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Posted: 7 years ago
song@
Hasi ban gaye
What a beautiful song its my favorite
I loved how you interjected this with the whole beautiful update
Awsome
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for the pm! will comment tomorrow!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Iptida



<font color="#009999">Specially for you roopa and Khawish am doing this!!😃</font>


I love you so much
Thanx a lot
I was so down 2 day n reading this just made my day
Reallu thanks iptida
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Roopa_1

Part 49

My heart goes for maan in this update ...his pain , his emotions , his craving for geet made me forget all the awful things he said to geet ... Its good that dadi is with maan otherwise his position would be very bad .. I am in shock .. Ithna bada shock .. Pinky said all those things in shopping mall on dadis insistence and dadi sending all those recordings to maan .. Ohhh myyy goddd ... This is fab ... Basically you are revealing everything one by one ... Hats off👏i am awed didu ... So even pinky doesnt know the whereabouts of geet ... I loved this one alottt this sentence made my heart flutter "he flared her wings by the abhorrent wildfire fueled with his greivious experience " this sentence is ringing in my ears till i fini shed reading ... you are such a brilliant writer ..👏. Maan maan ... Cant even see maan in such state didu ... Its really depressing for me .. His suffering from childhood made him into this ... Thats soo sad that his mother left him when he was ten years ...and after sameera betrayal which is till unknown to us made him to hate women ... But after the entry of geet he changed his view and when he started trusting women this happend .. So we cant even blame him ... Its because of the things he faced ...ohh now got everything clear so that reports was of mrs arora when geet admitted her in hospital this mistake happend ...
Even geet is suffering a lott .. She is controling herself and questioning maan that y he didnt believed her ... Meera discarded her mobile and the thing which is left is memory card of geet which has maaneets selfies and the song sung by maan ...geet is trying to hate him but still unable to ..the way she is inserting memory card and listening his voice and looking their pics really sad .. . Both souls are suffering .. Geets mind want to hate him to the core but still her heart beats for him ... Ohh godd its just a dream .. For a second i thought it to be real ...😕 The emotions are very well explained didu ... I am able to feel each and everything ... You are truly an amazing writer ...
I loved each and every bit of this chapter didu ... Really this one is fab ... Lovee youu soo much back to back updates ...😳


You know you just said evrything i wanted 2 say
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing updates
Maan is regretting for his deeds but I'm feeling sad for Maan because situation of his life is made him this that he can't believe anyone
Geet is missing Maan terribly she wants ki wo Maan ko bhul jaaye but her heart beats for Maan only
I loved Daadi ma so much the she is careing Maan my heart goes with her
Loved the twist Geet gets her job aur wo bhi kaha Maan ke office Mai

Loved the precap
Beautifully written
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update !!!
Jus loved it !!!
The way maan was pairing everything out to Daadima was great !!
Daadi n her plans !!!
Ufffooo !!!
Wow
Geets monologue was AMAzing !!
Geet joining in new office!!?
Wat is Dev doing there!???
It's maans office ?
Meeras plan ?!?
Is daadi involved!!?
M getting confused!!!
Nwzz maaneet ka Milan ho Gaya !!
Abb bus!!
Waiting for next part!!
How's ll maan Manaofy geet
Update soon !!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey Ipti
Sorry for my late comments...😳

I had previously read PART 47-48 and hit the like button but couldnt comment...hence to begin with..PART 47-48...

AMAZING 👏

You had depicted both Geet and Maan's state of mind and POV so very beautifully.
Geet is really really hurt to the level where she has made up her mind to move on out of his life... He tries to stop her saying that "Some one promised me she will not leave me"...and she lifelessly answers him back "That someone lied". Rally liked this bit a lot...If he cared for the promise that she had taken, then what about his promises towards her?

Surprisingly he still has that Ego which didnt permit him to tell Sorry or even stop her. But once she left, the emptyness of his home really hit him hard he moves towards the Airport in look for Geet and Meera. And Meera before throwing away her sim, she sends the voice chat that Geet had with Meera and Pinky...Geet was so very chirpy, happy telling them how much she loved her husband and I really got emotional at that bit. Geet was just enacting the reverse of what is going on in her mind for Dev and Maan...OMG...really, what you see and what you hear is not always true .

Now, Maan truely realises his mistake and when he reached airport, he had already missed the flight and to his dismay there's no information about any passenger who has boarded by name of GEET and MEERA. His world has come to a standstill.. He has been madly logging in to his system and trying to track her FB id if atall she loggs in...and also trying to track his and meera's mobile.

Now, Maan finds some peace only with Daadi...She is the only one who knows in and out of his life...the true reasons for his behaviour, some secrets about his parents and above all SAMEERA...She is the only one by his side..she really pities Maan's state of mind. She is unable to console him but still she does her best...On one side, I really feel pity to see this remorsefull Maan...but I dont want Geet to forgive him that easily.

Will post my comment for 49-50 a little later.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Hey Ipti

Sorry for my late comments...😳

I had previously read PART 47-48 and hit the like button but couldnt comment...hence to begin with..PART 47-48...

AMAZING 👏



Will post my comment for 49-50 a little later.

Waiting for that as well sweet sissy!!
And thanks a lot for the lovely comment!! 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: solaceMG

Note@ oh my god iptiii
What an ud
Now evrrything is so clear
Each things r unraveling one by one
The sneak peek why you didn't say anything now i get
Why this story is called predestined now i get
I will give you res very soon by 2night
Baby thanks a lot for the note
Page 100? No big deal for me!
Thank you so much for updating even when you are so busy! Love you so much
This is officially my favorite story now

Awww Baby!!
I love you so much for all your words of kindness!
Thanks for boosting me yaar!! Mwaahh!!🤗
PD is my favorite story as well!! 🤣
Edited by Iptida - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Waiting eagerly for sneak peak 😛😉

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