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Hope

@LovelyUmang5

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#131

very beautiful story..
wonderfully written with a well thought plot..
loved the song selection..
they were apt for each part..
your stories are really different from that of others..
You have a unique way of writing.. it's different & nice..
plus your stories are reality based.. they are not too rosy or flashy..
i do not get the feeling of watching some typical ekta shows..
Instead they are sober & simplified..
we can relate to your stories.. the emotions that you portray in your stories are what common people go through in their day to day life..
Amidst all the intense drama your story is like a breath of fresh air..
keep writing such beautiful stories..

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@Pqwert207

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#132

wow dat was a lovely story

Geet s very realistic

Loved maans love for gdet

Shruthi s really a citie piee

Superb concept

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maancrazy

@maancrazy

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#133

Thank you, thank you, thank you ! Absolutely love the update ! This Geet is so spunky ! She came across as arrogant and shallow initially but she's not afraid to accept and rectify her mistakes and that's an admirable quality!

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vrsharma

@vrsharma

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#134

Wovvv
It's amazing
I loved the story

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Cartoon.Buff

@Cartoon.Buff

Inactive

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Posted: 7 years ago

#135

Got to read it finally!

A very beautiful story! I'm happy I saved it for the weekend.

Although I was a little miffed with Geet in the beginning for thinking so highly of herself and hurting Maan like that, but I came to love her character the most. So truthful, transparent and pure at heart. No malice, no ego, just like a child, speaks whatever comes to her mind. I also admire her courage, to accept her mistake and speak to Maan's parents.

In fact, I loved all the characters, especially Maan's (needless to say), Tara, Shruti and both the fathers.

I am glad Maan's father understood and accepted Geet's forwardness so well, treating her as his own daughter.

All in all a very nice, fun story with a message subtly conveyed.

Also, I loved the way you wrote the dialogues in Hindi, with a Bihari touch to them..

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samanvi

@samanvi

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#136

Really sorry for the late comments

Chapter 4

Maan sees Geet again

very impressed with her behaviour

but disappointed she doesn't acknowledge him

mother and sister in law teasing him about a proposal

hr rejects it but finally see her pic

it is his bathroom dancer

he is so happy

lovely song selection 👍🏼

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samanvi

@samanvi

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#137

Chapter 5

Geet gets a proposal

rejects it because he is a PO in a bank

wants an higher ranking profession

was really disappointed

but again maybe there is a reason

Mamaji's behavior towards them effected her in some way

loved Maans family

felt so bad for him

what a heart breaking rejection 💔

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samanvi

@samanvi

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#138

Chapter 6

Geet's friend is also amazed she rejected Maan

now she is going to become a PO

joins a coaching institute for the exams

Maan teaches there

destiny made them meet again

she realises what a clever and focused person he is

and an awesome teacher

Poonam having a crush and Geet all J

lift on a rainy night

jealous Maan

her breakdown with stress

his reassuring her

his helping the student in hard times

his handling of Poonam;s infatutation

new found respect and love in her heart ❤️

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samanvi

@samanvi

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#139

Chapter 7

Geet cleared the exam

Maan is in her thoughts a lot

her texting him thanks

ufff his reply

who is this ?

that must have hurt

then Sheetal saying he is getting propsals

all the past scenes make her think hard

now she wants to marry the PO guy 😊

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samanvi

@samanvi

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#140

Chapter 8

awesome reactions by Geet's parents

so real

she pleads with her aunt

but learns they are seriously considering someone else

loved the way she went to talk to his family

beautifully written part 👏

the way Maan finds out she came for him

his rejecting her and refusing to go meet her

her waiting for him

the disappointment ,,,,her tears

he finally came 😃

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