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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Nice update dear
liked it !!
Geet scared Maan with her kidnapping act. Maaneet were lost in their world. Liked their crazy dance sequence and nice song. Maaneet were almost got caught but Maan managed the situation. Lipstick scene was funny. Nice pics!!
Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
read all parts again
sorry for late comment

lovely story
fabulous updates
maan n geet both are sweet n passionate

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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Awesome very nice update dear
Lovely it
Waiting for next update dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
awesome update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Maaneet romance...☺️😉...Maan fools his brother's men who came to look for Geet...👏👏👏...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75

Part 5:
Geet siting with her mother, brother & bhabhi...
They asking Geet why she went dushman place...
Geet: I went for romaning ..
Meena: Priya make arrangements Tomorrow Geet getting married ..
Priya shook head.,.
Geet went inside room..
The boy veeru went behind Geet..
Veeru: oh my hona wali biwi u look so se...he about to say but he got tight slap.. Yes from Geet...
Geet: oh mr whatever u are stay away from me or else remember this slap... Geet walk out ...'
Maan waiting for Geet ..
Geet came out Maan drag her in Maane..
Both under sky Maan gazing her & he caress her face..
Both had passionate eyelock..
Maan move towards her lips..
Both enjoyed for long..
Background music play..
Poore chaand
Ae poore chand..

Full moon,
O full moon..

Poore chaand ki ye aadhi raat hai
Tere chehre pe aa ke ruk jati hai

This is mid of full moon night,
It comes and stops at your face..

Jeeti hai utni
Jeeti hai utni jitni guzar jaati hai
Pure chaand ki yeh aadhi raat hai
Pure chand ki yeh aadhi

It [the night] lives just as much as it passes..
[that is, every moment passed of the night is lived to the full]
This is mid of a full moon night..

Gaalon ke halke se mod pe
Do pal ko palkein odh ke
Sharmaati hai, jhuk jaati hai
Tere chehre pe aake ruk jaati hai

On the slight turn of the cheeks,
it covers itself with the eyelids for a moment,
feels shy, and bows down [with the eyelids, as the eyes close]
it comes and stops at your face..

Jeeti hai utni
Jeeti hai utni jitni ghuzar jaati hai
Poore chaand ki ye aadhi raat hai
Poore chand ki ye aadhi

Poore chaand
Ae poore chand

Maneet lost on each other ..
Both lay on floor ..
Geet on Maan chest..
Maan: Geet don't u feel scared ..
Geet: for what?
Maan: Our family enimes what if something happen?
Geet: Stupib man when u are with me then why I will scared..
Maan smiled & kiss on her forehead..
Suddenly they heard gun firing sound..
They stood up & saw ..
Geet brother Gautam Shoot Maan brother Shailu ..
Maneet both get shocked...
Maan got tears & he burn with anger...


Geet still didn't came out..
Geet brother run from their ...
Maan rush to his brother ..
He was already dead..
Geet try to console Maan..
Maan shove Geet hand..
Suddenly Maan Maane people came so Geet hide behind tree..
All went from their with Maan..
Geet went home..
Maan burn with anger ...
His Maane people secretly went & kill Geet brother...
Geet came out from room & saw it..
Geet got tears...
Meena: I know Its Maan work ..he take revenge of his brother..
Geet shocked..

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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
Woho what a update superb as usual i am already fan of your writing😳 😃 poor man geet unki happiness sadness mein badal gaye hope everything get sort out soon
Thanks for pm
Happy new year once again 🥳 lots of love sis keep writing like that always 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
Nice update!!
Loved maaneet moments..
Oh no, her brother killed his bro n he got angry n then his people killed her bro..Geet is shocked knowing maan is behind..
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
Nice update...thanks for pm...good song and images
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Nice update dear
Liked it !!
Geet's brother killed Maan's brother and in name of revenge Maan's people killed Geet's brother. Geet was livid knowing Maan is behind her brother's death. Nice song and pics.
Thanks for the pm!
:))
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
Awesome update
Like it
Keep it up

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