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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Aapka evening kab hota hai madam...

Thoda rehem karo mera kal paper hai

Jaldi update karo...

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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 7 years ago

#73

And it ends...

And same like always I don't know what to say,

Ends make me speechless

It ended in a sweet way, though maan's way around Vicky was cunning...😆

I hoped for a bit more secret romance... Hehe greedy human nature!!!

See u after 28 now in other threads...

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seema saini

@HateMee

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

Nothing was fishy

Sorry Maan main evin shak kar rahi thi...

Hawww Maan kitna chalu hai Geet v Car v aur kisi ko pta v ni chla k they were together...

Lovely cute sweet aur last main ittu sa romantic end

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Tarana

@TaranaGeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#75

What a sweet end, wish this lasted longer. Your writing is so amazing, it truly immerses is as readers in the story and we can inly wish to keep reading the all in one romance- sweet, bitter, salty and sour :)

Loved the part- Geet should be spread generously! 🤣

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#76

ahh it had ended! did it have 2 end???? thanks 4 sharing this fab FS with us! was wishing for more! I guess there will be no epilogue???

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 7 years ago

#77

thanks 4 da pm! splendid update! excellently written! Khuranas are missing Geet while Maaneet r secretly enjoying their romance! Loved their banter! Maan is indeed sly! liked how he took advantage of Vicky and his request! Khuranas happy that Maaneet together! nice that Maan used Geet's words! great end! 👏

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Sowmiya

@anu5

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#78

Lovely ending dear

Liked it !!

Maan's family members were missing Geet to the core and were sulking. But Maaneet were enjoying their secret romance. As anticipated Maan feeling love with Geet and was enjoying their courtship. Loved the way Maan dealt with Vicky and took advantage of Vicky. Khuranas were happy for Maaneet .

Thanks for sharing ur writings dear.

:))

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AYAZU12

@AYAZU12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#79

awesome update so maan finally fell irrecoverably in love with geet and he tricked vicky to get to drive his sports car hehe they shared their first kiss in the car...loved the update thnx for the pm...