Clandestine~ #Thread 1* Maaneet FF Maan Geet[T2 opened]

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: priyankadwivedi
Nice update.. but geet is getting engaged to maan cousin... Love maan character... Soft n innocent...

Aww, thanks for loving Maan's CS!!

Thank you for your nice comment!!

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: Doracake
Wow superb update
Geet is such a tyrant

Love this story

Waiting for next

Hahahha Tyrant, is she??

You are yet to see the ruckus she is yet to create!! 😆

Thank you so much sweets for loving this story and your superb comment!! 😳

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: taahir004
Character Sketch is very Interesting

Thank you very much for liking the CS!! 😳

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: Roopa_1
Awesome baby... Loved it...
Hahhaha. . Geet threatening her friends to do her homework... As expected geet is gundi ... 😆🤣 d for dayan ... It really meant for geet now ... But that cute little geet is adorable baby .. I loved her picturisation .. Waisa laga jaise mein waha hoon aur vo sab dekh rahi hoon ... 😳 But yeh kya 😲 She called maan bhaiya ???? Godd ... Haha maan ko acha nahin laga .. Wajah kuch aur hi ho phir bhi maan ko bura laga na 😆😉 And why maan started hating parties from then ?? What might be the reason ? Her society , people affected geet a lot .. She stopped dreaming and started concentrating in building future ... I liked it ... Seems like geet is very storng in this 😃 And the person whom geet had crush is maan ??? I feel that its maan .. Because the way you described his personality i badly feel that its maan ... Now her alliance is fixed with ayaan??? 😲 This is shocking... Sad that geet lost her mother Y mohinder is hell bent on making geets marriage ??? She is very young na ... Even geet is against her marriage .. Lol she thinks that ayaan is too perfect without any defects ...😆 Ayaan is a dentist so its common for dentists to show their teeth 😆 no offence ... 😆
Natural feel aaraha hain mereko. .. Loved it go the core ...
Precap is very interesting waiting

My baby!!🤗

Wow!! 👏 You know how much I love your comments due to the expressive way you write them?? It just gives so much positivity in the heart and motivates me so much!!

Aww you loved the little Geet!! Isn't she adorable!!

Hahaha yeah she called Maan as bhaiya, What do you expect?? He is 7 years elder than her so bhaiya hi bulayegi naa!! But everyone seems to have sadma on this!! 😆

Maan hating parties - Because he had to babysit Geet!! 😆

Glad that you had a natural feel though it was unintentional from my side!! 🤣 Chalo kabhi kabhi aisa bhi ho toh kiya baat hain!!😳

Thank you so so so very much for this amazing comment and loving this story so much!!

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 7 years ago

#365

Interesting prologue. Geets hatred seems childish. I can imagine she might have given into the kiss because that gif at the end was apt for the situation. So Dev is her boyfriend as Geet says or is she bluffing so Maan backs out. Maan seems little patient here in the start but at the end when he said swollen lips.. damn totally my type. Shall read next and comment soon.

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 7 years ago

#366

Part 1

Maan really is an introvert from childhood. one question who called him Bhaiyya... doll like creature is Geet as Dev called her D for doll???? i might have missed a line or two if this is already clarified sorry for that.

Geet is right, koi itna perfect kaisa ho sakta hai... tat guy dont do any kind of nasha but he might have other bad habits like betting. but seems Maan ka relative/cousin hai. so trusting Maa, he is clean.

I loved the way Geet try to dominate everything from the childhood whether for doing homework with the help of others or getting answers from Maan.

Is Maan giving respect to Geet??? Even in prologue he was doing the same. But sadly Geet is annoyed as she is still younger and dont like to feel older than him. I hope looking at Maan's nature Geet might start calling him Maan ji than Maan...

Superb update!

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maaneetcraze

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Posted: 7 years ago

#367

I am already waiting baby

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: manjeet6
Awesome update
Loved Geet's dominate awtar she is bossing her friends
Maan is different in this story
Loved the concept

Is he different?? Will find out soon!!

Thank you very much sweets for your awesome comment!! 😳

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WaveTeal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: Soju.
Interesting prologue. Geets hatred seems childish. I can imagine she might have given into the kiss because that gif at the end was apt for the situation. So Dev is her boyfriend as Geet says or is she bluffing so Maan backs out. Maan seems little patient here in the start but at the end when he said swollen lips.. damn totally my type. Shall read next and comment soon.

Hi welcome to Clandestine 🤗

hahha glad that you liked the swollen lips statement!!

Ok shall wait for your feedback!!

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing sweets!! 😳