||Tcher||new maaneet ff|| New chapter pg 24 - Page 5

Originally posted by: swapna.p

Congrats for new story..

Nice updates..

Continue soon..

Originally posted by: MariumChoudhary

Is Maan really trustable???
He's seeming a mystery to me...

Geet Why would anyone Live such Life???
Being not educated can be an enough reason???
I don't think so...

Is there more history in her past???

Intriguing Concept and Interesting it's looking Except those mature thing 😆

Let's see where all this lead to 😊

Cause Maan seems to have some motive and It feels he know her or like some connection exists between them???

waiting for to unfold things more

Originally posted by: HateMee

Nice part... this is too early to trust but when you are in dark from so long small light can give u hope...hope for bright future..hope for better future...hope for small happiness... Hope for a LIFE... don't want her hopes 2 shattered

Continue please...cant wait for next

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Fab update, well written! Maan very possessive! he wants 2 marry Geet! she is stunned! but she knows nothing abt him! update soon

Originally posted by: taahir004

Fantastic Chapter

Maan had to save funds so that he gets to meet Geet again

it seemed both craved and longed for each other

with Maan Geet felt different though she had hope she knew hope gets her no where

Maan on seeing a love bite on her shoulder was angry and confessed how he hates

others touching and been with her he proposed marriage and perhaps Geet was fearful

but she also decides that she can trust him

while Maan knew he will get Geet as his wife no matter how long it took

Originally posted by: Geetdrashti

intriguing start
very different from usual story

Originally posted by: .Ashleydevlin.

You will find a little bit more about him in third chapter. his character is a mystery one which will revealed with time and then, his reasons for searching her will come out too.

Geet's past and her reason for being in that place will be revealed slowly too. I am trying my hand on writing a bit of mystery😆. Yes, there is plenty in both of their past.

This one is a bit adult novel and since the words and premise is such that they don't follow any particular chapter so it is hard for me to put a disclaimer, so I have put everything in mature section and writing without holding back.

Honestly, I can't wait until I write the first big revealation. People are either going to like it or I hope really like it😳😆

Firstly thanks for your reply... You are right this chapter was little bit knowledgeable in case of Maan...

He has something in past where he doesn't want to visit he's calling himself mad???

What was it some problem panic or trauma that Made Him Feel like that in past he could not bear anyone's touch...

well now that he's with Geet he felt same and Except wanting to be with her he had to stay away...

must say you are building quite mystery here no doubt It's quite intriguing for us to know the 1st Revelation...

Geet given in for this hope to have a bright future without knowing a single thing though it's dangerous why do I feel he will not Hurt her well let's see cause both of them are not clear specially Maan and His past...

they are about to marry will this escape gonna success she's gonna have a normal life from start I don't think so cause hidden truth is suspicious for me...

About adult thing well most of the times I skip those but I'm gonna read this cause I'm finding it intriguing credit goes to you for that...

I just have to be little careful while reading that's all 😆

thanks for updating back to back...

Originally posted by: MariumChoudhary

Firstly thanks for your reply... You are right this chapter was little bit knowledgeable in case of Maan...

He has something in past where he doesn't want to visit he's calling himself mad???

What was it some problem panic or trauma that Made Him Feel like that in past he could not bear anyone's touch...

well now that he's with Geet he felt same and Except wanting to be with her he had to stay away...

must say you are building quite mystery here no doubt It's quite intriguing for us to know the 1st Revelation...

Geet given in for this hope to have a bright future without knowing a single thing though it's dangerous why do I feel he will not Hurt her well let's see cause both of them are not clear specially Maan and His past...

they are about to marry will this escape gonna success she's gonna have a normal life from start I don't think so cause hidden truth is suspicious for me...

About adult thing well most of the times I skip those but I'm gonna read this cause I'm finding it intriguing credit goes to you for that...

I just have to be little careful while reading that's all 😆

thanks for updating back to back...

congrats for ur new story dear ...
it looks interesting ...

liked the first chapter ... totally different from what we have used to read ..
geet is a prositute ..and maan is finding someone ..not sure about it ...
looking forward to this story..

chapter 2&3
both the part was fantastic ...
geet is scared to trust maan and to go with him..but she could not even ignore her heart which is crazy for him ...
she finally agreed to go with him ...
but maan's character is confusing me ...
he is possessive and protective about geet ..but does he love her truly ?
why was he behaving awkwardly that day ?
continue soon...