Mortal Promises!#T4!*UPDATED CH 47@Pg111[Note@Pg100]2nd Apr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: jssood
both parts are good
geet said london ka mop haa ha...
maan explain her that what was that
she told her journey to her home towm feeling very guilt for not telling maan before
maan want to tell about sam
precap is realy good
dadi leg pulling maan

Thank you so much for liking both the parts!! Appreciate it dearie!! 🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago

#432

Originally posted by: Ashdevil
Part one and two
loved it ..
Geet is too cute.
Geet Ghar ja rhi h..Poor maan
Precap seems interesting...

Thank you a bunch for reading and commenting!!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: nakh5683
Awesome update loved how innocently geet describe a sexy dress as a mop but masn knows his jaan inside out he doesn't want her to be uncomfortable geet was feeling guilty for hiding the fact she is going to hp maan give another name to Gert how cute he could see she was upset so ask her Geet told how she was angry at him so she called her mom told she wanted to come home though she wants to cancel but couldn't as now Dadi also coming maan now shocked he has to tell about sameera proposal as dumb girl isn't getting the msg that maan isn't interested in her but he understands geet and isn't angry at her but now he is worried how he will handle geet and overall Sam madness increased hope he at least tells Dadi abt Sam proposal

Let's see if Maan tells daadi or not!!

Thank you so much for the awesome summary!!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: crazymaneetian
lovely update...great o see the story moving forward... still confused...are they already husband and wife. How come no one knows? Greatpart...waiitng for the next update...Maan is angry with geet for telling him things so late...he is doing the same

Maaneet - Because they have kept it a secret?? 😆

I am glad that you loved the updates!! thank you very much for your comment sweets!!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Chapter 45

Part 1

tremendous update... wonderfully written.

beautiful moments! liked Geet's description of the lingerie! she is hilarious! nice moments!

enjoyed the comment about the writer and the phone call. glad Maan decides 2 tell Geet abt Sameera! but again destiny is not on his side!

he notices that Geet is tensed! Geet is his life! admire the love he has for her! Maan tells her he will take her to see her parents! his comment makes her sadder! she is awed by his care! Geet feels guilty.

she finally breaks the news abt her trip.

Aww!! I am very happy that you liked the update sweets!!

Hehe makes me more than happy that you find the lingerie scene hilarious!! 😆

The writer comment - Oh!! 🤗You need to be hugged for this...Because only you and another dearie only commented on that!! Just thought to make it a little light hearted!! As we tend to put such scenes amidst when some sort of revelation has to take place!! So just wanted to avoid the cliche!! 😆

Maan's love - I guess that has become the main USP of MP!!

Thank you so much for this cutesy comment of yours and giving me two comments per part!! I highly appreciate this gesture of yours 😳

But hope you are comfortable with it!!

Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Chap 45

Part 2

dynamic update. brilliantly written!

Geet feels guilty! hated when she says she is a bad wife! Maan angry not cos she is going but cos he she only told him now! can understand his reaction!

his anger is at its peak due to other reasons! glad they understand each other so well! its sad that he will not be able to join her die to his hectic schedule! nice that Maan is being direct with Geet! loved that he never lets his anger rule over his love and care for her!

great that Geet is trying to appease him! at least she managed to calm him down!

lovely moments!

Aww... You felt bad for Geet!! But this is how she feels because Maan's love is just consuming her!!

Glad that you found the update as dynamic!!

Ohh thank god someone indeed got why Maan is angry in real!! He is just going through a lot of work pressure and it's infuriating when you hear that one thing which keeps you sane is going away, that too suddenly!! So he is upset!! And he is very understanding with Geet from the beginning of the story!! He made her upset and now just have to bear the consequences!! He is fuming for two reasons basically..

1. He could not tell her about Sam. That is just getting delayed!

2. He will have to bear the absence of hers again!! He can't live without her that is I guess very evident!!

Thank you very very much for your lovely comments dearie!! 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
outstanding gifs 👏⭐️😊

intriguing precap!!

already waiting!!

Thank you so much sweetie!! 😳

Yeah!! Let's see if the target gets fulfilled within this month or not!! Seems difficult though!!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: pari_DD
amazing updtes maan got upset that geet leaving for her home.he is not getting right time to tell abt sam to geet.precap is interesying he want dadima to announce his wedding as early as possibe .waiting for d nxt updteee

Thank you very much for reading and such a cute feedback sweets!! Shall try to update soon!!