Entangled Marriage!!* NOTE@page63*Moving Out - Page 10

Congratulations again on another new story dearie:):):) The prologue was hilarious with the shopkeeper yaar:):):) Very excited by the CS of Maan & Geet , their story of arranged marriage and plot:):):) Hahahahahaha:):):) Its going to be a journey of discovery of themselves and each other together hand in hand in this arranged marriage of theirs. Super super excited for it my dear...All the best:):):)

interesting both are somewhat similar it will be interesting to see this story and their characters going forward

Congrats for new story
Loved the prologue
Awesome CS

Congrate for the new story

Prologue@
👏 what a superb prologue
Hilarious start
Maan is ghurofying some shopkeeper n geet is also with him
Both maan n geet r shy n less talkative they r in a confusing state
On the top of that this condom thing he he he i can imagine the poor state of that bichara shopkeeper
That gunga dialoge i m on floor
🤣 n geet even said ha lol
Its awkward 4 maaneet bt super funny 4 us readers
Geet self talk is hilarious she is funny hashtag tukka for the win rofl
She is hestitated 2 touch him
She likes him? Seems like she does because of that nain matka line
They are watching a movie n geet is irked with the heroine's talkative nature lekin maan calls the heroine sweet
Oh is geet jealous already n maan blurts that he loves the name geet
Seems like maan 2 like geet
Geet didn't want 2 marry maan? Interesting
I loved every bit of this
N u say u didn't want 2 write arrange marriage stories? U sd knw that we love ur unique writing
I m waiting eagerly 4 both ur new story ud
Thx 4 pm

interesting story...
maan and geet same to same...
geet is shy types and so is maan...
update soon...

Originally posted by: AYAZU12

congrats for the new story dear 😃
👏

Thank you so much!!