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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 7 years ago

#921

Chapter 27

In all this, I liked how Maan's parent's reacted to the situation...I mean had they not been so supportive, open-minded and acceptive of Maaneet relationship, none of this would have happened...they truly are nice people...it takes so much to bring around a positive change in the society...

Supriya is right...Maan would have definitely run away from home if they had decided to get them married in the first place...

loved how Maan-Tanvi-Rano teamed up to tease Geet but it is so nice to see that Geet has accepted Maan ad Tanvi's father...one step at a time...for her to accept him as her husband, he has to be a little patient with her...am sure that day is also not far away...

ok, this would be the first time when someone puts a ring on his girlfriend first and then the would-be wife...LOL...that was cute

loved the whole ceremony...Maan's mother is still a kid at heart...LOL...

Tanvi is slowly learning new words...that is nice...

baby is growing up real fast...

and Maan does not leave any chance to tease Geet in the name of Tanvi...that is cute...

Ira is so sweet to arrange a surprise for them at the office...

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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#922

Chapter 27 :

Wow!!! Now I got it... that from where Maan has got such pure heart and attitude... Of course with every chapter I am loving this Maan even more... But in this one... It was Supriya who took my heart away...

The way she shut the mouths of their relatives and neighbours was heart touching... I really felt like asking God why can't we have people like her in reality as well...

It is most of the time women only who targets the characters of other women... The same was shown here also in the form of Mrs Khanna... But it actually takes a lot of courage to face such people and situations... and handle them with the head held high...

Beautifully written... Will be waiting for the next installment...😉

Thanks in advance😊

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#923

CH 27

Hats off to Maan,s mom who dealt with tede muh wale and lambi jubaan wale relatives and neighbours,😡 ye marraige functions mein meen mekh nikaalne he aate hai😡, Maan,s mom was right aise log na he aaye tu achha hai.😡 Don,t know Maan aur uske parents jaise log society mein kaha hote hai.😕 In all the preparation Maan was sensing Geet,s nervousness in their close proximity, I think Maan has a long way to go when his love will be reciprocated but in all this Maan and Tanvi cute antics always makes me smile. Maan put ring in Tanvi,s finger before Geet 😃 so cute. Maan,s mom asked Maan to kiss Geet,s hand which made Maaneet shocked and Tanvi jealous and possessive for Maan, loved it. Tanvi wished Maan Good Morning and Maan was on cloud nine and teasing Geet being the first witness of Tanvi every achievement. Maaneet received a very sweet welcome by their colleagues, loved it

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its_me

@its_me

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+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#924

Chapter 28 :

Geet's turmoil is understandable... She herself is a pure hearted person... And looking at the current circumstances she knows that there is no gain in this marriage for Maan... As she is not aware of Maan's feelings...

Like a true friend she is worried about her best friend... His well being his happiness... When it comes to their children the parents don't mind in being selfish even... And So being a mother she knows that this is the best for her daughter... But still... Her humanity is not letting her be in peace...

The entire ceremony of wedding and reception was described so perfectly... Especially loved those morphed pics... They were describing the stories so beautifully on its own...

But the most beautiful part of the entire update was the cute dance between little Tanvi and her Pa... Although Maan was enjoying his first dance with his newly wedded wife but the moment his cute princess expressed her desire to dance with her father... he obliged wholeheartedly... Showing that she has captured the most special place in his heart...

Thanks for writing and sharing

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its_me

@its_me

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#925

Chapter 29 :

This is what I like the most about this story... You portray real life situations... The way Rano was hesitant to handover sleeping Tanvi... I felt so connected to this scene... I myself have seen and heard that whenever it's a second marriage of a girl or rather a mother she is expected to sacrifice her own child... So that she can step into her new life...

"Aunty.. This marriage is meant to make a family not to separate Tanvi from Geet..Tanvi is going to sleep with her parents only" ... These lines of Maan have made me fall for him all over again... And so I must have read these lines more than at least 10 times...😆

The way Maan tried to comfort Geet and also to let her settle on her own as well as kept on giving her space... All these things are indicating that ... the day when she would start feeling his love... is not far off

At times it gets difficult for me to express that how much in love I am with this story...

Thank you so much for writing on such beautiful concept

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#926

Part 28

Kuch toh log kahenge...logo ka kaam hai kehna...

the first few lines of the part reminded me of this song...it is so true...people will always talk and when we stop giving importance to their rubbish then they will stop...hypocrites...

Happy for Maan...for Tanvi too...

for Geet too...she is not realizing it now but then would, later on, realize the happiness she is going to get after getting married to Maan...

loved how Supriya has always made Geet comfortable...they share a lovely bond...

I liked how you mentioned that Maaneet's relationship or rather Maan's love progressed with understanding and not on outer appearances...loved that thought...

Maan was clearly clean bowled by her beauty as a bride...

Awwie Baby Tanvi slept through the marriage...LOL...

she missed her Boyfriend's marriage..hehe

lovely part..

Tanvi and Maan's dance was cute but for the first time I enjoyed Maaneet's dance moments more..loved how you depicted Geet's worry about Maan and Maan's happiness over getting Geet as his forever...

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#927

Part 29

You made me fall in love with Maan when he asked Rano that Tanvi is going to sleep with her parents...best words ever...simple and short...he expressed his love for Tanvi and I guess if Geet still had any apprehensions about this marriage, I am sure all must be clear by now...

loved how you have portrayed both of their's feelings...his excitement over the fact that she is his wife now and her nervousness of getting bound to him in a new relation...

Maan has his unique ways to make Geet understand stuff...LOL...

Pillow walls...and Maan was wrong when he said that his gf will be wall between them rather his gf is the binding force between them...:)

Yar that disgusting Dev,...infants need their parents but that man...arghh...I dont want to spoil my mood by commenting about that man...but it is quite justified that Geet is going to make comparisons now...from her previous marriage and now with Maan...

loved Maaneet moments...how he makes her comfortable was sweet

am sure Maan would love the kheer made by his love

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#928

@pooja and @Sahiba

Thank u so much girls for your awesome blossom comments..

You have forced me tho thin if yaariyaan is this much special?❤️

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#929

Originally posted by: gorgeousqueen.
@pooja and @Sahiba
Thank u so much girls for your awesome blossom comments..
You have forced me tho thin if yaariyaan is this much special?❤️

Yes Rashmi...it is special...and for several reasons...

Maan and Tanvi...the bond they share...

How selfless is Maan's love for Tanvi and now Geet too...how he has been a true friend and support to Geet...

and above all I absolutely loved Maan's parents and how open-mindedly they accepted Maaneet's relationship when they clearly knew that Geet and Maan does not share any love relation and they knew how their son has to make so many compromises but still they brought about a different and positive change in the society by not only getting them married but also supporting Geet's parents against their own relatives...

Lovely and progressive story

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Rashmi

@Ggorgeousqueen

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#930

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

Yes Rashmi...it is special...and for several reasons...
Maan and Tanvi...the bond they share...
How selfless is Maan's love for Tanvi and now Geet too...how he has been a true friend and support to Geet...
and above all I absolutely loved Maan's parents and how open-mindedly they accepted Maaneet's relationship when they clearly knew that Geet and Maan does not share any love relation and they knew how their son has to make so many compromises but still they brought about a different and positive change in the society by not only getting them married but also supporting Geet's parents against their own relatives...
Lovely and progressive story

Thanks sahiba for showing this much love..

Yeahh I must say that this story can be accepted as reforming subject for this society where not only a man but the girl and the families too should be open minded to bring the change in society😳

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