Yaariyaan #4 - Page 98

Chap 31

Love the new edit, maan as a caring father is so a dream lol, falling for the guy lol
Tell me about it lol, I spend the entire day with a nephew at times and then as soon as his parents come back, I'm forgotten and lost lol. Selfish - true that lol but love the kids

Oh Geet has the best in laws and husband, sometimes I feel one needs to go the hardships to cherish the blessings in life likewise soon Geet would realise how lucky she is in life.

Maan is such a supportive husband, even saving her from ira lol
I really like that they've accepted one another mentally as husband and wife
Aww Tanvi is so cute

I really do like this Maan, he should be the prototype for fathers and husband. Wait for men in general lol such a honest and caring guy. I like that geets falling though slowly but falling in love

Great parts and beautifully written Rashmi
Waiting for 32

Sorry for slow reading

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Originally posted by: Twenty1st

Chap 34

Maan has this weird way of joking about everything, i just hope Geet doesn't take it wrongly. sometimes its good to come clean, like share her important and equality without the use of any blackmail jokes. However having said that, i still love this Maan for the clean heart he withholds.

Gosh no ways, is she so gullible. even i know he is fasting for Geet then how can she not realise. Finally she realised that Maan is fasting, see i told Maan to not hide behind falses and jokes, had Geet known then he could have broken his fast immediately instead of this lol but allz well that ends well. At least Geet now realises the truth. Atleast he knows he was wrong, ok not wrong but stupid to hide the truth lol

Both are stubborn cows lol, why cant they just admit they like each other. Fools, i tell you. BIG TIME FOOLS😡😆 and cute that i cant even be angry lol

Maan should just come clean, he fell for her first so he should declare his feelings first lol. Ok i'll come clean i just like the guy accepting his feelings first lol, its like my norm lol. Please tell me she confesses on his birthday, please or else yeh maan to nikamma hai (please tell me that word deosnt eman anything strange, i was told nikamma means useless, so please tell me its right lol)

Originally posted by: gorgeousqueen.

haha you used the word Nikamma for useless maan..well it was right

Nikamma means not exactly useless but nakamma comes for the man who doesn't do anything or doesn't want to

well i m really enjoying your comments Sophie..They are treat to read as you involve your personal things in them😆😆

Originally posted by: Twenty1st

chap 35

Struggling with feelings, thats a good thing, right? at least she'll spell out her love for Maan soon, ok Maan seriously needs to cut the friendly speech, poor girl is so confused of how he feels. I can blame him because blaming her is good as nothing lol, she's way to naive for someone who used to bully and blackmail lol

Finally the man decides to drop hints lol, thats good. hopefullty itll make it easier to Geet to understand but really im hoping for a miracle lol

Aur shirt peh-na-wo lol, now both have currents running though lol

Wow Geet has done so much for Maan for his birthday, its all nice and all, but all she had to do is say i love you, that would have equated to all the things she did lol. Yep being a little lazy lol. But jokes to one side, i do not want to discredit Geet's work or thoughts, it was a wonderful surprise. I just hope maan realises and voices his own feelings rather than waiting for her.

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thank you for the pw and wonderfully written