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.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: priya_21
superb concept

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.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: nakh5683
congrats on a new story dear amazing story i liked the concept if u can plzzz send me pm so geet is a prostitute and working her way fro her family she meets maan who is her customer who is really different from her customer it was the usual with him but the way he wanted geet to arouse him was making her scared but eventually he puu;ed her against him and took her in geet for the fost time felt butterflies with him and there is a chance she will fall for him which is kind of dangerous for her just how graphic are u suggesting dear iam sure u can post on if or even on fb

Thank you. Are you on twitter? If yes, then follow me and I will send tweets, it will be easier that way for me.

Its not just the issue of graphic sex scenes because I don't think I can write beyond a certain point, its rather the dark theme. you will know what I mean as I post more because maan's character is very different. I can't write more at this point because you will understand when I post more.

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.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: nakh5683
awesome update loved it maan was geet continous customer he would come to her often both were geetin g invovled too uch that maan couldnt bare geet getting touch by another man but geet has no choice she was trap maan confess his love for her and ask to marry him geet was shocked she didn t know why he wanted to marry her geet was too numb to think anything but maan was determined he will ge her to say yes she will be his but geet was in dilemma though sh e liked the idea of being maan wife but somewhere she was scared as she knew nothing about maan nor she wa sure she could trust him she loves him but she dosent know who he is and why he wants to marry her

Yes, thats her dilemma for now what choice to make. Thanks for liking it😳

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love2_soma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Lovely Update

Loved it

Thank u very much fr d lovely update

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swapna.p

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Congrats for new story..

Nice updates..

Continue soon..

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Marium

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Is Maan really trustable???
He's seeming a mystery to me...

Geet Why would anyone Live such Life???
Being not educated can be an enough reason???
I don't think so...

Is there more history in her past???

Intriguing Concept and Interesting it's looking Except those mature thing 😆

Let's see where all this lead to 😊

Cause Maan seems to have some motive and It feels he know her or like some connection exists between them???

waiting for to unfold things more

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seema saini

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Nice part... this is too early to trust but when you are in dark from so long small light can give u hope...hope for bright future..hope for better future...hope for small happiness... Hope for a LIFE... don't want her hopes 2 shattered

Continue please...cant wait for next