to Face meera maan ...its so embarrassing ...

Maan side hug Vicky ...how could be person like u act and think like this ...

I am not judging u neither meera its totally your both decision to what path u follow ...than second ...why u think that MAN ko first attempt main hi hona chiye ...do u practice on it in clooadge or office ...maan ask steamily poor Vicky nodded in no imm maan say than don't make this ego or guilt issue ...that's a natural things Tum tension lake how could u get good result Vicky ...

With maan word Vicky turn mute with lots of though ...

A soft smile appear on maan lips ...

Maan - so how u running away by road or by air maan ask in hard tone ...

Vicky look to maan with shock face ...and ans imm no I am not going anywhere ...maan giggle on Vicky reply ...

Vicky make face on maan teasing ...

Maan laugh loudly on ..vicky face ...

Maan took some step to door side and say waise Vicky sahi hai khaya piya kuch nahi glass toda baara aana ...

Vicky throw a cushion to maan side with irritation ...

Maan come out from flashback ...bas with t hat daring VSK turn into ..Chuha VSK ...na khood kar raha hai na muje karne de raha hai ...


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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
thanks 4 da pm!

fascinating update! well written!

enjoyed the convo btwn Maan and Vicky!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Fabulous Part

I really liked how Maan advice Vicky and makes him understand that if its his first time
then he should not get stressed or let ego come inbetween Vicky and Meera
so Meera is the bold one while Geet is the shy one
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Posted: 7 years ago
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fantastic
in this part no girls only msk and vsk
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
@Epilogue 1
Teasing start di
Liked it!!
Maan was frustrated with Vicky's deeds and was pissed off that he couldn't romance his wife Geet even after getting married to Geet apropos to Vicky and Meera's little adventure and passionate affair. Vicky confesses his little adventure with Meera and was all set for his escapades as he couldn't face Meera aftermath but glad that Maan's words hit his chords and made him realise what mistake he was about to commit.
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Looking forward to the next update
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Haha super interesting hilarious conversation...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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epl two





Maan come out from past and took a sham pan in his hand and move to pool side where that trio is seated ...as maan assume there Vicky talking with geet and poor meera gazing him with loglines ...maan nodded and settle himself near meera today he going to use his two way attack alcohol and J...yes ...

Maan ask softly missing him..

Poor meera in trance mummer terrifically ...missing like hell. Just than click her what she say to maan she bite her tongue and say sorry ...

Maan cut her why u saying sorry me also missing her maan look once to geet ...

I am sorry behalf of Vicky ..meera for ruin your most imp and beautiful moment ...but he feel guilt ...for ...u got na what I saying ..

Meera get idea that Vicky share the incidence with maan and she don't feel its odd because if she is on vikcy place she also done same ...she too deep breath ...and say I know jiju and feel bad for him...

Maan - no don't feel bad abhi bad feel karneka waqt nahi hai ye VSK ko line pe lane ka waqt hai ...

Meera look to maan with confuse means jiju she ask .

Maan bas fallow my act ye tumara pati jo tumko room main lake jaayega he will not come out for next two word mark my word ...

Meera mouth open in perfect 0 shape ...redness spread all over her cheek and before meera get anything maan softly pick her red red cheek and give her glass of shampain ...

Maan mummer when he pick her meera don't show your shock face he is looking to here only ...meera got maan plan and she took glass from maan hand and she also pick on maan cheek ...

Two souls almost stop took breath they are in frozen stage ...they gaping to meera and maan with perfect O shape ...

Meera drink that one go...she took some step but maan hold her hand ...and start to sing ...

Maan - suno

Meera - kaho

Maan - kahaa

Meera - sunaa

Maan - kuchh huaa kyaa?

Meera - abhi to nahin

hmm kuchh bhi nahin

hmm kuchh bhi nahin

maan - chali hawaa

jhuki ghataa

kuchh huaa kyaa?

Meera - abhi to nahin

kuchh bhi nahin

meera took out her palm form maan hand and went to Vicky side she take round around him and sung

teri qasam ye dilkash nazaare

karte hain ishaare jo samjhe koyi

mere sanam ye khamosh aankhen

bhi karti hain baaten jo samjhe koyi

samajhaa nahin tum samjhaa do

before Vicky hold her ...again maan come there and pull her to his side

maan -are suno

kaho

kahaa sunaa

kuch hua kya

abhi to nahin

kuchh bhi nahin

Vicky took some step to meera side to pull her from maan hug HE feel J with his own brother and its making him angry...Meera once look to Vicky than to maan and sung ...with she pull maan to her side

bas jo chale to subah se lekar

rahoon shaam tak main tere sang mein

gar ho sake to main apne dilbar

teraa naam likh doon har ik rang mein

baaton mein naa uljhaao

are suno

kaho

kahaa sunaa

kuch hua kyaa

abhi to nahin

kuchh bhi nahin

maan sung next line with looking to geet side ...geet who is so shock till now but maan gaze she got its for Vicky ...meera and maan teasing Vicky ...

achchhaa kabhi phir baat chhedenge

marzi nahin hai tumhaari abhi

kuchh ho gayaa to badi hogi mushkil

ki chhoti umar hai hamaari abhi

main kyaa karoon batlaa do

suno

kaho

kahaa sunaa

kuch hua kyaa

abhi to nahin

kuchh bhi nahin

chali hawaa

jhuki ghataa

kuchh huaa kyaa?

zaraa saa kuchh huaa to hai

zaraa saa kuchh huaa to hai

maan again bend to pick on meera cheek but before he do that meera get pulled by Vicky and next moment Vicky pick her and put her on his shoulder like cowman and took long long step to his bedroom side ...

meera once look to mg and blink the eyes ...like saying thanks jiju ...

other side maan bend to geet side and slowly touch her ear with his lips and mummer kuch hua kya ...poor geet turn red in shyness ...

Geet try to walk away from maan but maan is fast and he grab her and pull to himself ...geet get caged in maan arm like ...soft doll they looking like two pats of puzzle which get fixed ...maan each touch making havoc in geet body ...mind and soul ..she very well know that maan holding himself just for Vicky ...after Vicky ruin their SR also maan is calm for meera and Vicky but now ..she have to face most passionate and demanding maan ... She shake with thought itself .

And before geet say something her lips is taken by maan mainly lips. He slowly sucking that like he don't want to hurt her soft petal ..he try to push his tongue but geet is so lost in K*** she forget to open her lips and not other way he slowly bite on her lips which make his work and next moment maan testing her sweet nectar like anything ...he more press her to himself ...her legs almost in air ...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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thanks for updating!

terrific update. well written! Maan advises Meera! Maan and Meera sing! this is 2 make Vicky jealous! it works! glad Geet understood what they were doing!

nice Maaneet moments!

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