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priyasree

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Posted: 6 years ago

#831

Amazing, emotional n wonderful update

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priyasree

@priyasree

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Posted: 6 years ago

#832

Maaneet's emotions are well written, one is hurt and other is guilty

Geet's pain, hurt and the dreams of ( for ) her life...

Was crying while reading Geet's answers and soliloquies

You are a wonderful writer dear...

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abinaya.m

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Posted: 6 years ago

#833

Hey Lakshmi,

Late happy pongal to U. Man what updates these were. I was crying after reading them. So emotional and very well written. I hope Geet gets to see that Maan is repenting soon.

Abinaya

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T.Peru

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Posted: 6 years ago

#834

Nice update

Maan was listening Geet talk with her cousin

He was hurt listening to her talk

Hope now Geet get some happiness

Thanks for PM

Update soon

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nishamna

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Posted: 6 years ago

#835

Nice part. I really feel bad for Geet. She is speaking so many lies to cover up the wrong things happened to her. She is all making stories to make Maan's image as a best husband. Whereas maan was regretting what he did with his Geet. He wants to give all happiness to her now but she is far to his reach. Waiting for next dear

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Tanvi4

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Posted: 6 years ago

#836

Hey thank u for the pm so got read this beautiful part but i really want maan n geet to talk to each other otherwise hw they will decrese this gap eagerly waiting for next part. Do pm me pls

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Karamjeet Kaur

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Posted: 6 years ago

#837

Mind-blowing update...

Geet Nadani nd Preeto or Raji talking in terrace ...

Nd our hero is listening them...

Loved Geet nd Raji bonding...

Maan is guilty to hurt Geet sooo much...

Loved d way Geet talked about Maan mom...

Nd her unfinished work...

Which she some complete...

Maan hurt to know their birthdays nd about the Gift which she made for him...

Maan loved d scarf gift...

Loved d way Maan took Nadani nd preeto class for leaving Geet alone...

Now looking forward for Geet reaction after awake from her sleep to know Maan with her...

Continue soon...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 6 years ago

#838

hi Lakshmi! thanks for the pm! commented already!

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Taahir

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Posted: 6 years ago

#839

Part 16

Awesome and so Fantastic Chapter

I felt bad and actually sad for Geet's state she has to be strong in front of her

siblings she has to show them that her husband is a good loving man

yet she is breaking from within she knows she don't exist for her husband

yet her married was such that she looked forward just to get one glimpse of Maan

today when the girls all ask questions about Maan and her marriage she has lie

and Maan feels guilty hearing her lies but I want to see him feel pain too

it was so heart felt when Geet remembered the night at the outhouse Maan's love filled eyes though she knows it was not for her but his love Pari

and the saddest when he left to London not even a simple goodbye came her way and all she has to do is bury her pain to show everyone her smile

thinking about Annie's harsh words and I didn't like that Annie could hurt Geet in such a way

and now when Geet thinks about it she realizes Annie's words were true that is exactly how Maan treated her

Maan on the other hand is restless now because he knows his wife is actually his love the one he searched and kept her in his thoughts constantly but how will he explain to Geet that he was in love with her all along but didn't care to look at her face

Geet now preparing herself for 3 weeks later as then she will start her life sole alone and she knows Maan will be happy with Pari

I only wished Maan heard Nandini speaking about rich people then he would have realized what he has been doing to his wife thinking her as uneducated