Twisted True Love MG- part-6 pg-36 April 19 - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations on the new story dearie. A fabulous start. Pari is so so self centred and mean who is only interested in her needs...poor Maan...he is being criticised by everyone except his Mum...Be it Pari, her father or his own father...Its time that Maan proves his worth and himself to everyone...I hope that this rejection, Maan searches deep within himself what he wants to with his life and comes to a decision...Geet's entry is going to be very interesting. Based on the CS, both of them seem to be opposites for now...Let's see how the opposites come together in a union of a lifetime...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nefret19

Congratulations on the new story dearie. A fabulous start. Pari is so so self centred and mean who is only interested in her needs...poor Maan...he is being criticised by everyone except his Mum...Be it Pari, her father or his own father...Its time that Maan proves his worth and himself to everyone...I hope that this rejection, Maan searches deep within himself what he wants to with his life and comes to a decision...Geet's entry is going to be very interesting. Based on the CS, both of them seem to be opposites for now...Let's see how the opposites come together in a union of a lifetime...


thank u dear
for geet's entry u have to wait
only for few mins😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TwinFlames

Pari is so self centered.. Poor maan.. He actually lvd her, & wanted to surprise her.. & isne ye kia


aur bechari ne dil hi tod diya

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 1

Maan and Pari are childhood friends and he has fallen in love with her
but she rejects him because she feels he is useless someone who needs his father's money
and she cannot live like that she tells Maan he will always be her best friend only
Maan is heart broken but then again its good he did not mention about his software company to Pari otherwise he would never truly have known what she feels about him
I hope he does not turn rude or anything
I'm now waiting on Geet's entry to see what will happen


thank you dear for liking
for maan's reaction u don't have u wait much
this maan is unique so his reaction bhi alag hi hoga sabse

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aaj suraj kis disha se nikla...
Preety update karing...
Yeh kaise hogay
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

Aaj suraj kis disha se nikla...

Preety update karing...
Yeh kaise hogay



OYE MATLAB KYA HAI TERA
ek tarh video ek tarf update
machine samjha hai kya mujhe
don't forget kal pdf bhi di thi maine 😡
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations on new story !!
Beautiful Banner
Interesting preface and fab character sketch


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting start
Liked it!! Well penned
Maan's parents intro and characterization is similar to that of typical parents. Maan's father was concerned about his son's future whilst Maan's mother was in favor of his son's attitude and behavior. Maan proposed Pari and confessed his love for her but pari being self centered person rejected him apropos to his languid deportment and his dependency on his father's money made her reject his proposal. Maan was left heartbroken.
Looking forward to the next update
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
nice updteee maan proposed pari bt she rejected him as she dont want to marry a person who depends on his father money.everyone thinks maan as a useless person except his mom.BT maan owns a software company he wants share wth pari . she broken maans heart waiting for d nxt updteee
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Posted: 7 years ago
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maan 0ropsed pari but she rejected beciz she things him useless thank God maan is only fr geet 😃

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